back for more of your absolutely wonderful work. and, yet again, i am after the weird skeleton man, surprise surprise. i love the story so far, always been a fan of mafia centered stories and shows. i'm so excited to see what you continue to do with this <3 keep yourself well and thank you for what you do !!
After finishing Underfell I decided to try this game out and I'm very pleased with what I've seen so far. Papyrus has always been my favorite ever since Undertale so I'm very happy that I get to romance Papyrus in these games and I just love how the frisk is customizable and not just set for us. It's a very nice touch that I just adore. That's enough of my ranting(?) please take care of yourself and have a good day! :D
(papyrus is so cute in this btw, and I absolutely adore it!)
Yay on finishing Underfell!! Thank you so much for giving this game a shot!
I could never exclude the great Papyrus, he's too wonderful to write.
Everyone deserves a chance to put themselves in a fandom they love. I'll do my best to keep adding more and more options as my programming gets better so no one feels excluded. :)
(I think you'll enjoy his route, I have a lot of cute moments planned.)
I hope you're doing well today! Thank you so much for the wonderful update! The typos I found for chapter 3 so far:
- Page starts with "Lawrence makes a tired noise when he comes home." Later on, there's a period missing in the "You giggle" line. I found the same mistake a bit later on, in the "You giggle You'd love to. Would he have time for it?" line.
- Page starts with "You can't do anything. Stop. Walk away." after you choose to help the old man. In the line "The protection fee is useless, desparate instead of desperate.
- Not sure if it's a typo or intentional, but writing it down here just in case. "The streets are empty outside your apartment." page, when meeting Wingding. When the mc looks up at him, the option you chose to represent when you're feeling danger repeats twice. In my case, it looks like "You feel the hairs on the back of your neck raise.
You slowly raise your gaze up.
You feel the hairs on the back of your neck raise.".
That would be all! Again, thank you so much for the update! <3
Hi!! Doing well so far. Hope your week has been treating you kindly!
-Found & fixed - will be included in the next update.
- Same as above
- Yeah, it seemed like a good idea when writing, but after having read it a few more times it feels unnecessarily repetitive. Second line will be deleted.
I so very very appreciate you doing this! Much love! 🥰❤️
GREAT GAME!!!Got a question tho;will the player (in a later chapter) be able to marry into the Dreemurr or Skelle-family to find out more about Lawrence‘s disappearence (and romance ofc)?I think that would be so cool :)
Re marriage - perhaps after the main story? I have an idea for a little "sequel" and I'm not opposed to mixing in marriage or something equivalent to that.
As long as the player stays alive and finds all the correct clues... yes. You will be able to figure out what happened to Lawrence.
hey! just saw this game after i finished your underfell game and i am so excited to play this! quick question though, how many chapters do you plan on there being? :)
:D Thank you for playing Underfell and I hope you enjoy this one!
Tentatively 10-13? I have the outline of the story but I haven't broken them down to chapters, I mostly free-form write until I reach a good stopping point.
Hey, I also wanted to see a happy ending for Sooner or Later You'll Be Mine, Actually... I decided to start this game as soon as I knew about it because I was watching that comic too!
(I hope there aren't any mistakes in my wrtitting, now, I must speak in spanish since this text took a long time to be writed...)
Amo como se desarrolla la trama, el hecho de tener pistas es genial! Estaba profundamente triste estos últimos días, pero ver un capitulo nuevo me da un cosquilleo de felicidad.... Gracias por trabajar tan duro, normalmente otros juegos de este tipo les toma mas de una semana actualizarse, por eso siempre te daré las gracias! <3
(Tuve un problema pues, el archivo de guardado que había descargado no funcionaba, así que tuve que volver a jugar todo desde el principio, pero aparte de eso todo se ve bien nwn)
Lo estás haciendo muy bien, feliz de leer lo que escribas en inglés o español.
Lamento mucho escuchar que te has sentido triste. Espero que tu vida esté mejorando y puedas descansar mucho este fin de semana.
Me alegra que te guste la adición de CLUES, me divertí mucho añadiéndola.
