Encountered a bug; if you choose to not have a persona in the prologue (just being yourself), then choose the kind and humble response, the kind/rude stat bar will break.
Edit: As far as I can tell, this then results in the character being perceived as 100% rude (there is a TopOfIt comment said that my character's arrogance was apparently hot, despite avoiding rude and arrogant choices where possible)
Edit2: Also, apparently, there's no way to restart mid-game? Which seems like a potential oversight.
sigh Idk if i'm mixing up blogs but on tumblr I believe the author has unfortunately dropped the game. So none of that will be coming unless Sahara decides to come back to it one day ๐ฎโ๐จ๐ญ They have a lot going on if I remember correctly.
Just checked the tumblr, and yeah, it's gone. It's unfortunate, but if they need to prioritise themselves, then I'd rather they do that over anything else.
This is becoming one of my absolute fav IFs i never knew I'd love sports IFs so much.. I'm the last person that could ever be mistaken for an athlete lmao but the writing is so bomb it's insane. Stop making so many damn appealing ROs tho you are making my MC a flirty hoe ๐๐ ๐คฃโฅ๏ธ
HAHA this is the absolute highest praise i could get!! i'm so glad you're enjoying it, and i fear your mc will only struggle more the further in we get hehe
think the wendy ones should be good now, afraid the interviews still giving me a slight headache so may need slightly longer on that!! thanks so much for your help <3
i adore the update (and the story in general) you have so much potential! i love how the concept is unique and the characters are well made already. my only request is you donโt stress yourself out. itโs normal to feel overwhelmed and i want you to know its totally okay if you ever need breaks! especially in the if community, as readers tend to pressure the authors.
as for the update, i encountered a few coding errors whilst playing through the new chapter. i didnโt screenshot them but i can go back and replay to find the errors again if youโd like to pinpoint where they are.
For a moment I forgot this was a demo๐ญ๐ญ Literally know already that Jamie(Happy late birthday btw??๐ญ) and Alex are gonna be the loves of my life lsakjw (And you, author are a patootie here's a cookie<33๐ช)
love the demo, but I got another bug. If I choose to have a crush on alex and on the moment we meet jamie(without choosing any options) it immediately sets me to having a crush on jamie too even if I never choose to.
looked through the code and it's just a visual thing, messed up with the variables in the stat page :P will fix it w the next update!! (edit: just to clarify it doesn't affect the gameplay in any way!!)
i've been looking into this and can't seem to be able to replicate this error, do you mind telling me what browser you're using and at what point in the prologue does it appear like this? :)
I get the same error with the [number NaN] with the outgoing stat when meeting with jamie and I choose 'Resist the urge to bolt' option
Edit: Replayed it and got another NaN error, but with the formal casual stat when I choose 'Plaster on a large grin...' when jamie asks us whats our goal
Edit2: I also realize that when I choose ''I'm too good for this'' it rises the humble stat and the "everyone needs to review the basics" choice rises the arrogant stat
Edit3: same Number NaN error with the outgoing stat when choosing "can't believe you forgot about me" with alex
Most of them is OK now . One more small bug, after "Pretend to look around. "Who're you talking to?"
When it comes to page design... I have a suggestion to add "back to game" button on the profile page. The only way out is "GO BACK" which is quite annoying because you have to go back through all the clicks on the profile page to get back to the game (I hope I explained it well ๐ค)
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Encountered a bug; if you choose to not have a persona in the prologue (just being yourself), then choose the kind and humble response, the kind/rude stat bar will break.
Edit: As far as I can tell, this then results in the character being perceived as 100% rude (there is a TopOfIt comment said that my character's arrogance was apparently hot, despite avoiding rude and arrogant choices where possible)
Edit2: Also, apparently, there's no way to restart mid-game? Which seems like a potential oversight.
seconded this ! desperately needs a restart button, i play most ifs a bunch of times to get all the options :/
sigh Idk if i'm mixing up blogs but on tumblr I believe the author has unfortunately dropped the game. So none of that will be coming unless Sahara decides to come back to it one day ๐ฎโ๐จ๐ญ They have a lot going on if I remember correctly.
