but I'm excited because it's about angel and there's no any other similar WIPs currently active. I hope MC will be able to have new wings someday, poor thing ;-;
Don't get angry immediately, it's genuine question. I don't understand all this weird pronouns stuff that I see on the English internet, especially on Tumblr. I don't have it in my native language.
Text is too dark on a black background. It's hard to read (especially for someone who prefers light mode). Apart from that, I also recommend adding a few other fonts.
Yes. I think there is no point in reading and following new WIPs because each one gets abandoned sooner or later, but sometimes I like a story so much that I can't resist.
I recommend changing the text color because it is definitely too dark for black background and very hard to read and also add light mode (the lack of this effectively discourages some people from reading).
Someone recommended it to me, but the description of the game isn't very... exciting? I mean, MC is a nobody and has to babysit and support some prince's ambitions? All ROs seem to have more interesting roles than MC.