Si guarda en DISK, puede guardar su juego en su computadora y luego volver a cargar el guardado en el juego cada vez que haya una actualización.
El uso del botón normal "SAVE" guarda el juego en su navegador y muchos navegadores borran sus cachés después de un cierto período de tiempo; esto eliminará sus archivos guardados.
Congratulations!! If you're using Twine Sugarcube the Save/Loads are automatically included in the ui when you publish so you don't need to add them unless you are creating a ui from scratch. :)
BTW you wrote ‚pair of pair of white gloves‘ in addition to the dress;that the player sits on their coach instead of couch while listening to the radio(just wanted to point that out😅)
Darkpetal16?Are you ok with fanart of this game being posted here?I don’t wanna offend you by doing that w/o permission(also no,i don’t have Tumblr or anything and it won‘t let me in anyways)
I am so in love with this piece as well as UF! But somethings stopped me from continuing? Dunno it might be just me but i tried restarting the game but i can't seem to go any further from this part (I am also a fresh acc, and im so in love with this story that i had to make an acc just to seek help, i so hope i ain't bothering ;v;) Thank you!
This ability isn't something you advertise.
And the last time this ability was triggered it led to your brother's disappearance.
There is something more about your dream. It's prophetic.
No worries - when choosing how to address your father are you picking the “papa” title? I was able to replicate the issue when choosing that route but it works okay on the other titles.
I’ll be taking a look at the coding when I get home. In the mean time, would you try using the “Pa” title and let me know if you don’t see the option to move on from there.
Great chapter! I saw some code mistakes tho, some $ signs are across the code, and eye color in the sans route is coded, but it's not working so its "$eyecolor$" or something. Anyways, very good chapter!
OK SO I PLAYED THROUGH THIS ONE (i was busy and havent been able to, i also finished all the routes of ur UF one and i loved them sm) and i am VERY excited for this, from what i've seen its a lot more customizable and seems like it'll be the type of game to make me twirl my hair and kick my legs n giggle n shit /j but it seems super good so far i love it so keep up the good work! (also take all the breaks u need, dont overwork urself)
CHAPTER 2 WAS AWESOME!!! went for the sans route but there was an error when showing the span class for the yellow heart everytime it's called. There are also errors when calling variables like $Miss. Overall, I enjoyed it a lot!!! Looking forward to the next update :D
Found and fixed! I appreciate you playing & commenting - very happy to find any mistakes and get them rectified. Thank you for taking a screenshot too, made it very easy to find the issue and fix it.
I found the issue & fixed it! So sorry, added one too many <'s in my sets. It should work in the new update coming out in a few minutes.
Thank you so so much for playing and pointing this out to me. I really appreciate the screenshot too - I was able to instantly find the error! Hope you have a wonderful day.
No problem at all, and thank you for your work! I can confirm those errors are gone now. I found a couple new coding errors. The first happened when it comes to checking and committing to the route:
I was on the male variation of the Sans route in this screenshot, but I think this might be across all routes; I encountered it consistently when testing other routes and gender variations.
Additionally, I got this error on Asriel's route specifically when the 'intuition' first acts up:
All this said, thank you again for being so quick to listen and act! As a writer myself, I can imagine it might feel a tad discouraging to receive a wave of reports like this, and I just wanted to say I appreciate how lovely you've been when responding to the comments. I had a lot of fun playing Underfell, and Mafiafell is shaping up to be a great romp too. I'm looking forward to where it all goes next!
Both found & fixed! Thank you kindly for posting screenshots. :) As soon as I saw the error I knew right away what I had done - and yep! I've re-uploaded the game with the fix.
I'm glad you've been able to have fun playing! It really warms my heart when I see someone enjoying a game I've made.
Re the errors - I can't get any better if I don't make mistakes. I've learned so much from making Underfell, and I hope to keep learning and getting better with Mafiafell. I really appreciate your patience in reading through an incomplete game, and that you even went the extra effort to kindly point out my errors so I can fix them quickly. Truly thank you!
