The story itself seems a bit messy to me, the best way for you and seeing the game would be to first write how you want the story to be and then go deeper, there are also 2 problems, well, more like 1 problem and a recommendation, the problem would be the menu that you have to be yes or yes in a conversation and the suggestion is that you try to implement a minigame that is not searching because in my case it ended up being tedious for me that is all I have to keep saying I hope my opinion helps you improve and good game.
Edit: It would also be good if it were translated into other languages since I speak Spanish if you want and in the end you do the translating thing I help you translate it and if the story ends up being long you could put events like fnaf 2 and things like that in the long term of course I don't think it will be done in the short term I hope you do very well see you later.
For a demo there's alot of stuff! I have played full games who have less stuff. Overall a nice experience, but i did learn what futa means. Can't wait for future releases
cool, love what you have so far. I think renpy's the perfect tool for the game you're making. Art is meh but still decent. Really looking forward to updates!
I love the demo the pixel art is some of the best I have seen out of an nsfw game. One of the only problems I have is the pacing. You can meet and talk to animatronics like youve already met them but then you meet them for the first time? Our character also just starts acting like all of this is normal and is really too forward with things for my taste. Also please make the futa thing optional im not a big fan of it especially on foxy
so question before I play is the entire game Futa or is it skippable? also is it certain characters with no way around it like how foxy was a futa only character in five nights at fuzzboobs?
never mind found out foxy is the futa one :( tho i apperciate the warning and the skip before it happens. in the future tho can we get a non futa scene shes my favorite but the only dick i like is my own
really loved this game honestly i enjoyed it alot and can't wait to see more in the future though i did find 2 out of 3 of foxy's coins one in the kitchen pot and the other in the bathroom trash where is the third one? cause i swear I've looked everywhere and can't seem to find it anywhere
There are several typos, in the intro as well, that should be fixed. When getting the microphone, it skips the text with Freddina about needing the microphone. Then you get your scene from her at 6 AM, the time jumps to 7 AM which then breaks the game if you want to end the shift, as in you try to end the shift and are then transported to the puppet meeting scene every time you press that button. Then there is also the problem of triggering the sex scene with Foxy, before the beer quest. The beer quest surprises the player by revealing her to be a futa, but that surprise feels wrong then there has already been a sex scene.
The cleaning spray quest does not seem to run. Or at least it seems that buying the spray before getting it causes problems that makes it impossible to run. More uncertain if that really is an issue or if I am doing something wrong.
I am a bit confused why the outside pizzeria pixel art in the intro looks so detailed. It seems like a completely different pixel artist. No offense meant to the other art. I am not sure if you are doing the art yourself or if you have an artist, though I would recommend improving the art as that would be a bigger draw for your game then, as you have a lot of competition.
Another thing to touch up upon is the game itself. It is fairly simple with some choices here and there, but overall it might be too simple. The interactions aren't as interesting as they could be. Maybe having some impactful choices could help or maybe try having some events that bring interest. Hearing a noise in the guard room is interesting and sparks curiosity. Perhaps that could be utilized among other things.
Story wise, maybe having more clear relationships, rivalries and the like between the animatronics could be interesting. The aggressive Foxy definitely was the most interesting out of the characters, though she could use more of a thorough line. Like seeing her demeanor change from threatening to aggressive, to annoyed. Having her maybe warm up and become more playfully harsh.
Like I said, the writing feels a bit jumbled, so you would do well to think about the characters, their connections and how it develops. This could also lead to scenes with just two animatronics or even a threesome.
I have some suggestions and maybe bug reports after playing 0.3!
Suggestions: - Since puppet isnt being used so much as of right now, maybe she could also be used to guide on what you have to do, for example, if you don't know if you have everything in the update already, you can go to her and ask her something like "Is there anything I can do here?"
- I would like to able to touch every animatronic while they are recharging/sleeping on the stage, since they aren't doing anything, you could probably touch them without any consequences. Seeing as this was applied for Frederina, is it going to be a thing?
- Don't know if you're planning to do literally every animatronic possible in the game, but some Underrated ones would be Withered Chica and Scrap Baby.
(Possible) Bugs:
- You can repeat the Practice Sheet quest with bonnie as many times as you want. I don't know if this is a way to repeat her 5AM Storage Room Scene, or if it's a bug.
- The 7AM bug where you repeat the first meeting with Puppet still happens, but honestly it's not that big of a deal and you can just go back to your most recent save and fix it. (It's really hard to get to 7AM anyways).
Anyways, keep up the great work! The difference from 0.02 and 0.03 was pretty huge!
I second this. Giving Puppet a legit game purpose could be interesting. Her parts need to be expanded as there is little to her currently. The spying aspect in that one scene is interesting. Maybe voyeurism could be a part of her character as well? Also, would she ever find out that cum was used as lube? She did blow MC after all, so she could realize it is the same stuff afterwards. Perhaps she didn't notice it at first as it has been 10 years since she had sex, seeing how she was trapped. There is a chance she looks for MC and talks to him about it. Just to fill out the game more and make the place and its characters more interesting. It definitely would help if each of the animatronics had specific kinks too one could indulge in.
