Why the story is so boring you need to develop some good story from the game I know you're bored to develop some more story about that game you need to copy the story like eternum
So I finally got around to finishing what content there is. 2 episodes and only part 1 of episode 2, not even a full episode, legit took me a while. Hell, even restarting and super skipping to the end to afford that damn spell near the end took a few minutes. I gave this a try after seeing a lot of good comments down here, but it was a few saying this was up there with Carybdis (Once in a Lifetime and now Eternum) and I can hard agree. You have a few more jokes and silly scenes, but in terms of quality and looks, you do a bit better here n there. Highly recommend this to folks looking for an entertaining time :) I definitely look forward to more, and whenever the finished product comes out I plan to pay for it. Just like I did for Once in a Lifetime.
Technically not a Vineeta scene, but its during the Swim Competition. It's after doing all the chain of events that leads to a certain someone getting drugged by accident.
Man, I wish that I liked this game. It's obvious that the dev puts a TON of work into making it. But 90% of it is just wasted. It ends up being one ridiculously stupid anime style joke after ridiculously stupid anime style joke after ridiculously stupid anime style joke.
I downloaded it because a few of the comments were like, "what a great story." To which I say, "WHAT STORY?" There is like 6-10 times in the entire game where a plot THREATENS to develop, but then is cut off by a ridiculously stupid anime style joke.
Seriously, here is the plot synopsis for what I have read:
The multiverse is real
The MC is dragged from one reality into another
Some dude wants to help him learn to control his magic
The MC pissed some chick off
And that is it. The end. Not the end of the content. But the end of the plot. EVERYTHING else is just a ridiculously stupid anime style joke.
At the very beginning, the dev points out that there are times where you can't spam click through the text boxes/animations. So that the audio can stay synced. And those times DO exist. It happens with every single ridiculously stupid anime style joke. Which is roughly every 1.2 nanoseconds.
Even when it looks like the MC is headed towards a sex scene, it almost always just ends in a ridiculously stupid anime style joke. Most porn games start with the obligatory handjob, move on to the obligatory blowjob, head for the obligatory titjob, go through the optional cunnilingus scene, and then head for the obligatory sex scene.
This game makes it as far as the obligatory blowjob before the dev loses his copy of the Kama Sutra and just hits the "rinse and repeat" button.
And what's up with the master/slave dynamic in this game? The MC tells his slave that he wants her to stop calling him "master," that she should be her own person, making her own choices. And then immediately orders her to suck his dick.
Well, which is it? Is she his equal, or his slave? Are we supposed to be romantically inclined towards her, or is she just our toy? Pick a fucking lane yo!
I don't care if you hang her upside down from the ceiling and beat her with a bat before fucking her face until she pukes. It's not like any sluts are actually getting hurt. (Not that I would care if they were) But keep a flow going man. That is INTEGRAL to storytelling.
So that's this game in a nutshell. A ton of work, with no measurable results. It's like if the US Congress had a love child with India based customer support.
Just gonna say... you weirdly seem to have gotten heated over something you don't like. I honestly found it pretty great, stories need a bit of playfulness and banter. Things don't always have to be dead serious at all times nor grim dark considering the premise for this one. Also, it's only got 2 "episodes" lmao. This is very obviously going to get bigger as the story goes, so of course it will be mostly world and character building for now. And so far there's a lot of plot hooks that have actually been taken relatively seriously, considering it's not exactly meant to be serious at all. Nice thesis on why you don't like it though, but honestly if you don't like something and don't have actual constructive criticism, you really shouldn't bother writing a short novel on why you didn't like it o.o
Ah, after thought on the last bit: we already know MC's stance towards slavery. They made it clear like... 4 times in such a short time? Them doing lewd stuff was literally a mutual thing. She leans into the master bit, he keeps asking her not to. He has even flat out said he wants them to be on equal terms. So I'm more confused as to how you didn't get that and demand some form of clarification o.o
Broke into my old school, bought a buttplug from a street vendor, and chanelled demonic energies at a 5 year old while my roommate convinces her to get a tattoo.