Hi! The prefixes were added into this chapter so if you continued from an older save they won't be reflected. Would you please let me know if you restarted and still have this issue?
Not at all a nag! I want to get better and I can't do that without learning from mistakes and errors. :) Appreciate you took the time to comment.
As a gender-neutral person that's on the friendship route, there's two errors that I saw on the page starting with ["I can't see why!" she says. "You're the loveliest person in this whole city."]
1. [Error: <<if>>: bad conditional expression in <<if>> clause: gender is not defined] at the ["Ta-da! All done,"] paragraph.
2. [Error: <<if>>: bad conditional expression in <<elseif>> clause (#3): route is not defined] at the [You will. You always are] paragraph.
Just tried out all the routes and I am HOOKED. Well done! :]
But there's nowhere to click and move on with the rest of the story on this one part of the Papyrus route. I dunno if that's unfinished or not, but it's at the rotating choice "He seems kind of cute."
Hello, it is I, funny typo person Typos I caught on chapter 2! (I'm on the Sans route) - Page starts with "The bell chimes when you enter the shop.", women instead of woman in "The owner is an elderly women who goes by the name Daisy."
- Page starts with "It's rich. Strong." You're instead of your in the "Okay, your call. Drink some water" line. A bit later, when selecting your favorite treat, there's applie pie instead of apple pie, and in the same line discont instead of discount.
- Appearance updated page after leaving the flower shop, sans instead of Sans.
Also have a little idea the others might enjoy(a touching scene i just thought may be nice).POV:You are with the man of your choice close to being a Mafia member.To be one you have to help a bit with the transfer of drugs for money.The clients get mad because your soon to be boss (Wingding) broke the deal with them.So they pull their guns out and point them at you and your „Friends“ (and possible bf).After defeating most of the pricks your soon to be coworkers all start to give you lil‘ compliments and tell you the fight was very cool.But you notice something is off.You see how one of the guys you beat up points their gun at your love interest.You immediatly jump in front of your soon to be bf and take the bullet.All you can think of is the pain as your vision starts to fade.Yet you don‘t die;You are unconcious.When you open your eyes,you‘re laying in your bed,patched up and healed by magic.
(For when dating Papyrus)You notice someone is holding your hand-it‘s Papyrus!Apparently he brought you home and took care of your wound.He seems to have fallen asleep.You smile
(For dating Sans something similar)
(For dating Gaster)You wake up,laying in your bed,when you notice that two bony hands-attached to nothing-hold your right hand and another one at your neck checking your pulse.The wound you got from the bullet has been treated,but from whom?“You are awake,exelent;“You hear a voice from the kitchen.“I was truly surprised that you took the bullet for me.I owe you a favor for this.“You see Wingding approaching you with some coffee,“Would you like any?“
(If it doesn‘t get added that’s fine with me.Still i hope those who‘ve read this had fun)
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When will the next update come out?(i love this so much)
Planning it for next weekend. If I finish sooner then before then. :)
I am waiting as patiently as i can but just the thougt of reading the new chapter makes me as excited as a child on a friday before summer break
back for more of your absolutely wonderful work. and, yet again, i am after the weird skeleton man, surprise surprise. i love the story so far, always been a fan of mafia centered stories and shows. i'm so excited to see what you continue to do with this <3 keep yourself well and thank you for what you do !!
Thank you so much for comin' back! :D
They are very good skelly men. They deserve all the love!
I hope you like what I have in store, I adore this 'verse and I've had a lot of fun planning what's ahead.
Thank you! Please do take care of yourself too! 😊
After finishing Underfell I decided to try this game out and I'm very pleased with what I've seen so far. Papyrus has always been my favorite ever since Undertale so I'm very happy that I get to romance Papyrus in these games and I just love how the frisk is customizable and not just set for us. It's a very nice touch that I just adore. That's enough of my ranting(?) please take care of yourself and have a good day! :D
(papyrus is so cute in this btw, and I absolutely adore it!)
Yay on finishing Underfell!! Thank you so much for giving this game a shot!
