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Has this man heard of the "shift" key?

But this description is confusing--like, it's polygonal, traps people within itself, that part I get. Until someone sacrifices themselves is a  bit OP. The last part confuses me, though. Fog-like matter, I get that part, but what does it have to do with its ability? Is it its shape? Does it trap people via the fog? What does it do? The most confusing part is "shine of love". Huh? What the hell is that supposed to mean?

Last part is the stats. Personally, I'd switch the range and the durability. I think the range would be where the majority of the Stand's strength lies, so the other stats would be a bit lower, which is sort of what you did here.

For reference, these are the typical scaling for stats:

A - Superior

B - Above average

C - Average/The abilities of a normal human.

D - Below average

E - Abysmal


Some As and Bs scale different from others, same with C-E. Araki's stats CAN be inaccurate with the Stand's abilities demonstrated, such as The Emperor, a Stand that shot a bullet, redirected it around Silver Chariot's rapier, then redirected back to where it was.

i think what they meant by "shine of love" Is that they have to show love towards something. 

Ex. one's significant other

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Stand Name: Overkill (motorhead )
Ability: Expolsive smoke cloud
Apperance: overkill Is a natural nonhumanoid stand  emanates from a cigar that is in the shape of a .308  hollow point round that has a carving on it called sweet leaf(Black Sabbath) the stand itself is a ever-present smoke that emanates from the cigar that is a formless cloud of yellowish black smoke that reeks of Sulphur and brimstone as some would describe.

Description: Overkill Is a ever enveloping cloud of highly explosive smoke  that ignites on physical contact as well as having corrosive properties

Limitations: Overkill is a very slow stand and can only travel up to 130 ms a minute as well as being weaker on windy days as it slows it down even more
Stats:

Power:A (Referring to power of explosion's)
Speed: E(Referring to speed of which overkill can travel)
Range:C( Referring to how far the smoke can reach)
Durability A (its smoke you cant really hurt it)
Percision:C 
Potential B (how much can it hurt you)


Attacks

Hellraiser(when the smoke touches you the user has the option of the smoke entering your body through any orifices(that can range from your mouth a wound or even open skin pores) and will ignite if any physical harm comes to the victims of overkill and cause a massive explosion.
Killed by death:The other option that comes with the smoke is complete and udder corrosion from the smoke. while it is slow 
Make'Em blind ( overkill will envelop the user under a cloud of smoke that will obscure the user)
Stone Dead Forever (The gas will form around the users hands allowing him to punch with high explosive power)

Stand user:
Name Mikkey Kilmeister
Country of origin: Staffordshire England
Hair Brown with Maroon streaks 
Eyes: perpetually bloodshot and color is brown
Height 5'10
weight:213 pounds (97kg)
age 47
Character Mikkey kilmister was no more than a thug who dealt drugs and had a very carefree life not caring about those around him or what he did to himself
until he had to go to the hospital and was shot he survived but as well as being shot he was diagnosed with several smoking related diseases. and was terminally ill from it bedridden only for one day for him to feel better, as soon as he left the hospital he found a .308 round that was also a cigar  with the word sweat leaves carved into it. he then promptly took a smoke of it and it blew up the entire 5 story hospital. and then he realized with this power he could do more harm to himself and to others than he could ever before.

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Ight another one here we go, not a crusader requiem stand tho


Stand Name: Mr. Blue Sky (please tell us why you had to hide away for soo long)

Ability: Air & Fog manipulation

Appearance: A humanoid stand who wears a black fedora and gold John Lennon glasses with black lenses. It has a face and dark purple lightining-esque lines going down its face. Its body is half red, half yellow, with a blue tuxedo and white shoes. It has half-red-half-yellow rings on its wrists, which it uses as part of its Stand ability.

Description: A humanoid Stand capable of manipulating and creating air currents and fog.

Limitations: Only able to create a certain amount of wind and fog. Cannot control the oxygen level of the air, only the speed and direction of it. The above applies to fog as well, when it comes to density.

Stats

Power: B (referring to the average amount of wind strength)

Speed: A (referring to wind speed)

Range: C (5 meters)

Durability: D

Precision: C (referring to the direction of the wind)

Potential: C


Attacks

Blue Sky Barrage: MBS unleashes an average-speed barrage of punches.

Blue Sky Bluster: Acts as a stand-alone attack as well as a barrage finisher. MBS punches with one of its arms as the ring around it expands, releasing a powerful gust of wind in the direction of the punch.

Ring Toss: MBS expands a ring and hurls it at the opponent.

Fog Creation: MBS expands both its rings to create fog from them. MBS can use the fog's movement to detect anything moving inside the fog.

Windy Shield: MBS expands both its rings and rapidly spins them around each other as they blow out wind, creating a shield around the user.

Bluster Boost: MBS takes its user and uses a powerful gust of wind to blast both it and its user into the sky. The stream of wind can be kept steady to allow flight for a short period of time.

Ring Drill: MBS expands its rings and puts them above and below its user. MBS holds its user as it spins rapidly, with wind blowing from behind in both rings, causing movement. MBS propels itself forward and acts as a human drill.

Ain't a Cloud in Sight: MBS expands both its rings around its wrists and begins spinning them in opposite directions as they blow wind, creating a replica of Wamuu's Divine Sandstorm.


User: Alto Cielo

Appearance

Hair: Caramel with silver highlights

Eyes: Gray

Skin: Pale Beige

Height: 5'9''

Weight: 108 lbs. (Anemic)

Age: 22

Stand Obtained: Cielo has had his Stand since birth. It manifested when he was 6 years old, and has since grown more timid and distant from his peers, in fear they would find out about his Stand and treat him as an outcast.

Character: Cielo is a 22 year-old man who was dragged into Passione after trying to stop a drug deal with his Stand. He's a shy, yet kind-hearted man who has a hidden sense of justice. He ended up bringing Selvaggia Affamata into Passione from Polpo's orders. He was reluctant to do so, but didn't have a choice. In secret, his group plans to take down Polpo and leave Passione.


Cielo is a member of the group mentioned in Selvaggia "Silva" Affamata's bio. Here's the link: https://itch.io/post/2161618

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What if they had a stand school like my hero?

I once saw a video on a concept similar to that, where a JoJo character enrolled at UA...



A shame the video's quality was absolute shit. The image quality sucked and I could barely hear the audio.

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Stand Name: Imaginary Dragon

Stand User: ???

Ability: Aura Manipulation

Appearance: ???

Limitations: Aura can be used up too much and injure the user.

Stats

Power: A

Speed: B

Range: C

Durability: A

Precision: B

Potential: A

Attacks

Demonic Presence:  Imaginary Dragon forces it's own aura in a "Radioactive" sense forcing all stands within a 7.5 meter radius return to their master. This can also be used to pull stands out of users and is great to find out if someone is an enemy stand user.

Aura Jab: Imaginary Dragon covers it's fist with immeasurable amounts of aura and rushes towards the enemy at a pace faster than it's own and jabs them in the gut or lower abdomen, this will stun/paralyze almost any enemy for a short period of time (around 1-2 seconds) although the enemy stand may still be strong enough to block.

Cancel: Imaginary Dragon and the user are immobile for around 1-5 minutes depending on the strength of what is cancelled but basically Imaginary Dragon forces all of the aura it has upon anything it desires and can basically reset it...EX. (Killer Queen places a bomb on Josuke and is about to detonate it, Imaginary Dragon can basically disarm the bomb but at the risk of using up too much of it's aura.) 

Omni-Presence: Only used for dire situations but for a few seconds Imaginary Dragon forces every ounce of its aura out upon an enemy and can almost destroy a person's stand or make it significantly weaker than it was before BUT Imaginary Dragon will be unable to be used for 1 month to 1 year being that it's aura will be almost gone after this.

URA Punch: Just a strong physical punch.

Auraura Rush: Multiple strong punches in repetition.


This is my own stand and I'm up for recommendations in the comments and also this stand is ABLE to go requiem but is still not there yet. Also I haven't thought of what it looks like yet so I decided to say anytime Imaginary Dragon comes out its aura overwhelms nearby people to the point that they can't see what it looks like.