Just checked the tumblr, and yeah, it's gone. It's unfortunate, but if they need to prioritise themselves, then I'd rather they do that over anything else.
WHAT HAPPENED TO JAMIE NO
haha he's back in chapter two!! have a lot up my sleeve for jamiemancers to make up for his lack of appearance in chapter one :)
the moment i saw the secret ro, and that the route was angsty and toxic, i was like
yes, that one
it'll be a fun one to write for sure :]
omgg i've played the choicescript demo but i didn't know you have a twine demo!! love it <3
glad you found your way over here!!! <3
Holy fuck this is amazing
ahhh thank you so much!!
This is becoming one of my absolute fav IFs i never knew I'd love sports IFs so much.. I'm the last person that could ever be mistaken for an athlete lmao but the writing is so bomb it's insane. Stop making so many damn appealing ROs tho you are making my MC a flirty hoe ๐๐ ๐คฃโฅ๏ธ
HAHA this is the absolute highest praise i could get!! i'm so glad you're enjoying it, and i fear your mc will only struggle more the further in we get hehe
Hello, I got this error when choosing the option to miss my mom or not.
Also got this error.
thanks for letting me know! both these two should be fixed if you play through again :]
Alright, I'll play through again.
Fixed.
I kept getting errors during the interview, I'm not sure what happened.
Got these errors when speaking to Wendy.
think the wendy ones should be good now, afraid the interviews still giving me a slight headache so may need slightly longer on that!! thanks so much for your help <3
You're welcome. I enjoyed the new update and can't wait to see what comes next.
i adore the update (and the story in general) you have so much potential! i love how the concept is unique and the characters are well made already. my only request is you donโt stress yourself out. itโs normal to feel overwhelmed and i want you to know its totally okay if you ever need breaks! especially in the if community, as readers tend to pressure the authors.
thank you so much!!! your words genuinely mean the world to me, i'll definitely try my best to pace myself ๐ซถ๐ซถ
as for the errors, if you could send them over that'd be amazing! i'll definitely have to look into getting beta testers in the future ๐ฅฒ
For a moment I forgot this was a demo๐ญ๐ญ Literally know already that Jamie(Happy late birthday btw??๐ญ) and Alex are gonna be the loves of my life lsakjw (And you, author are a patootie here's a cookie<33๐ช)
haha thank you for reading + enjoying!! i'll cherish the cookie <3
i love it already!!! cant wait for future updates aaashagsdjksgdaks!!!!!
thank you so much!! means the world to me that you enjoyed it, can't wait to get chapter one done and out :D
love the demo, but I got another bug. If I choose to have a crush on alex and on the moment we meet jamie(without choosing any options) it immediately sets me to having a crush on jamie too even if I never choose to.
looked through the code and it's just a visual thing, messed up with the variables in the stat page :P will fix it w the next update!! (edit: just to clarify it doesn't affect the gameplay in any way!!)
Personality stats are kinda weird
i've been looking into this and can't seem to be able to replicate this error, do you mind telling me what browser you're using and at what point in the prologue does it appear like this? :)
I get the same error with the [number NaN] with the outgoing stat when meeting with jamie and I choose 'Resist the urge to bolt' option
Edit: Replayed it and got another NaN error, but with the formal casual stat when I choose 'Plaster on a large grin...' when jamie asks us whats our goal
Edit2: I also realize that when I choose ''I'm too good for this'' it rises the humble stat and the "everyone needs to review the basics" choice rises the arrogant stat
Edit3: same Number NaN error with the outgoing stat when choosing "can't believe you forgot about me" with alex
these should all be fixed now! thanks so much for letting me know :)
Most of them is OK now . One more small bug, after "Pretend to look around. "Who're you talking to?"
When it comes to page design... I have a suggestion to add "back to game" button on the profile page. The only way out is "GO BACK" which is quite annoying because you have to go back through all the clicks on the profile page to get back to the game (I hope I explained it well ๐ค)
omg i already love this story so much and i'm really excited to see it on twine ~ thanks so much for all your hard work!
thank you so much for the sweet words, means a lot !! <33