I could never exclude the great Papyrus, he's too wonderful to write.
Everyone deserves a chance to put themselves in a fandom they love. I'll do my best to keep adding more and more options as my programming gets better so no one feels excluded. :)
(I think you'll enjoy his route, I have a lot of cute moments planned.)
╰(✿´⌣`✿)╯♡ Take care of yourself!
Papy is such a gentleman i‘m blushing (///0-0///)
Papy is suave in every fell'verse and he is a gentleman in every verse period. I refuse to believe otherwise!
I hope you're doing well today! Thank you so much for the wonderful update! The typos I found for chapter 3 so far:
- Page starts with "Lawrence makes a tired noise when he comes home." Later on, there's a period missing in the "You giggle" line. I found the same mistake a bit later on, in the "You giggle You'd love to. Would he have time for it?" line.
- Page starts with "You can't do anything. Stop. Walk away." after you choose to help the old man. In the line "The protection fee is useless, desparate instead of desperate.
- Not sure if it's a typo or intentional, but writing it down here just in case. "The streets are empty outside your apartment." page, when meeting Wingding. When the mc looks up at him, the option you chose to represent when you're feeling danger repeats twice. In my case, it looks like
"You feel the hairs on the back of your neck raise.
You slowly raise your gaze up.
You feel the hairs on the back of your neck raise.".
That would be all! Again, thank you so much for the update! <3
Hi!! Doing well so far. Hope your week has been treating you kindly!
-Found & fixed - will be included in the next update.
- Same as above
- Yeah, it seemed like a good idea when writing, but after having read it a few more times it feels unnecessarily repetitive. Second line will be deleted.
I so very very appreciate you doing this! Much love! 🥰❤️
btw i did some calculations on the characters OG heights:
Papyrus: 44 pixels≈7’4
Sans:30 pixels≈5‘0
Asriel:28 pixels≈4‘8(his adult version doesn‘t have an overworld-sprite so i‘m guessing 6‘8)
Gaster:48 pixels≈7‘6
(Sans is literally a dwarf amongst monsters XD)
That's interesting! I'm not sure what the exact heights are for this verse - but I am going off of Sooner or Later You're Going to Be Mine which is also drawn by Melikas (https://tapas.io/series/Sooner-or-Later-Youre-Gonna-be-Mine/info).
'Course Sans is still short as heck compared to his brothers haha.
GREAT GAME!!!Got a question tho;will the player (in a later chapter) be able to marry into the Dreemurr or Skelle-family to find out more about Lawrence‘s disappearence (and romance ofc)?I think that would be so cool :)
Thank you!!
Re marriage - perhaps after the main story? I have an idea for a little "sequel" and I'm not opposed to mixing in marriage or something equivalent to that.
As long as the player stays alive and finds all the correct clues... yes. You will be able to figure out what happened to Lawrence.
That sounds sooo cool XD
Also we did tell Daisy that she could do our bouquet that’s why i asked :)
I can't wait for there to be a full game of this, I literally binged playing through this game and was sad to be left on a cliffhanger.
Me too, would love to finish this hahaha. Thank you for binging! Promise not to leave the next one on a dramatic cliff hanger. :)
lol it left me wanting more to the point i turned back to fanfiction of it 🤣
Heck yeah! Also the comic artist for Sooner or Later started updating again if you want to binge through that! https://tapas.io/series/Sooner-or-Later-Youre-Gonna-be-Mine/info
hey! just saw this game after i finished your underfell game and i am so excited to play this! quick question though, how many chapters do you plan on there being? :)
:D Thank you for playing Underfell and I hope you enjoy this one!
Tentatively 10-13? I have the outline of the story but I haven't broken them down to chapters, I mostly free-form write until I reach a good stopping point.
Hey, I also wanted to see a happy ending for Sooner or Later You'll Be Mine, Actually... I decided to start this game as soon as I knew about it because I was watching that comic too!
(I hope there aren't any mistakes in my wrtitting, now, I must speak in spanish since this text took a long time to be writed...)