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Stand Name: Heirophant Requiem

Stand User: Noriaki Kakyoin

Ability: Piloting, tentacle manipulation, and reflection of abilities

Appearance: A similar appearance to its original form, however it now has a similar substance to the liquid used for the Emerald Splash covering its body as a robe. Its forehead has the symbol of the arrow pointing upward from  just above the middle of the gap between its eyes. The robe is a very dark shade of red, almost maroon.

Limitations: There's an incredibly slim chance somebody can deflect the Emerald Splash.

Stats

Power: A (Emerald Splash's power)

Speed: ? (Emerald Splash's speed. It outspeeds even Star Platinum and The World)

Range: ? (Pilot ability's maximum range is now 5 kilometers, Emerald Splash is 50 meters)

Durability: B (Durability of the Stand itself)

Precision: ? (INCREDIBLY accurate with any of its attacks, also surpasses the precision of Star Platinum's attacks)

Potential: ? (technically reached its full potential with Requiem)


Attacks

Emerald Splash: A long-ranged flurry of emeralds nobody can deflect (for real this time). Also more accurate and Kakyoin can choose if the emeralds disperse outwards or go in a straight line.

Coiled Body: HR's body and robe are made up of small, string-like membranes that can be controlled at will. These can be used for a variety of things.

Marionette Control: HR moves its coils (including those of its robe) into a person's body, controlling their limbs until HR is either retracted or until Kakyoin is finished controlling the victim.

20-Meter Radius Emerald Splash: HR surrounds the victim with its coils and unleashes an omni-directional Emerald Splash around the victim. These can move faster than The World/Star Platinum can stop time.

Emerald Barrier: HR disperses its robe into coils to surround either Kakyoin or a victim in all directions. HR is able to manipulate these coils however it pleases, allowing it to enter and exit the barrier, or even become a part of it altogether.

Pilot: Kakyoin can control HR farther than usual for up to 5 kilometers away. He is able to see with HR as well as his own vision, alternating between the two.

Stand-Catching Spear: HR sharpens one of its coils like a spear and jabs it at the victim at an extremely high speed. When used in succession, it will forcefully hoist out the victim's Stand. The caught Stand's abilities and appearance are revealed to Kakyoin and then negated for up to 8 minutes (subject to change based on feedback.


This is NOT a canon Stand and simply a concept I made up. If you have any (useful) feedback, I'd love to hear it!

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I would like to give another addition to this.

Since Hierophant Green was introduced as the ranger of the group as it is a stand that focuses entirely on long-distance combat, i feel like the requiem version of it would be unlimited range. 

For example, HG's emerald splash could snipe anyone from wherever it wanted to be, from nation to nation, planet to planet, galaxy to galaxy, or it would even able to snipe anyone who's in another timeline or a dimension out of the JJBA universe.

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That is very true. Thank you for the input!


haha requiem can be as broken as we want

how do i upload a stand i made

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take a screenshot of the in-game stand screen, then upload it in the comments here

you can use the comment itself to write additional information about the stand if u want to

:)

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Stand Name: Magician's Requiem

Stand User: Muhammad Avdol (Alternate universe where he dives to get Polnareff and Iggy out of the way, and just barely makes it under Cream's void)

Ability: Enhanced Pyrokinesis & Space Manipulation

Appearance: Same humanoid figure with the head of a bird, with flaming eyes and the Requiem Arrow's symbol going down from the forehead to the start of the beak. The body is the same humanoid shape, but the feathers covering the wrists and legs are now pure fire. The boots remain the same, however the arrow's symbol is now visible decorating the boots, starting at the end and going up to the top of the boot. The flames are now blue instead of red, as are the arrow symbols. Everything else remains the same.

Limitations: The fire now has the same properties of a gas fire, only growing when in contact with water. The only way to stop them is to cover them, and even then the flames are so hot they can melt almost anything.

Stats

Power: ? (Referring to the fire itself)

Speed: ? (Also referring to the fire itself)

Range: B (Range of the Stand itself)

Durability: B (Durability of the Stand itself)

Precision: ? (Accuracy of the flames)

Potential ? (It's technically reached its fullest potential with Requiem)

Attacks

Fiery Barrage: MR unleashes a fast flurry of punches, its fists covered in blue flame.

Fiery Finisher: MR finishes its barrage with a more powerful punch, the fist also covered in blue flame.

Crossfire Hurricane: Same as before, however it's more powerful and allows even more control. Can hit people in other dimensions/erased time, like Over Heaven attacks in most JoJo Roblox games.

Blue Bind: Red Bind, but it's blue and hotter, suffocating the opponent quicker than before. Flames are also much stronger and more durable. Does not melt the victim's body unless done so manually.

Life Detector: Same as before, but capable of tracking Stand Users such as Vanilla Ice in Cream's dimension. Now tracks off of heartbeat instead of heat signature.

Burning Portal: MR creates a rift in space with its fire in two different spots. When Avdol or something MR created enters one portal, it comes out the other.

How the fight played out: As Avdol dived into Polnareff and Iggy sending himself and his friends to the ground, a somewhat translucent purple sphere zoomed above them, just barely passing the back of Avdol's head, as a bit of his hair was swallowed up by the passing void. They were all confused at first, but they soon realized it was the work of an enemy Stand user. They followed it into the next room, Avdol still wondering why his life detector couldn't sense him. He knew right away that the only way to win this fight was to figure out the Stand's ability, and how to exploit it. As Vanilla Ice peeked out of Cream's void, he saw Iggy, Polnareff, and Avdol heading towards him. He hid back into his void and charged forward at the three of them. Iggy was small enough to duck, and Polnareff jumped out of the way, losing some of his toes to the void. The fight played out mostly the same, but they realized the ability sooner thanks to Avdol, meaning they never needed to trick him with The Fool.


Keep in mind this is just a fan concept, and is NOT canon. I'd love feedback in the comments!

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Stand Name: Eat It (Referencing the parody of Michael Jackson's "Beat It" by Al Yankovic)

Ability: Eaten object manipulation

Appearance: A quadrupedal beast-like Stand, its face is comprised of one giant mouth.  Its head and body are black and its body is like a tiger's, without the cool stripes..

Description: A horrifying beast-like Stand that can inhale non-organic objects and either reform them and spit them out, or swallow it and gain the item's properties for combat.

Limitations: Can only inhale non-organic objects (man-made things) that are able to fit into its large mouth. Its stomach is a pocket dimension where a swallowed item gets reshaped and spit back out as something else (for example, inhaling a bullet and reforming it into a washer, which is a small metal ring). It can only spit one thing out at a time, but it's possible to merge multiple smaller items that are inhaled, as well as reform them. Cannot swallow more than one object at a time.

Stats 

Power: A (Referring to its melee attacks, not its Reformed Projectile attack)

Speed: D (Referring to inhaling and spitting out an item, melee attacks are a B)

Range: C (9 meters)

Durability: B (Without any item swallowed)

Precision: C (Its melee attacks are quite basic, and Reformed Projectile varies on the item spit out)

Potential: C

Attacks

Inhale: Eat It inhales an object

Reformed Regurgitation: Eat It spits out a reformed item to be utilized by the user.

Reformed Projectile: Eat It spits out a reformed item at a high speed, doing damage varying on the item.

Swallow: Eat It swallows an inhaled item, gaining its properties (for example, swallowing a poisonous dart would make its claws poisonous. Uses the property of the material when possible). Effect lasts for five minutes at the most, but is overwritten when a new item is swallowed, and can be manually deactivated. User does not gain the properties of the swallowed item.

Wild Bash: Eat it rams into the victim recklessly, doing a lot of damage but leaving it open for an attack. Damage varies on item swallowed, if any.

Claw Slash: Eat It slashes the victim with its sharp claws. Damage varies on item swallowed, if any.

Seed Gatling: Eat It is fed a pomegranate by its user, and spits out the seeds as if it were a machine gun firing bullets. Deals as much damage as Joseph's Tommy Gun.