Also, now that I think about it, the pizza number quest is strange. Puppet has been trapped for 10 years and yet knows about night guards ordering pizza. Or maybe night guards ordered pizza 10 years ago, but then chances would be that the pizza place they used is out of business. Many things can happen in 10 years. That a number in in the dumpster is weird too. Why would the last night guard throw that number away? How is it still in the dumpster, seeing how the dumpster should get emptied regularly? It seems very contrived.
Now that I think about it, the pizzeria one works at it out of business too, so why are night guards hired for it? It would be a good thing to know about as I don't think it was explained in the intro. Is it currently not in use because of some circumstances and MC is only there to make sure no equipment is stolen? Is there a renovation planned that got delayed because of some circumstances? It is important that the story and lore is build.
I cant even figure out how to do anything, I've tried interacting with everything and i cant seem to find it, what should i do at the very start of the game?
So don't know if this is a bug or not, but I just downloaded the android version, finished the puppet scenes for night one I think, went to end my shift and it sent me to the beginning of freeing Puppet, don't know if it's a bug but figured I should let you know
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Where is the closet room?
is this still being worked on?
i think the dev is on vacation saw this in the discord btw
Dev is currently in school for a month
where last coin?
Where do you find the coins
one coin in the bin in the bathroom and one in the pot in the kitchen
Look at the tabled
Which table?
just keep clicking the tables next to the stage
I found a coin under a party hat
i cant go to the bathroom cuz i cant find it where is it
¿Cuando saldrá una actualización?
the creator of this game likes dudes LMAOAOOAOA ez w 1-0
Can someone tell me how much scenes there are and how much characters have?
5 characters and 9 scenes in total
Cheers
When will this get an update
Pls
They are
good game im excited for more puppet
The story itself seems a bit messy to me, the best way for you and seeing the game would be to first write how you want the story to be and then go deeper, there are also 2 problems, well, more like 1 problem and a recommendation, the problem would be the menu that you have to be yes or yes in a conversation and the suggestion is that you try to implement a minigame that is not searching because in my case it ended up being tedious for me that is all I have to keep saying I hope my opinion helps you improve and good game.
Edit: It would also be good if it were translated into other languages since I speak Spanish if you want and in the end you do the translating thing I help you translate it and if the story ends up being long you could put events like fnaf 2 and things like that in the long term of course I don't think it will be done in the short term I hope you do very well see you later.
Good game
WHere's Bonnie's papers? I looked on the wall and didn't see them. After a few nights I havent neeeded to help her but still
How do you get the papers
Change time to 5am, talk to Freddy on stage, ask about papers, order microphone, give to Freddy, she tells you where they are
There should be a option to disable futa.
a very good game！
I am liking the game so far.
When is the full release
can we disable futa?
anyone know where the practice sheet is?
never mind found it.
where is it man l cant find it
next to the stage the papers on the wall
Show pictures of where it is pls?
hange time to 5am, talk to Freddy on stage, ask about papers, order microphone, give to Freddy, she tells you where they are
For a demo there's alot of stuff! I have played full games who have less stuff. Overall a nice experience, but i did learn what futa means. Can't wait for future releases
cool, love what you have so far. I think renpy's the perfect tool for the game you're making. Art is meh but still decent. Really looking forward to updates!
Where is the practice paper for Bonnie btw
hange time to 5am, talk to Freddy on stage, ask about papers, order microphone, give to Freddy, she tells you where they are
I love the demo the pixel art is some of the best I have seen out of an nsfw game. One of the only problems I have is the pacing. You can meet and talk to animatronics like youve already met them but then you meet them for the first time? Our character also just starts acting like all of this is normal and is really too forward with things for my taste. Also please make the futa thing optional im not a big fan of it especially on foxy
Thank you! There is currently one futa scene with foxy that is skipable!
so question before I play is the entire game Futa or is it skippable? also is it certain characters with no way around it like how foxy was a futa only character in five nights at fuzzboobs?
never mind found out foxy is the futa one :( tho i apperciate the warning and the skip before it happens. in the future tho can we get a non futa scene shes my favorite but the only dick i like is my own
There is one futa scene that is skipable at the moment!
5 min in and im hooked great game man cant wait for more
really loved this game honestly i enjoyed it alot and can't wait to see more in the future though i did find 2 out of 3 of foxy's coins one in the kitchen pot and the other in the bathroom trash where is the third one? cause i swear I've looked everywhere and can't seem to find it anywhere
Next to foxy cove on the table under the party hat
thanks
It is an alright game.
There are several typos, in the intro as well, that should be fixed. When getting the microphone, it skips the text with Freddina about needing the microphone. Then you get your scene from her at 6 AM, the time jumps to 7 AM which then breaks the game if you want to end the shift, as in you try to end the shift and are then transported to the puppet meeting scene every time you press that button. Then there is also the problem of triggering the sex scene with Foxy, before the beer quest. The beer quest surprises the player by revealing her to be a futa, but that surprise feels wrong then there has already been a sex scene.