Amo como se desarrolla la trama, el hecho de tener pistas es genial! Estaba profundamente triste estos últimos días, pero ver un capitulo nuevo me da un cosquilleo de felicidad.... Gracias por trabajar tan duro, normalmente otros juegos de este tipo les toma mas de una semana actualizarse, por eso siempre te daré las gracias! <3
(Tuve un problema pues, el archivo de guardado que había descargado no funcionaba, así que tuve que volver a jugar todo desde el principio, pero aparte de eso todo se ve bien nwn)
¡El cómic comenzó a actualizarse nuevamente!
Lo estás haciendo muy bien, feliz de leer lo que escribas en inglés o español.
Lamento mucho escuchar que te has sentido triste. Espero que tu vida esté mejorando y puedas descansar mucho este fin de semana.
Me alegra que te guste la adición de CLUES, me divertí mucho añadiéndola.
Si guarda en DISK, puede guardar su juego en su computadora y luego volver a cargar el guardado en el juego cada vez que haya una actualización.
El uso del botón normal "SAVE" guarda el juego en su navegador y muchos navegadores borran sus cachés después de un cierto período de tiempo; esto eliminará sus archivos guardados.
Hi, GREAT game!!!!! but I encounter a bug at:
This ability isn't something you advertise.
And the last time this ability was triggered it led to your brother's disappearance.
There is something more about your dream. It's prophetic.
It's a warning.
I can't continue (Gaster route)
Hi! This bug was found and will be fixed in the upcoming update tonight. Thank you kindly!
Okay cool, and thank you for taking the time to respond
Dude you inspired me to make my own text based games , but i have a problem i dont know how to add save and load options
do you know how to make them?
Congratulations!! If you're using Twine Sugarcube the Save/Loads are automatically included in the ui when you publish so you don't need to add them unless you are creating a ui from scratch. :)
Will there ever be an IF-DELTARUNE?
No clue, I need to finish what I started before taking on another project.
BTW you wrote ‚pair of pair of white gloves‘ in addition to the dress;that the player sits on their coach instead of couch while listening to the radio(just wanted to point that out😅)
Would you happen to remember the passage?
Uh…not really.BUT!I remember what options i chose to find‘em!(Papyrus route)
1.When choosing the dress i wanted to wear the gloves and looked through the options and i found this little typo
2.When choosing my hobby (listening to music,automatically going to the next page)in the first lil‘ block of text i found that typo
(Happens to me too sometimes >~<)
I found it! Thank you. :) It will be fixed in the upcoming update.
Darkpetal16?Are you ok with fanart of this game being posted here?I don’t wanna offend you by doing that w/o permission(also no,i don’t have Tumblr or anything and it won‘t let me in anyways)
Fanart is welcome as long as it’s not explicit. :) If you decide to a tumblr you can post it there too!
Don‘t worry,my drawings are family friendly :)
I am so in love with this piece as well as UF! But somethings stopped me from continuing? Dunno it might be just me but i tried restarting the game but i can't seem to go any further from this part (I am also a fresh acc, and im so in love with this story that i had to make an acc just to seek help, i so hope i ain't bothering ;v;) Thank you!
This ability isn't something you advertise.
And the last time this ability was triggered it led to your brother's disappearance.
There is something more about your dream. It's prophetic.
It's a warning.
Hi!! I’m so glad you like UF and are enjoying this game so far. Would you mind confirming the route you are on?
San's route (Sorry for not mentioning that earlier-) And i am just having trouble with this game, UF is workin perfectly!
No worries - when choosing how to address your father are you picking the “papa” title? I was able to replicate the issue when choosing that route but it works okay on the other titles.
I’ll be taking a look at the coding when I get home. In the mean time, would you try using the “Pa” title and let me know if you don’t see the option to move on from there.
I absolutely adore this you’re amazing at storytelling and the music just sets the mood
(✿˵•́◡•̀˵)৴♡* Thank you so much for playing and commenting on MF! I hope you like this game as well. Ch3 coming out either tomorrow or the day after.
so true ngl :)
Will there be a chara route?