User: Selvaggia "Silva" Affamata

Appearance

Hair: Brown

Eyes: Brown

Skin: Beige

Height: 5'6

Weight: 110 lbs.

Age: 24

Character: Silva is a young Italian Zookeeper in Venezia (called Venice literally everywhere else), Italy. She may not seem like it, but she has a big appetite. Her pastimes include tending to the animals at the zoo, eating sweets (in moderation, of course), and playing with her cat.

Stand Obtained: She was walking home from a later shift one night, when she was stabbed by Black Sabbath. 

Origin: Polpo soon found out about Silva being stabbed and surviving, and tasked a member of Passione to find Silva and bring her to Polpo. 

 A few days later, she was found by the Passione member. He silently loomed a safe distance from Silva, and when she was alone in an isolated area, he apprehended her with his Stand and took her to Polpo. When she came to, she was in a room with Polpo and the man who took her to Polpo. She ended up being recruited after keeping the lighter lit for 24 hours. She didn't want to join the gang, but she didn't have any other skills besides eating and taking care of animals. Silva was running low on funds, and needed to make a living somehow. 

She was filled in on the team's plan to overthrow Polpo and separate from the gang to do good deeds instead of bad. The group left Passione upon Polpo's passing, and worked together to do various good deeds starting in Venice, then across Italy, ending up having to fight Passione members tasked with killing them after word got out of their plan from one of the group's former members.


Hey, you could make a side-story out of this!

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My stand

Reference:Out Of Time by the rolling stones

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My stand.

Reference: The Phoenix by Fall Out Boys

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A few stands i made


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And the main villain


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How do I take a screenshot in this? (Sorry if this happens to be a dumb question.)

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There isn't a built-in feature but you can use other screenshot programs like Gyazo or hit PrtScn, paste the image into a photo editor, and crop it. Hope this helps!

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If your on a computer, Use Snipping Tool. :)

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A few other Stands I made



I meant  B, A, C, C, A, B not C, A, C, C, A, C.

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Stand Name: November Rain

Ability:  Forming metal weapons (spear, gladiatorial net, short-swords) from its body, and shooting lightning from its fingers.

Range: 2-9 meters depending on the weapon. 

Physical Description: November Rain looks like a robotic centaur with the upper body of a half-devil. There are detachable pieces of metal on its torso and hind legs. It stands about 7 feet tall and 9 feet long. 

Stand Stats:

Power: A

Speed: A (can speed up to a maximum of 45 mph on a flat level surface. It accelerates slowly and is not very agile. It fights best standing in place, while keeping its foe at a distance with its abilities)

Range: B (Its spear has long range, but once a foe is past its tip, November Rain is vulnerable)

Durability: B 

Precision: C

Potential: D

Attacks: I haven't thought these through very much, so suggestions are appreciated!

Gladiator

November Rain uses its body to create any combo of 2 of these weapons:

6 ft long spear

Gladiator's Net

Short-sword (2 max)

Electric Halo

November Rain hugs itself and electrifies its whole body. This is generally used as a last resort defense. 



I just realized this is a lot like a Lynel from BotW..

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Stand name: Czerwone Jagody (Czerwone Jagody)

Stand User: Mirtilla Castellano (My JJBA Vento Aureo OC)

Also a clarification, She can reanimate the dead for as long as she wants, but it will crumble and break overtime. If her stand power is too focused on one body, it will crumble to dust.

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Here we go... Nobody asked for this but here it is.

Name: American Dream Requiem

Requiem Obtained: One of the people who found the arrows was a scientist for the U.S. Government. He managed to sneak one of he arrows to the president, who ended up being chosen by the arrow due to his strong loyalty to his country. He stabbed himself with the arrow and obtained American Dream. He had kept it locked up in an incredibly safe place, and checked every day to see if it was still there, in fear it would be taken into the wrong hands. 

One day, the arrow began to react again. He didn't take it out, but he left it to be further examined. The day finally came where a thief tried to take the arrow for himself. He was renowned across the U.S. for managing himself in and out of secure locations. As it turned out, he had a Stand too. He recently found out about the president's arrow and tried to take it for himself. 

Secret Service was after him, as was the president. The thief's stand managed to kill the secret service officers, one of whom retrieved the arrow. The arrow reacted to the president once again, and American Dream was pierced by the arrow. It began to change in a bright red, white, and blue light. When the light subsided, it had obtained Requiem. Due to the president's strong will to protect his country and the arrow, the arrow merged with AD.

Appearance: Same as before, but now with shoulder pads and knee pads with a symbol resembling the arrow it was pierced with. Its beak was also branded with that symbol. Its eyes now have a brighter glow and a faint red, white, and blue aura.

Range:  Meters

Limitations: Still limited by patriotism, but the power is through the roof and the user's patriotism so strong, it effectively has none.

Stats

Power: ?

Speed: ?

Durability: A

Range: E-S

Precision: ?

Potential: ?


Attacks

Star-Spangled Barrage: Same as before, but WAY more powerful

Patriot Finisher: Same as before, but also WAY more powerful.

Eagle's Wings: ADR merges with its user and takes flight.

Wing Arsenal: Same as before, but longer and deadlier.

Patriotic Shield: ADR spreads its wings in front if it and its user, forming a nearly indestructible shield.

American Ace Pilot: ADR separates from its user, allowing it to be piloted. It can fly, pass through objects, and even attack. Its user is still vulnerable in this state, but ADR returns when it is either done so manually or if its user feels external pain (such as stubbing your toe). It's extremely fast and has high range, though it isn't infinite.

50-Star Beatdown: Same as before, but each punch deals significantly more damage.


No more Patriotic Spirit, as that wasn't the state AD was in when it was pierced. 

Who needs balancing with Requiem? Requiem Stands are designed to be overpowered.

I might add the thief's stand too if u guys want, but it's nothing really interesting.

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American Dream (Reference: Song by MKTO)

Ability: Flying Punchy Ghost

Appearance: The head of a bald eagle with glowing white eyes, with a body resembling a superhero's, with stars and stripes on the costume with wings that, when put side-to-side, look like an American Flag.

Range: 2 meters

Limitations: Can use its wings for combat to compensate for its short range, and is extremely powerful at close range, but the power varies by how patriotic its user is.

Stats

Power: A

Speed: A

Durability: C

Range: E

Precision: B

Potential: B


Attacks

Star-Spangled Barrage: A stand barrage, each punch faster than a bullet.

Patriot Finisher: A barrage finisher with the strength of a cannon.

Eagle's Wings:  AD takes its user into the air and flies with its wings.

Wing Artillery: Think Pharah's Ultimate in Overwatch, just on the ground. Several various firearms erect from AD's wings and open fire on any victim in range.

Patriotic Spirit: Only triggered when AD feels it's necessary (aka when the user is in a really sticky situation), AD merges with its user, becoming a much stronger, but shorter ranged, suit stand keeping its attacks from before.

50-Star Beatdown: Only usable when Patriotic Spirit is active, AD and its user punches the victim into the air and does a barrage of 50 powerful punches, the 50th being a finisher.


User: Literally any good president of the USA.

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Country Roads appears as a metallic skeleton of a human with small orbs of white light in it's eye sockets, it sports a pair of metallic clothes resembling dungarees and has various strings connecting it's limbs together. Once the stand has been assigned a target, it merely has to look into the eyes of either the stand or it's user and they will be cursed with heavy misfortune which can range from minor inconveniences such as getting hit with bird poop or tripping over to near death experiences such as a crane dropping a heavy crate as your walking underneath it or a car accident occurring. Country roads can only have one target afflicted at a time and can stop the ability at any time. 

Stand stats:

Power: D

Speed: C

Range: A

Durability: C

Precision: B

Potential: B

Stand cry: MISMISMISMISMIS

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Name: Song 2 (Song 2 by blur)

Stand user: Sam McLemore

Range: 1m

thats Song 2

So do you wear the suit? And can you summon/dismiss the suit at will

Yeah, like Ghiaccio's stand.

