suprisingly good for an undertale VN, most of the ones you can find on itch.io are not too good. The writing is immensely good, and I love the customisation. However(and this may have just been something on my end), it felt like the game skipped MAJOR interactions, and bugged a little bit towards the end when I think it was coded to reference those interactions. Nothing game-breaking, you can still make it to the end just fine, but it does break immersion a little bit. Incas you're wondering, I think I missed out on a whole Undyne and a whole Alphys interaction.
aaaa i love this sm!! i pulled an all-nighter to finish it since it hooked me and was so well written I barely noticed the time past ijffvuh.
i have only placed the sans-romance route but the pet names, banter, and chemistry were so good. i was giggling and twirling a lock of my hair the whole time.
ty for such a good game! i have been playing through some of the other ones you posted as well as the siren call game and this is my fav so far <3
so, long comment aside, tysm for such nicely written and customizable games. little me would have been ecstatic to have this in early 2018 haha. excuse my gushing ToT <3
AAAAAH !! i played this game like 3 times already, the writing is so well done and the story is so enchanting. I had so much fun playing and seeing how the characters acted as well :D !! SUCH A GREAT GAME OVERALL !!!
Found a couple of typos in the new bonus scenes. In the Sans + Gaster bonus scene: Page starts with "If asked, Wingding would freely admit that he loves his brothers." Line is "Nonsense. Inane gibberish." Insane instead of inane :D
In Asriel's Judgement Hall scene: "As soon as Asriel ensured his beloved MC was asleep, he calmly walked away." Line starts with "Wingding, who was seated at his desk", Asriel instead of Ariel.
Thank you for these little updates!! Please remember to take breaks!
IM NOT CRYING YOU'RE CRYING- T-T. In all seriousness I adore this game. I laughed like a clown, I cried like a baby, I blushed and kicked my feet like a lunatic, and my heart has never been so full. Thank you for the experience and I hope you never stop creating. :)
You. You are so talented.. I cried a bucket of tears, I became emotional in the middle of the night while playing this game, and never have I felt this good after spend an amount of time playing a text-based game this good. Your game bring me back to my childhood, when I used to be a kiddo with youtube addiction. I spent days watching Pewdiepie playing Undertale, exciting waiting for his video to know what happened next. The music, the line, the pun you've typed, exactly fit in what nostalgic im having here. Thank you so much for this beautiful piece <^^>
(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄) Thank you!! While I'm sorry you cried, I'm happier you were able to get so attached to this game. Undertale is such a beloved fandom, and I'm delighted I could help remind you about it & simpler times.
I first played just for nostalgia, but I didn't expect to really love this game <3 Lots of details are put into it and I love reading all of it. Really looking forward to play the other Undertale AU games!
P.S. The romance endings are really wholesome, didn't expect to fell so hard for Wingding :'))
I rarely comment on stuff but omfg this game is beautiful??? I actually got hella emotional on some parts, and I have very mixed feelings about the neutral ending- 😭
Gonna replay it a few thousand times to get all routes and romances lol
Thank you SO much for creating this game. I had so much fun playing it, can you please make more Undertale AU narrative-based games like this? I'll be looking forward to playing them
Hey Darkpetal16, quick question. I've been playing one of your other games, and I'm currently stumped on how to get the romance route with Swap sans. I've been on the friendship route with Dust sans in the Dust tale game, which I'm okay with but, I just want to figure out how to romance Swap sans. If you can tell how let me know (hope it's not too much to ask). Have a nice day!
Question, cause not sure if this is a bug or not. I was playing the harem route again and noticed you only get the 'bold flirting' actions, even if you only used shy one earlier. Is this supposed to happen?
I played it bold the first time so I never noticed till now.
Hello! I've found a mobile glitch. I was on the harem route and I chose not to go to Sans in hotlands and then after that there was no choice to progress.
I love the new update! There seems to be a problem with the scene after you approach sans for food and he kills you (in the route where you romance both sans and papyrus), after that scene you can't progress anymore (during the scene where you meet the ice cream stand guy). In this same pathway choice, if you approach sans and get killed but continue, it forces you back onto the friendship path despite romancing both Papy and Sans. Other than that, I think it would be so funny if you can romance all three of the Gaster brothers. XD
(First Picture) This is the scene where you make a decision on whether you want to go to the ice cream stand or go to the city and there are no answers so you can't continue.
(END OF HOTLANDS) In the recap after you decide to go to sans which results in you dying, you get this screen where it says you are on the friendship route while romancing Papy and Sans.
Thank you! This has been fixed in the new update. :)
There is a way to romance all 3, however, if you miss any important steps it'll force you back onto the friendship route. It's meant to be a tricky route. But if you need help, Twinkle on Youtube posted a walkthrough on how to get it!