Perhaps after the full game has been released. I don't think I could do six full routes right off the get-go.
I will wait then •u•
Am so exited for future updates :)
Thank you! Ch3 is done but it will take a few days to edit / bug test.
omg I love the sans route(≧▽≦)
His route is definitely fun to write! Also had a lot of fun writing Wingding's bad ending in the upcoming chapter. ;)
I love this so much ahhhhhhh
(✿˶˘◡˘)♡ Thank you thank youuu
Does sans route end at chap 2
Right now only chapter 2 is released. Chapter 3 has been finished but it will take me a few more days to edit / bug test. :)
OH I SEE.. CAN"T WAIT love ur work btw
I want moreeeeeeee
this is good
<3 thank you!!
I found this
:D found and fixed! Re-uploaded the game. Thank you for posting!!
sanssss routeeee is sooo scandalous
(☞ﾟヮﾟ)☞
yessssss
Great chapter! I saw some code mistakes tho, some $ signs are across the code, and eye color in the sans route is coded, but it's not working so its "$eyecolor$" or something. Anyways, very good chapter!
Thank you! I think I got all the coding mistakes with this new update but if you see more please let me know!
OK SO I PLAYED THROUGH THIS ONE (i was busy and havent been able to, i also finished all the routes of ur UF one and i loved them sm) and i am VERY excited for this, from what i've seen its a lot more customizable and seems like it'll be the type of game to make me twirl my hair and kick my legs n giggle n shit /j but it seems super good so far i love it so keep up the good work! (also take all the breaks u need, dont overwork urself)
:D! Yes! I wanted to add a lot more branches and options in this game right from the get-go.
I do hope that you'll have fun playing it and it can leave ya feeling warm and happy by the end!
CHAPTER 2 WAS AWESOME!!! went for the sans route but there was an error when showing the span class for the yellow heart everytime it's called. There are also errors when calling variables like $Miss. Overall, I enjoyed it a lot!!! Looking forward to the next update :D
YAY! Thank you!
Found and fixed! I appreciate you playing & commenting - very happy to find any mistakes and get them rectified. Thank you for taking a screenshot too, made it very easy to find the issue and fix it.
You're welcome!
For male and NB versions of the Sans route, there's a couple of big errors:
this, and during the meeting, all his nicknames only show up as code rather than actually words.
I found the issue & fixed it! So sorry, added one too many <'s in my sets. It should work in the new update coming out in a few minutes.
Thank you so so much for playing and pointing this out to me. I really appreciate the screenshot too - I was able to instantly find the error! Hope you have a wonderful day.
No problem at all, and thank you for your work! I can confirm those errors are gone now. I found a couple new coding errors. The first happened when it comes to checking and committing to the route:
I was on the male variation of the Sans route in this screenshot, but I think this might be across all routes; I encountered it consistently when testing other routes and gender variations.
Additionally, I got this error on Asriel's route specifically when the 'intuition' first acts up:
All this said, thank you again for being so quick to listen and act! As a writer myself, I can imagine it might feel a tad discouraging to receive a wave of reports like this, and I just wanted to say I appreciate how lovely you've been when responding to the comments. I had a lot of fun playing Underfell, and Mafiafell is shaping up to be a great romp too. I'm looking forward to where it all goes next!
Both found & fixed! Thank you kindly for posting screenshots. :) As soon as I saw the error I knew right away what I had done - and yep! I've re-uploaded the game with the fix.
I'm glad you've been able to have fun playing! It really warms my heart when I see someone enjoying a game I've made.
Re the errors - I can't get any better if I don't make mistakes. I've learned so much from making Underfell, and I hope to keep learning and getting better with Mafiafell. I really appreciate your patience in reading through an incomplete game, and that you even went the extra effort to kindly point out my errors so I can fix them quickly. Truly thank you!
hello I am just telling you some things.(sorry if it sems like a nag)
I am on the wingding route and on the miss or Mr it has a lil problem "$miss" when we meet aser-rasei, in the beging and the end of the chapter
Hi! The prefixes were added into this chapter so if you continued from an older save they won't be reflected. Would you please let me know if you restarted and still have this issue?