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Unchained melody takes the form of a North American Cardinal. Once the stand user has chosen their victim, Unchained Melody follows the victim and chirps at them, after that and as long as Unchained Melody stays within range the victim will eventually kill themselves, or be led to kill themselves, over what they see. This can take shape of friends, family, horrific nightmares, and anything use the user decides. 


Thats actually not a bad stand! Not too weak, not to OP!

haha thanks. I got it from a walk I went on where a cardinal fluttered half way down the path. 

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Stand Name: Nocturne (Act 3)

Stand User: Devi_X (to not put my real name in)

Stand Stats:

  • Precision: B
  • Durability: A
  • Potential: B
  • Power: A
  • Range: B (because of arm length)
  • Speed: B

Nocturne (Act 3) is a 7 ft. tall stand, it is made out of shadow but it can manifest it's body parts as physical. It has Big white eyes and completely black(shadow) body as from some sort of a horror game or movie. It is a close range combat stand, It posesses really long arms (3 ft. long) which also allow it to have an advantage on most other close range combat stands. It's special ability is to cover enemy in it's shadow, the closer the stand is to the enemy the more it covers them in it's shadow, 6m and closer covers enemy in shadow completely and misallows the enemy to see anything (as well as it's stand). BIT ova powered for a regular stand not gonna lie...

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Stand Name: Smooth Criminal

Stand user: Raziel Bloom

Stand Stats: 

  • Precision: D
  • Durability: B
  • Potential: C
  • Power: B
  • Range: B
  • Speed: A

Smooth Criminal is a God-like Stand similar to The World, that can tell if someone is lying, stop time for 30 seconds when at max focus, and freeze a person in place for 5 seconds at most. It's Range is a mile, and his strength is about as good as Crazy Diamond. He can almost travel at the speed of sound. His Accuracy is not terrible, but bad. Smooth Criminal's appearance looks human-like. Like how  Star Platinum appears. And, his cry is: "Zorarararararara!".

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BIT Ova powered not gonna lie....

30-second time stop (even it's it the very maximum) and 1 mile range. If this were a Requiem that would make sense, but I see no detail stating it's a Requiem/evolved Stand. and a B in range is a lot less than a mile.

Also, The World, by the end of part 3, has a 10-second time stop and the same speed as Star Platinum, which (I think) is slower than the speed of sound.

"Smooth Criminal is a God-like Stand"

KODEGA... REKUIEM... DA

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Stand name: Unity

Stand user: Joshua Davis

Stand stats:

  • Precision A
  • Durability C (Non-stand users)
  • Durability A (Stand users)
  • Potential E 
  • Power C
  • Range A
  • Speed B

Unity is a stand that manifests in the form of a long wooden pole with carvings on it that show the pole touching 2 people and them fusing into one. When unity touches 2 objects (living or not) they will fuse together. Unity can be seen by anyone, and to non-stand users, unity is as hard as a normal wooden pole, and if it is broken it will regenerate in 5 minutes. To stand users unity is as hard as diamond and if broken by a stand user it takes 15 minutes to regenerate. Unity can extend the length of the pole it manifests as, and it can extend as far as needed to reach the target, even if its across the earth. Unity can extend at a rate of 60 miles per hour.

Ability #1: Human Fusion

Unity fuses 2 people together, creating the JoJo of part 8.

Ability #2: Human Object Fusion

Just creates Angelo but with different objects.

Ability #3: Human Animal Fusion

Unity fuses a human and an animal, having a 50/50 effect of the animal getting the human's brain or the human getting the animal's brain.

Ability #4: Object Fusion

Unity fuses an object together, creating an object with good parts of each object. (EX. Rocket launcher + Pistol, creates a pistol with exploding bullets)

Ability #5: Kamikaze

Unity fuses the earth and the moon together, destroying both in the process.

dang! that sounds cool!

Thanks Sam! Also, thanks for responding to other people. You don't know how far some positive feedback can go for some people.

You're welcome! Im usually a pretty nice person.

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Black Day: Power Unconceded

BEFORE YOU READ THIS I HIGLY SUGGEST CHECKING OUT THE MAIN STAND AND ORIGINAL REQUIEM VERSION! (https://itch.io/post/1404026)


Now assumingly you read the my original idea and requiem original of Black Day, I can tell you that Black Day: Shackles Of Death is precisely what would be considered the main story if it was in a manga. Although I thought since Black Day would originally be for a villain I decided I wanted to go back and make a Requiem version for if a hero possesed Black Day. This is what I came up with,


Black Day: Power Unconceded

Power: A

Speed: D

Range: C

Durability: (See ability "Imprison Harvest")

Precision: C

Potential: A


Black Day: Power Unconceded is broken down in a bit of an example;

                 When Black Day's user (hero version of course) was pierced with the requiem arrow their mind grew blank and all of their chains faded away, they become unconcious. In their mind they begin to hear a rattle of chains slowly repeating them selfves getting louder until just loud enough for you to make out a few sounds. The rattling will stop and you will see chains slowly wrapping around this unconcious visionary person which of course is the user. Then one last time in a perfectly audible version the rattling of the chains will pronounce "You are determined to for fill for your goal, you are unconceded. This goal is.." the user will in-voluntarily state what they wanted to most to happen before they pierced themself with the Requiem arrow. They will gain concious and their body will rapidly thrash chains way bigger and more poweful then before and incase themselves with an almost 7 meter tall titan of chains with a few two new abilities.


Imprison Harvest: This move passively activates whenever the chain titan takes a serious blow, the chains will rap around whatever hit them and disable its abilities, therefore is star platinum were to use a hard hitting ora punch Black Day: Power Unconceded would rap chains around star platinums arm and then Jotaro would temporally not be able to use his stand and since stands are physically embodiements of the souls fighting spirit, Jotaro would loose all motive to fight and would begin to cower in fear unless another stand overwrites Imprison Harvest and brings his stand back and motive to fight. Last but not least when Imprison Harvest takes place it immediately breaks down the strenght of what hit the user and incorparates in as is own therefore now it could form a solid punch with power of star platinum's on top of its own.


Power Unconceded: Now to explain how this ability works it would be better if you knew what the name meant. Conceded means that you have utterly accepted defeat and lost all hope so when you add the root "un" it means you arent conceded and by using power as an adjective you have the meaning of a power that cannot be defeated or forced to defeat. This ability is simple as Chariot Requiems soul swap move, you just cant beat Black Day: Power Unconceded unless you have a stand much like GER that can change the destiny or future much like how Diavolo saw he was going to win against Giorno but GER changed that fate.

Universal Chains: This is the last new ability you gain is that youre chains no longer abide by the rules of this universe; now this is where you can get creative. This passive ability simply doesnt care about matter going through other matter or color or light or anything. The reason this is so powerful is because you can do anything with your chains aka something that I find interesting would be making a chain so small that is could split an atom and now last time I checked when you split atoms it creative a sort of explosion or something I dont remember but thats just surface level things as in you can now make portals and black holes and all sorts of wacky things.



Now incase I didnt mention the user cannot control themselves while using Black Day: Power Unconceded so their chains act upon what goal they set in the beginning and wont stop until the goal is done or the user is killed. So you best bet if you hear the booming of something huge coming and the rattling of thousands of chains you best stay out of whatevers coming because if you dont, you're last hour strikes.

Holy shit, its too OP, and that's incredible lmao

Like I said it was never meant to be made but I figured Id make it for fun considering it was in the back of my head for a while lol

here is the description on what happens when you split an atom What happens when you split an atom? ... The energy released in splitting just one atom is minuscule. However, when the nucleus is split under the right conditions, some stray neutrons are also released and these can then go on to split more atoms, releasing more energy and more neutrons, causing a chain reaction.

and it also depends on how many atoms its splitting and with enough it could probably make a nuke.

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My 4th stand will be based off this idk a kid person's idea, and i will put desc and form in the same paragraph to save time because shit i have school after this.

(Stand stats is at the very bottom)

Stand Name: Burn Monkey

Ability: Eh, its about heat but it's not completely focusing about only one heat ability, so...