One technically isn't a Grace scene, the other is the swim competition. I am unsure of all the triggers outside of just increasing their uh... affection value? W/e it is in this one. The one that technically isn't a Grace scene is during the dream sequence before you do the Cadence intro event. She demands you go to the gym while you are sleeping and having a very lewd dream.
I guess I should also add that the 2nd Grace scene is basically doing all the chain of events during the swim competition. After doing a few of the steps, MC will think to cast a calming spell on Grace, which has some... interesting side effects? Trying to be vague about it. If you want the exacts, I'd have to go back through to remember the steps. Basically just do the explore option a lot to get the other options going, iirc you get it after using the oil on Meryl.
Hmm... because of how I am, I ended up buying into the patreon for the wallthrough... but because I got this going on Android it's a lil... not helpful? At least I can see what gives a + or - for dialogs, but I was kinda hoping it'd say what scenes will impact stuff. I like to know~ also I still can't figure out what you meant in the patreon post about putting the walkthrough in the game folder on mobile... might just be me being dumb though lol. Back to the choices I go~
no, i just had the ideia bc it works that way with my notebook, it runs games better when it's with the charger, so I tried it with my phone and it work
Glad I found this little gem. Definitely will be following the progress. Great story so far and the animation is awesome. Definitely need a developer route somewhere in there, best character.
The account of animation you've put into this is insane you and caribdis produce some of the best story and visual content I've stumbled upon. Hopefully not too long of a wait for ep2p2 like where the story is headed so far though.
Hey, I have a problem downloading the game to Android. Every time after downloading is done i get a message that the file is "forbidden" and i can't even open it. This is the first game from itch.io that i have this problem with :( Does anyone have the same issue or is the problem on my end?
honestly, top tier quality. honestly one of the best, seriously. for people maybe looking through comments to see if its worth a look i can guarantee you it is. story and setting is good, characters and writing are great, no poor grammar or sentence structure here. music is fun, good comedy. animations are great.
so sad that im finished this, cadence was the reason I came, but man I wanted to see some Grace or Stella action.
Dev does insanely good work with the animations and scenes, even flexing alot through menial parts of the game. But I hope in the future we get alot more.... action in the good stuff :)
Try making sure that you pick the option "Stretching can't be bad for you" or something of the sort when you Look For Grace. Meryl will end up stretching, and MC will put a calming spell on Grace as a result. You can also apply the oil you get from Lexi(?) to Meryl, and I'm not sure if that's exactly necessary to put the calming spell on Grace.
Also make sure that you got the Freya scene, which you get by replacing the powder with the pill you get from Hannah when you find her clip (after exploring and overhearing the pill that the random woman has).
Literally never reviewed a game until now, but this game gave me way more laughs than an erotic game should. On par with Caribdis' works. Looking forward to the updates and PLEASE have the pan/developer continue making appearances.
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Why the story is so boring you need to develop some good story from the game I know you're bored to develop some more story about that game you need to copy the story like eternum
I love the Yu-gi-oh references, I hope they stick around. The card deserves to be banned
So I finally got around to finishing what content there is. 2 episodes and only part 1 of episode 2, not even a full episode, legit took me a while. Hell, even restarting and super skipping to the end to afford that damn spell near the end took a few minutes. I gave this a try after seeing a lot of good comments down here, but it was a few saying this was up there with Carybdis (Once in a Lifetime and now Eternum) and I can hard agree. You have a few more jokes and silly scenes, but in terms of quality and looks, you do a bit better here n there. Highly recommend this to folks looking for an entertaining time :) I definitely look forward to more, and whenever the finished product comes out I plan to pay for it. Just like I did for Once in a Lifetime.
Question: How to get vineeta's scene?
Technically not a Vineeta scene, but its during the Swim Competition. It's after doing all the chain of events that leads to a certain someone getting drugged by accident.
Man, I wish that I liked this game. It's obvious that the dev puts a TON of work into making it. But 90% of it is just wasted. It ends up being one ridiculously stupid anime style joke after ridiculously stupid anime style joke after ridiculously stupid anime style joke.