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suprisingly good for an undertale VN, most of the ones you can find on itch.io are not too good. The writing is immensely good, and I love the customisation. However(and this may have just been something on my end), it felt like the game skipped MAJOR interactions, and bugged a little bit towards the end when I think it was coded to reference those interactions. Nothing game-breaking, you can still make it to the end just fine, but it does break immersion a little bit. Incas you're wondering, I think I missed out on a whole Undyne and a whole Alphys interaction.
aaaa i love this sm!! i pulled an all-nighter to finish it since it hooked me and was so well written I barely noticed the time past ijffvuh.
i have only placed the sans-romance route but the pet names, banter, and chemistry were so good. i was giggling and twirling a lock of my hair the whole time.
ty for such a good game! i have been playing through some of the other ones you posted as well as the siren call game and this is my fav so far <3
so, long comment aside, tysm for such nicely written and customizable games. little me would have been ecstatic to have this in early 2018 haha. excuse my gushing ToT <3
the tab reloaded and I lost all my progress wahhhh
Is Darkpetal a soon to be romance option. Because I am in love with all of their projects ^3^
i started singing four big guys to shyren it was amazing
BAHAHAAHAHA
FOUR BIG GUYS 💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻
AND THEY BUST ON MY THIGHS
BLOW UP MY GUTS LIKE THE FOURTH OF JULY
I haven’t gone that far yet with the lyrics lmaooo
Flowey is such a sweetheart like
(aggressively grabs)
how do i see shyren again?
this is the coolest~! my new favourite game, fr
You make the best undertale story games
i feel like this game is basically just: haha dont kill me
(with rizz)in a good way btw
LOL true XD
AAAAAH !! i played this game like 3 times already, the writing is so well done and the story is so enchanting. I had so much fun playing and seeing how the characters acted as well :D !! SUCH A GREAT GAME OVERALL !!!
Found a couple of typos in the new bonus scenes.
In the Sans + Gaster bonus scene:
Page starts with "If asked, Wingding would freely admit that he loves his brothers."
Line is "Nonsense. Inane gibberish." Insane instead of inane :D
In Asriel's Judgement Hall scene:
"As soon as Asriel ensured his beloved MC was asleep, he calmly walked away."
Line starts with "Wingding, who was seated at his desk", Asriel instead of Ariel.
Thank you for these little updates!! Please remember to take breaks!
really good game, wish we could do genocide tho
Thank you! :D This is a pacifist only game though.
IM NOT CRYING YOU'RE CRYING- T-T. In all seriousness I adore this game. I laughed like a clown, I cried like a baby, I blushed and kicked my feet like a lunatic, and my heart has never been so full. Thank you for the experience and I hope you never stop creating. :)
Aww thank you!! I'm so glad you've enjoyed this game so far, I really appreciate you playing & commenting.
Just wondering, what did you make this on??
Also love the game, can't wait to finish getting all the endings :D
Twine Sugarcube2
You. You are so talented.. I cried a bucket of tears, I became emotional in the middle of the night while playing this game, and never have I felt this good after spend an amount of time playing a text-based game this good. Your game bring me back to my childhood, when I used to be a kiddo with youtube addiction. I spent days watching Pewdiepie playing Undertale, exciting waiting for his video to know what happened next. The music, the line, the pun you've typed, exactly fit in what nostalgic im having here. Thank you so much for this beautiful piece <^^>
(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)
Thank you!! While I'm sorry you cried, I'm happier you were able to get so attached to this game. Undertale is such a beloved fandom, and I'm delighted I could help remind you about it & simpler times.
Hope you are doing well.
I first played just for nostalgia, but I didn't expect to really love this game <3 Lots of details are put into it and I love reading all of it. Really looking forward to play the other Undertale AU games!
P.S. The romance endings are really wholesome, didn't expect to fell so hard for Wingding :'))
:D Nostalgia can be such a comforting delight, I'm grateful you gave this game a chance. Thank you kindly for playing & commenting.
P.S. Thank you! WD is such a funny man to write.
I adore all of you're games and my friend want's to make a comic of this game and a few of the other one's too is that okay?
Can you please tell your friend that i’m already taking care of Mafiafell?