Desc: Burn Monkey is a stand that is based of Sun Wukong from the Chinese Mythology. It has it's own original and distinguishable features such as his fiery spikey hair and his cape and scarf that is made out of pure fire. It can control heat using it's staff. When Burn Monkey is activating it's power, the staff will glow red and the edges of the staff will burst out flames. This stand is also faster due to enhanced kinetic movement thanks to its heat.

Range: 5 meters, it's a CQC stand.

Condition: Can absorb heat from various media and applications, such as a newly-made asphalt road,  boiling water, sunrays, or even from a direct physical attack aswell (based on the vector theory that every kinetic movement creates heat), which minimizes the damage and boosting it's durability.

Limitation: Taking heat for too long will make the stand overheats itself and burn, and you know what happens to the user if the stand is drowned in flames. Cold temperatures and environment could also nerfed this stand's prowess.

Skills:

Kinetic Boost (Passive skill)

Burn Monkey's speed and precision is boosted due to its kinetic movement being enhanced thanks to its heat.

Heat Absorption (Basic utility skill)

Burn Monkey would take heat from any variety of media and applications, just like what's explained in the condition section. 

Hot Rod (Basic offensive skill)

Burn Monkey would channel the absorbed heat to its staff, which then glows red. The staff would be so hot that if it came in contact with a material, that targeted material would be burned or melted in just a few seconds.  If it's heated really hot enough, the edges of the staff will burst out flames.

A classic barrage with a finisher is a part of this skill.

Heat Absorption Aegis (Basic defensive skill)

The damage from a direct physical attack can be minimized by absorbing the heat, based on the vector theory that implies that any kinetic movement produces heat.

Fatamorgana (Special utility skill)

To prevent overheat from absorbing the heat around, Burn Monkey could spread out the heat that had been absorbed, making the temperature of the area significantly but slowly being increased. If an area is too hot, an optical mirage illusion would happen and make people in the surrounding area halucinates doppelgangers of Burn Monkey. If all of the people in the area halucinates the same illusion, the doppelganger would take physical form and became real.

In short, this skill produce clones. Burn Monkey can also replace its position with its clone, which makes teleportation possible.

Spit Fire (Special offensive skill)

Burn Monkey would flow out all out its heat out of its mouth, making the stand spits fire (literally) and burns everything on sight. For an easier exposure, imagine a dragon breathing out flames out of its mouth.

This skill needs alot of heat, like 95% of all the heat it had. If Burn Monkey were to start this skill by absorbing from 0%, it would be very risky and dangerous because it's close to the point of overheating.

Fatamorgana Aegis (Special defensive skill)

Remember when i said that the illusion of Burn Monkey can take physical form and be real? Well that clone could also absorb heat too. Burn Monkey and its clones would take in a group stance, both absorbing and gushing out all of its heat at the same time, which created a chemical reaction between the overlapsing heat and the air. 

The result would be a whole energy barrier made out of overheated aura that will burn and melt anything that comes towards it, protecting anyone inside the barrier.

Welp damn, i made an OP stand, but well, this idea is based off the fusion of RHCP and Speed King, so... thats that.


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This is kinda the story continuation of that Razor Sedge guy person, the user of the previous stand i made, so if you read this out of context it may be a little bit off so i suggest you read my previous stand user's story first before reading this one.

Stand User: Ardente A. Zeppeli

Age : 18

Arden is Third-year high school delinquent who looks like a fashion designer that recently joined a yakuza clan. His blonde hair fades into red and styled to look like an emo mohawk hair. He fashions a red leather jacket on top of a student uniform with two scarfs whose color is orange and white covering each other on its neck. He also wear Yeezys. His skin is pale white, and its looks pretty clear on his face because he wears a very dark eyeliners and purple lipstick.

Arden's mother owns a salon and he always helps her to ease her job everyday. His mom wasnt the only person he helped, said the whole neighbourhood. His personality is the last thing people would guess when seeing his rather intimidating looks. Although he may have a good reputation, his school life said otherwise. Well you know the glimpse, about how looks is a major trigger of being shunned in the said "education" place.

Tired of being discriminated, he started to skip school on purpose, giving him a delinquent title. He did so because he thought that the time on school is just not worth it and prefer having more time to help around the neighbourhood. Whatever the school thinks his motive on skipping school are, it's definitely not positive.

When he returned to school, no one wants to interact with him, none at all, and showed it obviously. At first, it wasnt really that obvious, people would still talk to him, while being very frightened. But now, it just really shows that people shunned him, and even starts to spread false gossips and rumors about our poor delinquent boy. 

His school life wasnt his first depression flag. His father was the latest succesor of the Zeppeli family ; he resembles as gyro's son, though which he claims, unknown if it's the truth or just a blantant lie to get a financial support from the Speedwagon Foundation. His son is the only who believes his lies, due to him being a very great role model to Arden. After saying that he's going to the store to buy milk, he was never seen again. Even though Arden believed that he'll come back, his anxiety made him always thought about the possibility that he may be died, or even left the family.

When he tried to pull out the game over screen of his life, there he meets someone, the one that'll change his whole life. That someone looks like he's wearing a dark gray meander-patterned cloak, and that someone also looks like he's trapped on the ground. No, not trapped, but rather goes through the ground. And that weird person, also seems to kill an old man, that old man who always sells ice cream to the kids. Seeing someone he knew being murdered right in front of him, his anger ignored all of his depression, and sets his whole vision to the mysterious man.

Rushing to the cloaked man, he raises his fist and launch it to punch the man. But before even reaching to it, the mysterious person drowns himself into the shadow and tripped the enraged delinquent. He tried to get some balance after falling off, but then suddenly a painful jolt resonates from his chest. He had been stabbed, with an arrow-looking thing.

Before that mysterious man left, Arden heard some of his words.

"That fortune teller is really crazy. Telling me to stab anyone who saw the murder with the stand arrow, i wonder what the fuck is in his mind. Justice my ass, 'never meet me again' my ass. If you really wanted to meet me that bad, why just not come to me and not suddenly calling me on a video call, fucking old zoomer."

Confused, and in pain, Arden can't do anything but lying in the ground, dying, and hyperventilating. Slowly, his vision fades into black. He thought that this is his end. 

Little did he know that he would be the JoBro who accompanies that mysterious cloaked man to destroy the yakuza clan, and actually succeeded, while having a brokenly OP stand. Epic.

Also if your wondering why don't I write it well I have the desc and stats or whatever you wanna call it but anyway I wanna see what other people do with these names/stands

ok so I have two for if people want to write a desc for these I have Burn monkey and I have end of ZA line use those if ya wsnt

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I'll take an order of one Burn Monkey with an extra of End of The Line, please thank you very much.

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Ooh, I've got a good one, I would say.

Stand Name: Right Round Act 1 (An Act Stand like Echoes and Tusk) (References a song I hope you know)

Ability: Spin Distribution

Description: Right Round Act 1 is a spherical Stand about 1.5 times the size of a steel ball. It's capable of imbuing any small object that it touches with Spin energy.

Appearance: A green, spherical Stand with light green accents around its sides, top, and bottom that look like Gyro Zeppeli's facial hair. Its face consists of two pink, long, oval-shaped eyes on the front and back.

Range: 12 Meters (It's much weaker in this state)

Limitations: It's generally very small and weak, and when it comes to direct combat, it's a little stronger than a steel ball with minimal amounts of Spin. Its main use lies in its ability, able to imbue small objects (as in no bigger than a small beach ball, which is a little bigger than RRA1) with a bit of Spin energy.

Attacks

Spin Induction: RRA1 touches an object with its spherical body, imbuing it with a relatively small amount of Spin.


User: Girevole "Jerry" Pallone

Occupation: Upper Secondary School Second-Year

Appearance: Has blonde hair and light green eyes.  Wears a black school uniform with a light green tie with dark green polka-dots and black dress shoes. Casually, he wears a white tank top with a dark brown puffer jacket and khakis.