The cleaning spray quest does not seem to run. Or at least it seems that buying the spray before getting it causes problems that makes it impossible to run. More uncertain if that really is an issue or if I am doing something wrong.
I am a bit confused why the outside pizzeria pixel art in the intro looks so detailed. It seems like a completely different pixel artist. No offense meant to the other art. I am not sure if you are doing the art yourself or if you have an artist, though I would recommend improving the art as that would be a bigger draw for your game then, as you have a lot of competition.
Another thing to touch up upon is the game itself. It is fairly simple with some choices here and there, but overall it might be too simple. The interactions aren't as interesting as they could be. Maybe having some impactful choices could help or maybe try having some events that bring interest. Hearing a noise in the guard room is interesting and sparks curiosity. Perhaps that could be utilized among other things.
Story wise, maybe having more clear relationships, rivalries and the like between the animatronics could be interesting. The aggressive Foxy definitely was the most interesting out of the characters, though she could use more of a thorough line. Like seeing her demeanor change from threatening to aggressive, to annoyed. Having her maybe warm up and become more playfully harsh.
Like I said, the writing feels a bit jumbled, so you would do well to think about the characters, their connections and how it develops. This could also lead to scenes with just two animatronics or even a threesome.
I have some suggestions and maybe bug reports after playing 0.3!
Suggestions:
- Since puppet isnt being used so much as of right now, maybe she could also be used to guide on what you have to do, for example, if you don't know if you have everything in the update already, you can go to her and ask her something like "Is there anything I can do here?"
- I would like to able to touch every animatronic while they are recharging/sleeping on the stage, since they aren't doing anything, you could probably touch them without any consequences. Seeing as this was applied for Frederina, is it going to be a thing?
- Don't know if you're planning to do literally every animatronic possible in the game, but some Underrated ones would be Withered Chica and Scrap Baby.
(Possible) Bugs:
- You can repeat the Practice Sheet quest with bonnie as many times as you want. I don't know if this is a way to repeat her 5AM Storage Room Scene, or if it's a bug.
- The 7AM bug where you repeat the first meeting with Puppet still happens, but honestly it's not that big of a deal and you can just go back to your most recent save and fix it. (It's really hard to get to 7AM anyways).
Anyways, keep up the great work! The difference from 0.02 and 0.03 was pretty huge!
Hey, im still trying to find puppet, mind helping me? I found foxy and did all her stuff but i can't seem to find puppet
Thank you! I will really appreciate your feedback and your suggestions are awesome!
I second this. Giving Puppet a legit game purpose could be interesting. Her parts need to be expanded as there is little to her currently. The spying aspect in that one scene is interesting. Maybe voyeurism could be a part of her character as well? Also, would she ever find out that cum was used as lube? She did blow MC after all, so she could realize it is the same stuff afterwards. Perhaps she didn't notice it at first as it has been 10 years since she had sex, seeing how she was trapped. There is a chance she looks for MC and talks to him about it. Just to fill out the game more and make the place and its characters more interesting. It definitely would help if each of the animatronics had specific kinks too one could indulge in.
Also, now that I think about it, the pizza number quest is strange. Puppet has been trapped for 10 years and yet knows about night guards ordering pizza. Or maybe night guards ordered pizza 10 years ago, but then chances would be that the pizza place they used is out of business. Many things can happen in 10 years. That a number in in the dumpster is weird too. Why would the last night guard throw that number away? How is it still in the dumpster, seeing how the dumpster should get emptied regularly? It seems very contrived.
Now that I think about it, the pizzeria one works at it out of business too, so why are night guards hired for it? It would be a good thing to know about as I don't think it was explained in the intro. Is it currently not in use because of some circumstances and MC is only there to make sure no equipment is stolen? Is there a renovation planned that got delayed because of some circumstances? It is important that the story and lore is build.
Definitely! I will work on the lore a lot more, right now the game is very early and its not that polished but I will work on it a lot!
I cant even figure out how to do anything, I've tried interacting with everything and i cant seem to find it, what should i do at the very start of the game?
At the very start of the game you will have to find the key for the closet room and at 4 am to interact with Foxy.
Mind giving me a hint where the key is? I've looked everywhere
Click on the cupcake in the office
party hat,bathroom, bucke
Could someone tell all the locations of coins please?
im excited for this
So don't know if this is a bug or not, but I just downloaded the android version, finished the puppet scenes for night one I think, went to end my shift and it sent me to the beginning of freeing Puppet, don't know if it's a bug but figured I should let you know
Edit: discord link is invalid again as well
Second edit: NVM about the discord link
Is futa content in this game avoidable?
Not at the moment.
its a good game please update it soon.
you can add some tasks to complete and more scenes .
Will there be a Russian language?
honestly a great game, I like the way its heading. Great job!
10/10
Simbora testar o jogo.
Congratulations this is an Amazing game, you have a Social media, to follow the Progress of the game?
You can join my Discrod server!
I really like this
I am glad you do!