The timers in this are... poorly executed in my opinion. The only thing they seem to test is reading speed. 5 minutes is waaay more than enough to give you time to make an informed decision so it doesn't provoke a quick reaction under pressure from the reader, instead it is more of a challenge for you to read, digest, and understand the long and drawn out prose that accompanies the timer. A fast reader will have minutes left on the clock to carefully consider options, while a slow reader will be left with much less time unless they skim-read the page. I don't really see the point in testing reading speed so I can only assume that this is a mishandled mechanic.
Ideally, a timer would be on its own page with only necessary text. The decision you must make, the timer, and the choices you have.
I don't wanna sound like I'm being nitpicky, but your feet/inches - centimeter conversions are pretty off. 175 is about 5'9", 180 is about 5'11" 178 is about 5'10", etc.
I was pretty confused when I saw 5'7" - a height that is shorter than me - compared to 175 cm - a height that is taller than me. Otherwise, super excited to see where this goes
This is one of the best IFs I've ever seen and had the pleasure of reading. I sincerely hope that it gets finished and doesn't end up like the dozens that never do.
Nah same, cause that's what anyone would think. With an actual in game timer, it seems to be telegraphing to use that, not the option that seems to be going against the timer.
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The timers in this are... poorly executed in my opinion. The only thing they seem to test is reading speed. 5 minutes is waaay more than enough to give you time to make an informed decision so it doesn't provoke a quick reaction under pressure from the reader, instead it is more of a challenge for you to read, digest, and understand the long and drawn out prose that accompanies the timer. A fast reader will have minutes left on the clock to carefully consider options, while a slow reader will be left with much less time unless they skim-read the page. I don't really see the point in testing reading speed so I can only assume that this is a mishandled mechanic.
Ideally, a timer would be on its own page with only necessary text. The decision you must make, the timer, and the choices you have.
Any chance of a romance with Viento? Because he's way more likeable than anyone else at this point.
THIS IS SO COOL AHHHHHHHHHHH
this is fucking AMAAAZZZINNNGGGG. the efforts are evidently there and the demo was already super interesting.
I don't wanna sound like I'm being nitpicky, but your feet/inches - centimeter conversions are pretty off. 175 is about 5'9", 180 is about 5'11" 178 is about 5'10", etc.
I was pretty confused when I saw 5'7" - a height that is shorter than me - compared to 175 cm - a height that is taller than me. Otherwise, super excited to see where this goes
This is one of the best IFs I've ever seen and had the pleasure of reading. I sincerely hope that it gets finished and doesn't end up like the dozens that never do.
<3 I cant wait for Dameion >3> don't he sound familiar <3? I want kiss him hug and pamper him and other things >///3///> ^////^
this is amazing, I love with how many options for our MC, thank you for putting a lot of work for it. Keep it up<333
is the only genital option supposed to be a penis or is this a bug 😭
i'm wating for that answer lol
The options are based upon which genitalia you select. So if you select male genitals, the penis will the only option that appears.
Bitch I'm so dumb T-T
I literally waited ten second in the timer I'm so fukicjg nmdumb
Nah same, cause that's what anyone would think. With an actual in game timer, it seems to be telegraphing to use that, not the option that seems to be going against the timer.