Character: At this point, he's just an Upper Secondary Student born in Naples, Italy, who just discovered his Spin capabilities, as well as his Stand. What he doesn't know is that when he was young, his parents knew that they would be found and killed by a certain individual who wanted to eradicate the last of the Zeppeli family. Before Jerry's parents were killed, they brought Jerry to an old family friend of theirs who lived in Rome, and gave Jerry to them. 

Shortly afterward, Jerry's parents were murdered, and the Girevole Family adopted him. They knew his lineage, but never told him in fear of what would happen. Once, he was bouncing a ball against the wall while in detention (he was never the greatest student), and began focusing on it. Spin energy began to course through his arm into the ball, and as he threw it, it went as fast as a bullet and left a dent in the wall. At that moment, his Stand, Right Round, manifested before his eyes.

Jerry is the Great-Great-Great-Grandson of one of Gyro Zeppeli's siblings (not sure if he had siblings but I would assume so), and the last user of Spin.


Later Acts to come, as well as character development.

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Stand Name: Dream On (referencing the Aerosmith song of the same name aka the best song to ever exist)

Type: Long Range/Utility Stand

Ability: Materialization & Pocket Dimension

Appearance: Has the figure of a genie, human from the waist up and the legs are a white fluffy cloud. Top half is a sky blue and there are smaller white clouds around the wrists and on the shoulders. It's wearing white goggles completely covering its eyes. Its hair is white like its goggles, and it's long and flows about as if it were blowing in the wind.

Description: A genie-like Stand that can take both it and its user into a pocket dimension, and can use it for various purposes. It's able to enter others' dreams via the pocket dimension and utilize it.

Range: 5 meters (without taking into account the pocket dimension

Limitations: Items can be imagined in the dimension, but only if the user knows the physics behind the item (same condition as Momo Yaoyorozu's Quirk in My Hero Academia). If DO and its user are in another's dream, the target can imagine things to gain the upper hand, and DO is significantly weaker.

Attacks (most of these will reference lyrics from the song)

Barrage - Your average barrage, just weaker than average. Has a finisher.

Maybe Tomorrow - Dream On's cloud takes it, its user, and sometimes an item in or out a pocket dimension.

Imagine Object - While in the pocket dimension, the user can imagine an object from inside, as long as they know the science of said object. Only works with objects that exist. Larger items take longer to create. Can throw objects out of the dimension via the cloud beneath DO's torso, but needs to exit the dimension with the object.

Look in the Mirror -  In the dimension, the user makes a reflection which turns into a clone of the user, and exits the dimension with the user. The clone acts off of what the user is thinking and cannot use a Stand in exchange for slightly heightened physical capability.

Dream Until Your Dreams Come True - The user takes a spear and exits the dimension with it. DO's clouds separate from its body and surround the target, then DO throws the spear, with enough force to go straight through the victim, into a cloud, causing the spear to go through another cloud, then another, and another, dealing heavy, if not lethal, damage.

(This kinda feels a little OP, but I feel the draw backs are significant enough to make it a bit weaker, but still on the stronger side)


User: Jens Molnig

Occupation: IKEA Employee

Appearance: Brown, curly hair with brown eyes. Wears an unzipped dark blue jacket and a black shirt underneath with jeans and white shoes.

Character: A 21 year-old Swedish man who lives a secluded lifestyle in the suburbs of Backa, Sweden. Talented with a guitar, though prefers not to show it. When he goes, he tries to fit in with a crowd. He spaces out at times, but he has a wild imagination. Often researches physics and the chemical makeup of the world around him. 


NOTE: No, I'm not European.

NOTE 2: No, I'm not gay, either.

I am neither gay nor European.

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thats me and my stand that i drew.

Damn, nice art! And also, cannibal stand? That's quite rare...

Yeah, Since IC3PEAK is a Wendigo-like stand, i figured it might work.. Could be lethal in the wrong hands tho... But in my hands, its f r e e  r e a l  e s t a t e

had to do it

You have officially triggered IC3PEAK. 
Look at what you've done. The Enemy stand users are here....

wow

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Stand Name: Guns 'N' Roses (referencing the rock band of the same name)

Type: Mixed Range

Ability: Human Arsenal (not sure how to put that)

Appearance: A robotic humanoid figure with a skull for a head. Dressed in a black trench coat with black gloves, pants, and boots with an all-black flamenco hat (minus the tassles hanging down) and a rose in its mouth.

Description: A humanoid Stand capable of transforming it or its user's limbs or torso into various firearms.

Range: 2 meters away from user, in exchange for added range from the firearms

Limitations: Only two limbs can be transformed at a time, with limited ammo that can be replenished both manually and automatically.

Attacks

Firearm Transformation: The Stand's or User's limb (hand, forearm, whole arm or foot, lower leg, full leg) spins briefly and transforms into a firearm the user is familiar with. It has to be the same size as the weapon, meaning it has to be as long as part of an arm or leg.

Bullet Barrage: The user/Stand transforms both arms into assault rifles and empties their magazines (think Aerosmith's Vola Barrage)

Bullet Punch: GNR performs a rapid flurry of punches, each punch having the same speed and force as a bullet. Your standard Stand barrage with a finisher.

Cannonfire: A cannon erects from the user/Stand's chest and fires a cannonball. Is very lethal if not dodged.

Pistol Kick: The user/Stand's foot transforms into a pistol and kicks the opponent then fires once to a few times.

NOTE: The Stand's firearms have unlimited ammo and the Stand itself is faster, making it a better option in a more organized fight against another Stand User.


User: Carlo Tirador

Occupation: Professional hunter, secretly an assassin.

Appearance: A famed Spanish hunter often found in forests and jungles across Europe. Has brown hair and green eyes, about 5'8'', and wears a black trench coat with several pockets, black pants tucked in to a pair of black army boots, much like his Stand.

Character: Off the job, he's a bit of a flirt, and has many admirers, especially in his homeland of Spain. On the job, he is lethal to his target, both as a hunter and assassin, and takes his job very seriously. He hides in the trees and fires on wild game (an animal hunted for sport or food) desired in the country he's in at the moment. As an assassin, he is hired by various organized crime groups to track down and kill a target for money, most of the criminals being completely unaware of his Stand. The only ones who know are criminals who are Stand Users themselves.

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Stand Name: Hands Off

Stand Type: Humanoid

Stand Power: To create arms that can potrude from any surface that it touches.

Example: The stand touches a wall, railing, ground, objects, or other stands (does not work on itself), etc and have any number of arms rise out and fullfill whatever task they're summoned for. (Grasping, restraining, holding, pushing, pulling, etc)

Weakness/Limitations: They're just arms after all, someone strong enough can break their grasp. Once the task is complete they go away. A give away they're being summoned is a faint black circle in the area they're appointed. 


Power: B

Speed: C

Range: C

Durability: D

Precision: A

Potential: E

I'm getting Nico Robin from One Piece vibes from this stand, not that i complain though

I will be honest with you. I have never watched one piece past the episode where they fought the clown for the first time and they defeated him by tickling his feet.  But I'm glad you enjoy it. ☺️

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Well yeah, the early part of the series are just pure comedical non-sense, which then later evolves into an epic clusterfuck of dramatical escapade while still having that same comedical non-sense but with lower amount of it.

My point about your stand is that since Nico Robin's power is interesting, it also makes that i think your stand is interesting too. Summoning hands may look like only a simple and weak power, but it's an OP power if used cleverly like making a whole barricade with nothing but hands for example (Robin does that later in the series).

I'll have to watch the show, after I've caught up on JoJo's. 😊

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Oh, we're posting our generator results!

Stand Name: Zero to Hero

A manipulative, self aware stand that can project a saint like image of it's previous user once they die. It only works on people who've witnessed the dead body, even a glimpse of a finger. When that happend they are moved to worship the stand in any way.

The Stand is visible to stand users and those who have seen the body of it's previous user.

Power: E
Speed: E
Range: E
Durability: A
Presicion: E
Potential: B

The way that it works is that the people who have seen the previous stand users dead body are so overcome and moved by the projected memory that they cant stand to see anything happen to it. Outside of the one skill of projecting, The Stand cannot do anything. However, the people who are under the Stands influence will put themselves on the line inorder to protect the Stand and/or it's current user if they bare witness to a potential dangerous circumstance.