Not at all a nag! I want to get better and I can't do that without learning from mistakes and errors. :) Appreciate you took the time to comment.
As a gender-neutral person that's on the friendship route, there's two errors that I saw on the page starting with ["I can't see why!" she says. "You're the loveliest person in this whole city."]
1. [Error: <<if>>: bad conditional expression in <<if>> clause: gender is not defined] at the ["Ta-da! All done,"] paragraph.
2. [Error: <<if>>: bad conditional expression in <<elseif>> clause (#3): route is not defined] at the [You will. You always are] paragraph.
Thank you so much for pointing this out - I found the error and have fixed it. This should reflect in the next update. Sorry for that!
Just tried out all the routes and I am HOOKED. Well done! :]
But there's nowhere to click and move on with the rest of the story on this one part of the Papyrus route. I dunno if that's unfinished or not, but it's at the rotating choice "He seems kind of cute."
Anyways yeah, LOVE IT SO FAR!!
Yay!! Thank you so so much!
OH DANG. I accidentally deleted the link to the next passage on Pap route. It is now added back in and will show in the next update in a few minutes.
Hello, it is I, funny typo person
Typos I caught on chapter 2! (I'm on the Sans route)
- Page starts with "The bell chimes when you enter the shop.", women instead of woman in "The owner is an elderly women who goes by the name Daisy."
- Page starts with "It's rich. Strong." You're instead of your in the "Okay, your call. Drink some water" line. A bit later, when selecting your favorite treat, there's applie pie instead of apple pie, and in the same line discont instead of discount.
- Appearance updated page after leaving the flower shop, sans instead of Sans.
Wonderful update today!
I give you nuzzles and a basket of chocolate chip cookies.
My tired eyes thank you for this blessing.
-women --> woman updated
-you're --> your
-applie pie --> apple pie
-route names corrected in profile & commit.
These will be reflected in the update coming out in a few minutes. Thank you so much for your help!
No problem! I'll keep an eye out for any other typos I find. Remember to take breaks!
Just finished it, great chapter!
Yay! Thank you!
this was great as always, thank you
Thank you so much for playing and commenting!
Also have a little idea the others might enjoy(a touching scene i just thought may be nice).POV:You are with the man of your choice close to being a Mafia member.To be one you have to help a bit with the transfer of drugs for money.The clients get mad because your soon to be boss (Wingding) broke the deal with them.So they pull their guns out and point them at you and your „Friends“ (and possible bf).After defeating most of the pricks your soon to be coworkers all start to give you lil‘ compliments and tell you the fight was very cool.But you notice something is off.You see how one of the guys you beat up points their gun at your love interest.You immediatly jump in front of your soon to be bf and take the bullet.All you can think of is the pain as your vision starts to fade.Yet you don‘t die;You are unconcious.When you open your eyes,you‘re laying in your bed,patched up and healed by magic.
(For when dating Papyrus)You notice someone is holding your hand-it‘s Papyrus!Apparently he brought you home and took care of your wound.He seems to have fallen asleep.You smile
(For dating Sans something similar)
(For dating Gaster)You wake up,laying in your bed,when you notice that two bony hands-attached to nothing-hold your right hand and another one at your neck checking your pulse.The wound you got from the bullet has been treated,but from whom?“You are awake,exelent;“You hear a voice from the kitchen.“I was truly surprised that you took the bullet for me.I owe you a favor for this.“You see Wingding approaching you with some coffee,“Would you like any?“
(If it doesn‘t get added that’s fine with me.Still i hope those who‘ve read this had fun)
That's a cute idea! I don't have plans for Frisk to join the mafia at this point in time, but who knows? :)
This is so good! When do you think your gonna update?
today :) Thanks!
omg omg this is so cool, I can't wait to read more! :)
thank you thank you! Hope you like the update!
Aaa! I can't wait for more! This started pretty good!
Thank you! More to come this weekend!