I downloaded it because a few of the comments were like, "what a great story." To which I say, "WHAT STORY?" There is like 6-10 times in the entire game where a plot THREATENS to develop, but then is cut off by a ridiculously stupid anime style joke.
Seriously, here is the plot synopsis for what I have read:
And that is it. The end. Not the end of the content. But the end of the plot. EVERYTHING else is just a ridiculously stupid anime style joke.
At the very beginning, the dev points out that there are times where you can't spam click through the text boxes/animations. So that the audio can stay synced. And those times DO exist. It happens with every single ridiculously stupid anime style joke. Which is roughly every 1.2 nanoseconds.
Even when it looks like the MC is headed towards a sex scene, it almost always just ends in a ridiculously stupid anime style joke. Most porn games start with the obligatory handjob, move on to the obligatory blowjob, head for the obligatory titjob, go through the optional cunnilingus scene, and then head for the obligatory sex scene.
This game makes it as far as the obligatory blowjob before the dev loses his copy of the Kama Sutra and just hits the "rinse and repeat" button.
And what's up with the master/slave dynamic in this game? The MC tells his slave that he wants her to stop calling him "master," that she should be her own person, making her own choices. And then immediately orders her to suck his dick.
Well, which is it? Is she his equal, or his slave? Are we supposed to be romantically inclined towards her, or is she just our toy? Pick a fucking lane yo!
I don't care if you hang her upside down from the ceiling and beat her with a bat before fucking her face until she pukes. It's not like any sluts are actually getting hurt. (Not that I would care if they were) But keep a flow going man. That is INTEGRAL to storytelling.
So that's this game in a nutshell. A ton of work, with no measurable results. It's like if the US Congress had a love child with India based customer support.
Just gonna say... you weirdly seem to have gotten heated over something you don't like. I honestly found it pretty great, stories need a bit of playfulness and banter. Things don't always have to be dead serious at all times nor grim dark considering the premise for this one. Also, it's only got 2 "episodes" lmao. This is very obviously going to get bigger as the story goes, so of course it will be mostly world and character building for now. And so far there's a lot of plot hooks that have actually been taken relatively seriously, considering it's not exactly meant to be serious at all. Nice thesis on why you don't like it though, but honestly if you don't like something and don't have actual constructive criticism, you really shouldn't bother writing a short novel on why you didn't like it o.o
Ah, after thought on the last bit: we already know MC's stance towards slavery. They made it clear like... 4 times in such a short time? Them doing lewd stuff was literally a mutual thing. She leans into the master bit, he keeps asking her not to. He has even flat out said he wants them to be on equal terms. So I'm more confused as to how you didn't get that and demand some form of clarification o.o
Broke into my old school, bought a buttplug from a street vendor, and chanelled demonic energies at a 5 year old while my roommate convinces her to get a tattoo.
This game is a work of art.
hey so how do you get the grace scene
One technically isn't a Grace scene, the other is the swim competition. I am unsure of all the triggers outside of just increasing their uh... affection value? W/e it is in this one. The one that technically isn't a Grace scene is during the dream sequence before you do the Cadence intro event. She demands you go to the gym while you are sleeping and having a very lewd dream.
I guess I should also add that the 2nd Grace scene is basically doing all the chain of events during the swim competition. After doing a few of the steps, MC will think to cast a calming spell on Grace, which has some... interesting side effects? Trying to be vague about it. If you want the exacts, I'd have to go back through to remember the steps. Basically just do the explore option a lot to get the other options going, iirc you get it after using the oil on Meryl.
this game proves god is all-loving
Hmm... because of how I am, I ended up buying into the patreon for the wallthrough... but because I got this going on Android it's a lil... not helpful? At least I can see what gives a + or - for dialogs, but I was kinda hoping it'd say what scenes will impact stuff. I like to know~ also I still can't figure out what you meant in the patreon post about putting the walkthrough in the game folder on mobile... might just be me being dumb though lol. Back to the choices I go~
Hey, anyone else on android having problems ? My game crash everytime righ after that clone? throw the balls at mc
Nevermind, tried playing with my phone on the charger and it worked
Was it just a battery issue? I also play on mobile, but never had that issue, just curious by nature lol.
no, i just had the ideia bc it works that way with my notebook, it runs games better when it's with the charger, so I tried it with my phone and it work
how odd, is it maybe a power save option causing the issue then? At least you got it to work though, hope you are enjoying it lol
Pleasantly surprised with this one, very well done and absolutely love the humor. For sure on the top of my list to follow.