I like your stand! And to answer your question I think a lot of people are on their phones than their desktop/laptop so it's easier to just port over stands. Plus this is the only reliable place to get feed back and find more fans of the show.

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Stand Master:
Alan Heredia


Stand name:
Master of Puppets


Musical Reference:
Metallica - Master of Puppets (From the album of the same name)
The design and skills are also references to the album, (Disposable Heroes is a song from it).


Skill 1:
His ability allows him to control people's souls (and bodies) based on their negative emotions, such as anger, sadness, fear, etc.
If the target is a stand user, depending on his willpower, Master of Puppets is able to control his stand.


Skill 2; Disposable heroes:
Using emotions such as sadness from relatives, or hatred of having been killed (if that is the case), he is able to bring the dead, although not as they used to be ...

Stand limitations:

Master of Puppets can control one person per finger, that is, it can control only 10 people at a time, but its effectiveness decreases, it is more effective 10 fingers in a single person, than using only one finger, it also depends on willpower and From the magnitude of the victim's negative emotion, this stand is also not very physically strong, so it should not be used in close combat.


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Stand Name: Enter Sandman (Metallica reference)

Ability: Insomnia Inducement

Desc: This stand can cause target to lose their ability to sleep, which has detrimental effects on organisms that rely on sleep for personal health or psychological ease. Over time effects include various levels of mental deprecation, insanity and potentially death.

The user may activate it's ability on people who's asleep. When Enter Sandman is summoned, it will phase through into the target's dream, and will give the target the worst nightmare they possibly would have until they woke up. After the target were up he'll never be able to sleep again even if they used any method to go back to sleep as by the post-effect of Enter Sandman, until the target died or the stand user is forced to retract their stand. 

The stand is also given alot of buff as an act of self-defense measures if the target is concious about their dream and tried to fight back. If the stand is defeated in the target's dream, the stand will return itself to its user.

Form: This stand technically doesn't have any form as people's perception on their worst nightmare may vary, but physically, it mostly take form of "The Sandman" (search it on google for more exposure) with an extra addition of letters that consist of Insomnia, Dream, Nightmare, Sleep, and Wake tattoed to his body. 

Condition: Can only be applied to one target, until the target died or if the stand is forced to retract. If the target is somehow unconcious, they may be able to enter the dream world again, but they will still encounter with Enter Sandman as the stand actually didnt go anywhere and will only go if the condition is fulfilled.

Limit: The stand user has a permanent insomnia, with an exchange of having an enhanced endurance and stamina, and any sort of potential development is nullified.


Insomnia inducement, I like it! Just for clarification, though, would the effect end if the stand was manually retracted?

Of course, it was already apart of the information on the description and condition part.

But doing that wouldn't help protect the user at all since Enter Sandman's physical form only exist in the target's dream, and the user already has a buff of enhanced endurance and stamina that was given by the stand, with the exchange of a permanent insomnia and nullified development potential.

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Another Stando for today!


Stand Name: I'll Be There (Michael Jackson song reference)

Ability: Stand Mimicry

Description: I'll Be There is a Stand that resides in its user's eye. It's the weakest Stand of all in its base form, but it can be extremely powerful if its ability activates.

Form: IBT resides in the user's eye and copies the abilities and shape of the Stand of any Stand user it makes direct eye contact with (as in they're looking each other in the eye) with, down to every last detail.

Range: The user's line of sight

Limitations: Ability only activates when both the user/stand and the target make direct eye contact with each other. If fighting a very experienced Stand user who knows their Stand very well, it can be problematic, even though IBT sends the information of the copied Stand to the brain, but not any advanced techniques. The effect wears off after ten minutes. The effect is blocked by any solid object, including glass.

Appearance: IBT's true appearance is unknown to everyone, including its user.

Attacks/Abilities

Mimic: If the user and the target (as in the stand's user, not the stand itself) look each other in the eye,  IBT replicates the target's Stand, if the target is a Stand User, for ten minutes.


User Profile

User: Akira Tamagashi

Age: 21

Appearance: A 5'6'' man with straight black hair styled to the side. Has one blue eye and one red eye. Lives a very boring life and wishes he could be somebody else with a more interesting life.

Personality: He's just a man who recently moved to Morioh, hoping he could find some spice of life there, as he had recently heard of bizarre events occuring there. 

Background: He discovered his Stand at the age of 10 when its ability activated for the first time when he and an old American man in tan clothes and hat looked each other in the eye when he was coming home from a vacation in Egypt. When they were leaving, thorny purple vines started sprouting from his arms. He eventually got them under control, but right when he had, they disappeared. Before that day, his life had been an average one. Average grades, average personality, just the definition of your average schoolboy.


Any thoughts? 

CRAAAAAAAAP FORGOT ABOUT ILLUSO

name change time

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Cool concept, i like it. Though i have a question, is it only the ability that is copied? Or it'll also copy the stand form too? Like if IBT's ability activates, are we also going to be able to summon the stand that is copied? Sorry for this much of a question, because this stand seems very interesting, not gonna lie.

It would copy the form of the copied Stand and would appear in its original form (not affected by Requiem or other form changes, such as Star Platinum) and would be able to use any abilities the copied Stand could use, just slightly weaker. In the case of more powerful attacks such as Time Stop, the duration would be decreased to the amount the user would know. If IBT copied The World, it would be capable of using Time Stop, but only for as long as the user would know at the time. Once again, thank you for the questions!

Nice, and one more question. If the target that was going to be copied is invisible or do not have any exact physical form, like Achtung Baby or my newest stand for example, are they also going to be an exception? Or is there any technique that will make IBT able to copy them?

As long as the user and the target can both see each other and look each other in the eye for it to work. If IBT's user can make out the physical appearance of the target the ability would work. In the case of Achtung Baby, if the user was covered in makeup or some way the user could see or make out the face, the ability could work. As in the case of a stand like Enter Sandman, both IBT's user and Enter Sandman's users would need to make eye contact, not the user and the stand.

Something I didn't mention in the description, it would need to be bare eye contact. If the target is wearing something to cover their eyes, such as glasses (with lenses of course), or was behind a solid object, the ability would not activate.

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my turn now

Stand name: Neon Trees (referencing the band of the same name)

Ability: Chromokinesis (Manipulation of colors)

Description: Neon Trees is a Stand capable of absorbing the color around it , and converting it into energy in its body. When that energy is released, it can deal quite a bit of damage, depending on the amount of energy released and the concentration of it, but cannot damage anybody who is colorblind. 

Form: When retracted, it takes the form of the user's shadow. When it's being summoned, it emerges from the user's shadow facing the direction opposite to which the shadow was pointing.

Range: The maximum absorption range is 6 meters around the stand. The stand itself can move within a range a bit shorter than that of Heirophant Green's.

Limitations: Neon Trees can only have a certain amount of energy in it at a time before both it and its user begin to increase their body temperature at an alarming rate, causing a fever or spontaneous combustion. Its color attacks cannot damage anybody who is completely colorblind (only sees in black and white).

Appearance: Neon Trees emerges as a pitch black humanoid figure with neon pink sunglasses (think the ones people would wear indoors) and an afro through which it absorbs and distributes color.

Attacks/Abilities

Spectrum Barrage: A barrage attack where Neon Trees focuses its energy into its hands and feet, and releases them through a rapid barrage of punches and kicks.

Spectrum Finisher: Neon Trees finishes its barrage by focusing its remaining barrage energy into one hand or foot, and punches/kicks the victim, ending its barrage.

Chroma Shot: Neon Trees focuses energy into its hand and releases it as a ball of color, about  three quarters the size of Narancia Ghirga's Aerosmith.

Chroma Beam: Similar to Chroma Shot but it's focused as a constant ray released with both hands.

World of Color: Neon Trees absorbs all the energy it can and releases it all at once as a massive ray of light. Meant as a last resort, and is very similar to Bites the Dust.