I did
we're gonna do it anyway though:)
okay,just so you guys know I’ll post my comic of this on here
pov: skiing w/ Sans for the first time
(Papyrus and Wingdings taking pictures and videos)
Sans:(zooming past his bros at high speed)“I CAN‘T SLOW DOWN!——“
Wingdings:“Wha—?“ | Papyrus:“WOAH—“
Y/N:(Following Sans at high speed)“SANS!——“
Wingdings:*snicker*“You got that on camera right?“
Papyrus:*snort*“OF COURSE I DID HAHAHA“
Wingdings:“We are so not gonna let him forget that,are we?“
Papyrus:“Yup“ 😂😂😂
How do I romance Wingding
Don‘t romance anyone and wait until the point where you get the second piece of the locket.Say that you‘d like to see his picture inside
And you’re good to go:)
thank youuuu😁😁😁
have fun bud :)
Yall how do i romance with flowey im trying to get all the endings-
Flirt w/ him twice in the ruins,don‘t try to romance anyone else,in the true lab ask him to help ya w/ the wires in the water
Hope this helps :)
I rarely comment on stuff but omfg this game is beautiful??? I actually got hella emotional on some parts, and I have very mixed feelings about the neutral ending- 😭
Gonna replay it a few thousand times to get all routes and romances lol
Oh my gosh, thank you so kindly! I really appreciate you playing my game. :) I hope you were able to get all the romance happy endings.
Ofc!! Thank you for making such well made games
I managed to get all of them eheheh, no one was safe from my flirting >:))
I just want to report this. I don't know if this is meant to be in the story but I think I should report it.
This has been fixed! Sorry for the delay. :)
THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL, I LOVED IT SO MUCH. This game was really amazing. I loved it so much! absolutely spectacular.
Thank you so much!! I appreciate you playing & commenting!
After a week of trying, I FINALLY got the True Happy ending. (Did Grillby route)
He‘s spicy,isn’t he~ ;)
lol
Congratulations Moon! :D
Thanks! The game was great! I'm currently trying another route
Hihi! I was replaying this and noticed that, in the Judgement Hall in Sans route, it says San's instead of Sans in the options after hugging him.
Thank you Dawn!! I'll fix it now so it'll be good to go on the next update. :)
Thank you SO much for creating this game. I had so much fun playing it, can you please make more Undertale AU narrative-based games like this? I'll be looking forward to playing them
Until next time, has a STELLAR-tastic day! ^^
- Bunni_Star Gamer
Thank you so much for playing this game & commenting! <3 Appreciate your support.
Hey Darkpetal16, quick question. I've been playing one of your other games, and I'm currently stumped on how to get the romance route with Swap sans. I've been on the friendship route with Dust sans in the Dust tale game, which I'm okay with but, I just want to figure out how to romance Swap sans. If you can tell how let me know (hope it's not too much to ask). Have a nice day!
~ Bunni_Star Gamer <3
Hi Bunni! I have walkthroughs posted in the spoilers channel in my discord. They're step by step if you want to take a look at those.
Otherwise I can advise that for US!Sans you have to pick all the cheerful / optimistic options to start his route. :)
Rodger that! Thanks a bunch X3
Question, cause not sure if this is a bug or not. I was playing the harem route again and noticed you only get the 'bold flirting' actions, even if you only used shy one earlier. Is this supposed to happen?
I played it bold the first time so I never noticed till now.
Yeah, I don't have a "shy" harem route because MC has to initiate which makes them bold.
Hello! I've found a mobile glitch. I was on the harem route and I chose not to go to Sans in hotlands and then after that there was no choice to progress.
It also happens on my laptop.
Hello! This has been fixed. Thank you!
Thank you!
everyone; I found out what Grillby looks like IRL
Interesting picture, thank you for sharing.
:O
Whats the riddle answers for the last one i cant figure it out ive died six times already
The answer is "Silence". Hope this helps :)
ty
I love the new update! There seems to be a problem with the scene after you approach sans for food and he kills you (in the route where you romance both sans and papyrus), after that scene you can't progress anymore (during the scene where you meet the ice cream stand guy). In this same pathway choice, if you approach sans and get killed but continue, it forces you back onto the friendship path despite romancing both Papy and Sans. Other than that, I think it would be so funny if you can romance all three of the Gaster brothers. XD
(First Picture) This is the scene where you make a decision on whether you want to go to the ice cream stand or go to the city and there are no answers so you can't continue.
(END OF HOTLANDS) In the recap after you decide to go to sans which results in you dying, you get this screen where it says you are on the friendship route while romancing Papy and Sans.
Thank you! This has been fixed in the new update. :)
There is a way to romance all 3, however, if you miss any important steps it'll force you back onto the friendship route. It's meant to be a tricky route. But if you need help, Twinkle on Youtube posted a walkthrough on how to get it!
Ahhhh, I see that's really cool! Thank you for taking the time to tell me, I will try again. XD
Please i NEED to romance Mettaton please im begging you👏😪
kinda funny how an attempted suicide turned into freeing monsterkind and getting a bf
Right lmao-
Hi,love the game so damn much :)
But i wanted to ask if we could get a bonus cutscene w/ mr. Asgore and goat mom.I‘m sure the others would love it 😊
We shall see. :)
Maybe gardening with Asgore or baking a nice butterscotch cinnamon pie w/ Toriel :)
I‘ve decided to find out what soul color has which trait;here’s what i found :)
:) Those are a lot of choices!
yeah 😅