Glad I found this little gem. Definitely will be following the progress. Great story so far and the animation is awesome. Definitely need a developer route somewhere in there, best character.
"Why don't you just stop special summoning?" Good thing Maxx "C" is banned in the tcg
is harem optional? i prefer solo Li routes but harem is starting to grow on me a little
The account of animation you've put into this is insane you and caribdis produce some of the best story and visual content I've stumbled upon. Hopefully not too long of a wait for ep2p2 like where the story is headed so far though.
Hey, I have a problem downloading the game to Android. Every time after downloading is done i get a message that the file is "forbidden" and i can't even open it. This is the first game from itch.io that i have this problem with :( Does anyone have the same issue or is the problem on my end?
I changed the browser from which I downloaded the game and everything went fine 👍 great game!
honestly, top tier quality. honestly one of the best, seriously. for people maybe looking through comments to see if its worth a look i can guarantee you it is. story and setting is good, characters and writing are great, no poor grammar or sentence structure here. music is fun, good comedy. animations are great.
couldn't recommend it enough.
Will there be other languages in this game?
How long does Episode 1 last?
Everything so far with actually reading it all maybe 3-4 hours
so sad that im finished this, cadence was the reason I came, but man I wanted to see some Grace or Stella action.
Dev does insanely good work with the animations and scenes, even flexing alot through menial parts of the game. But I hope in the future we get alot more.... action in the good stuff :)
Well you sold me on giving it a try!
First off, phenomenal job making this. I'm seriously blown away!!
But- how do I get Grace's second scene? I've gone back and replayed choices, did everything at the swim meet, but still can't get it to unlock ;-;
i've been there, friend.
Try making sure that you pick the option "Stretching can't be bad for you" or something of the sort when you Look For Grace. Meryl will end up stretching, and MC will put a calming spell on Grace as a result. You can also apply the oil you get from Lexi(?) to Meryl, and I'm not sure if that's exactly necessary to put the calming spell on Grace.
Also make sure that you got the Freya scene, which you get by replacing the powder with the pill you get from Hannah when you find her clip (after exploring and overhearing the pill that the random woman has).
bro I fucking love this game, the reginald scene threw me out of my chair,
in all seriousness, the story is captivating, the humour is 11/10 (I can only compare it to caridibs which made my 2 favourite games) and
the scenes / artwork are very very top tier, glad I found this out, I would recommend it to my friends but they would think I'm a degenerate.
You comparing this to Carybdis (at least that's how I read it) made me give this a go and I thank you for that lol.
Literally never reviewed a game until now, but this game gave me way more laughs than an erotic game should. On par with Caribdis' works. Looking forward to the updates and PLEASE have the pan/developer continue making appearances.
That sneaky little Maxx C joke was hilarious A plus.
This game is gold! If you're reading this and contemplating trying it just do it!
I loved this game lo and i cant wait for the next part! the humor is corny but i loved it, really got me laughing at my laptop at 2 am
Im not even here for the porn. Im here for the story and Cadence.
its okay. Feel like he's trying to hard and to much to be funny. Getting alittle anoying. But overall a good game
Story=10/10
characters=10/10
Me=10/10
Comedy=10/10
Dev=Terrifying GigaChad staring at my soul from the moon
Results=love the game and i can t wait for more update!!!
is there someway in game to know what songs were used?
I just want to know would there be any chance of having sex with Noelle or never have sex with her or something like that
Fucking love Noelle I think we will be able to romance her after I had my playthrough with her but I don't think it's going to be easy.