Blind: Neon Trees focuses a bit of energy into its fingers and pokes the victim's eyes, blinding them once the pain subsides. Also works on other Stands.


What do you think?

It's a bit tempting to change the name of the user but it's still a work in progress...

Color Manipulation, eh? Cool concept once again. And yet again, i have a question. The thing is about colorblind, is that there is 3 types of them. Red-green, Blue-yellow, and total colorblindness. Will that make any exception? Because being colorblind doesnt mean they cant completely see any color, only a certain amount of it. Unless if they are in the type of total colorblind, of course.

Oh, and about the effect, if the ability activates, what happened to the area that the color is stolen on? Will it turn to be a grayscale?

It will turn into a grayscale until the energy is released and hits something.

Total colorblindness means total immunity to attacks. Otherwise, it would depend on how much color of the attack they would be able to see. They would take damage equal to the percentage of color they would be able to see. For example, if it's 25% red and no green, the victim would take 75% of the attack and the rest would return to the spot it was taken from. Thank you for the questions!

Oh okay, i understand. Very nice concept indeed.

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Alright time to write another one

Stand Name: Night Prowler (AC/DC reference)

Ability: Darkness Mimicry

Desc: The user of this stand can transform their body completely into darkness/shadows. The user can assume a two-dimensional form, extend outward to become a larger shadow, blend into the darkness/shadows completely, or even teleport through them.

Form: It is a suit-type of stand. It has a form of a dark cloak that wraps around the user. Pattern of greek meandros is decorated all over the cloak, giving it a gloom and mystifying design. This cloak however, is a bound-type of stand, meaning that non-stand users can also see it.

Condition: The stand's power ability is activated when the user hides himself inside the cloak in a dark or shadowy place.

Limit: Can only be used on a dark or shadowy place, and if a dark area is being lighted or illuminated, that area is no longer accessible until that area is dark again.

Effects: When Darkness Mimicry activates, the greek meandros pattern on the cloak will radiate a faint dark grey light. He will then drown himself in the dark or any shadowy place and gain complete control and flexibility around it. (Similiar to Black Sabbath, but minus the strength, durability, and speed buff.)

Range : As far as the dark or shadowy place goes.


Stage two of the Stand: Night Prowler Back in Black (yes, another AC/DC reference.)

New Ability: Absolute Darkness

Desc: The user is able to create a field of absolute impenetrable darkness that completely negates sight and may also dull or even completely negate the other senses.

Combined with previous and new ability, if there is no dark or shadowy place surrounding the user to move around, the user can just make a new one and then assert dominance over the enemy inside it.

Condition : Has to shout "Night Prowler Back in Black" in order to activate (just like in the series).

Limit : 3 hours cooldown, and Absolute darkness only lasts for a minute. The maximum range of the field is 100 meters.

Overpowered version of the stand: Night Prowler Requiem

New Ability: Darkness Embodiment

Desc: The stand is now the physical manifestation or personification of Darkness, the all-encompassing void which acts as the counterbalance to light. The darkness manifested is made of pure negativity and lack of illumination. The user of this stand is able to essentially tapping into the core of different forms of darkness itself to assert their dominion.

No more description needed, the user of this stand is simply one with the darkness.

Condition: It's a requiem stand.

Limit : There is no limit.


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This is just a long-short story about the stand user that i wrote to spend my free time. Feel free to read it, and please leave any suggestion or critic cause that may help me become better in the future.

Stand User : Razor Sedge (yet another AC/DC reference)

Razor Sedge works as a hitman.

At a cold and frightening darkness in the night with a dagger in his pocket, Razor was out to assassinate a fortune teller who is a famous celebrity that recently got his popularity from a TV show. When the perfect time to strike had come, he didnt hesitate to take that chance and ambushes him from behind. He then stabbed the fortune teller with his dagger in the back, and it goes straight to the heart. The poor fortune teller's body fell off to the ground, cold and lifeless.

The moment he thought that he had murdered his target, a hand grabbed his shoulder. Razor flinched and he was completely caught by suprise, mixed with confusion and panic. It was the fortune teller.

The should-have-been-died fortune teller then walks slowly, closing in the to the frightened hitman, and whispered 

"You picked the wrong target, my dear friend". 

Suddenly, Razor felt a very painful jolt in his stomach, and flew over to a nearby lamppost. A punch to the gut, physically, that comes out of nowhere.

Razor, who was almost knocked out from the sudden attack, quickly regains his balance and tried to attack the fortune teller again, only to no avail and resulted in him being flown again, this time to a wall. This time, the punch was even more powerful it broke Razor's ribs, and the hitman yelled in pain. The knife were also flown off far away.

The fortune teller then walks to the defenseless hitman. He crouches, and said to him,

"I dont want to kill you. I saw in my vision that you're the saviour. We must've been entangled by fate to meet in here. You're a hitman right? How about if i give you an arrow that holds unbelievable powers that goes beyond anyone's imaginations inside it, in exchange of leaving me alone?"

The hitman didnt believe anything about what the fortune teller said, but he would do anything to survive even if it involved some stupid fairytale things, which then he agreed to the deal.

"Very well, and it's nice to see you being a good child obeying his father's words. Here it is my dear, use it to however you like as long as you're doing it for the weak and fight for justice." said the fortune teller as he dropped an arrow like object on the floor.

"Remember, never meet me again, until fate tells me that my vision about you is correct" 

The fortune teller then walks away an disappears into the darkness, completely gone in the eye. Razor then gets up and grab the unknown object, analyzing it. Confused by what it is and the origin of it, he would just put it on his pocket and waste no time to go back at his home. After all that trouble, he definitely needed some peaceful rest at home, and calm his mind down.

After a very long walk to his home, he opened the door, and was greeted by a man, currently wielding what had being seen as a knife right in front of him.

Razor, trying to solve the mystery of why there's another hitman in his house, guessed that his employer knew that Razor failed, so he hired another hitman to kill him with the sole reason of cleaning the tracks left behind.

The poor hitman who was just want to have some nice and peaceful rest, quickly lunges in front of him and tried to disarm him. The opposing hitman knew and tried to counter the attack, only to be counter-countered by Razor and the knife then dropped to the ground.

As the opposing hitman were trying to get the knife back, an idea appeared on the hitman's head, as he remembered that he had an arrow-shaped object in his pocket. He then tried to attack the opposing hitman with it, but the enemy saw him and then he kicked him off, making the hitman dropped the arrow and falling to the floor.

The opposing hitman gave up on finding the knife and grabs the arrow. He then tried to stab Razor in the chest. Razor tried to stop it, but he lacked the strength due to the previous event, and the arrow ended up stabbing him. 

Seemingly successful on killing the target, the opposing hitman then waste no time to clean off the evidences, and quickly left the location.

Little did the opposing hitman know, that the arrow didnt exactly kill his target. Instead, it chooses him as a stand user. 

When Razor woke up, he was greeted by dark cloak in his body. Confused, he tried to take it off, but it still stuck. He tried punching it, but it gives no effect and instead he gets hurt. When he completely covered himself using the cloak, he felt that the cloak was radiating, and then he suddenly drowns into the floor. It felt like he's invisible and intangible, and he moved freely all over the house.

When he flicked the light switch, suddenly he lost control of the power and fell to the ground. It was at this moment that he remembered what the fortune teller told him.

"Am i a saviour? Can i save people? But i'm just a hitman, how am i supposed to save people if the only thing i can do is murder?" 

The thought crossed his mind, and he remembered that his main reason of being a hitman is because he was sick of those rich bastards who abuses money and slaves the weak, while getting away with it by corrupting the system. That thought then fades away when he instead started working for them, almost changed his main reason of being a hitman.

It was at this night, that marked the start of the anti-hero, who hides in the shadow and kills them who abuses the weak for their own gain. He who lives in the darkness, raising justice behind the scenes.

Razor hoped that one day he meets that fortune teller again, to thank him for returning his main purpose of being a hitman, and may even have a rematch again each other. He also hoped that he may find that employer who hired a hitman against him, and seek revenge.

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