I just saw this at random and thought "fuck it, I'ma read it". I wish I've done it sooner cuz damn, never knew I could despise a Vn character so much. And Baxter is hella cute
God, I jumped into this with mild expectations but wow. I'm in love with the story, the characters, the songs and writing...
Mylo's situation is an all too familiar one, but seeing him slowly feel all the affection that he has wanted for the past 8 months is so satisfying. Reading as he got into that car made me want to pull my hair out, but I was hooked, then the text the morning after... Wow. Cannot say I wasn't disappointed in Mylo for falling for it again, also cannot say I wasn't disappointed the chapter ended there. Cannot wait for May 5th! I'm really excited to see what you have cooked up as the story continues!
Hard to put into words, but your writing feels real and raw. Conveys the emotion well and the characters are very charming. Love your work and always am excited to see what you make next.
It hurts to see Mylo like this. I've been through something similar and it was really bad for me... This guy simply doesn't deserve Mylo. I hope Mylo sees this and stops giving himself to him ;-;
He could be alone for a while and focus on his own things, or that other guy could stop messing around with Mylo and actually get serious about dating him... TwT
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I just saw this at random and thought "fuck it, I'ma read it". I wish I've done it sooner cuz damn, never knew I could despise a Vn character so much. And Baxter is hella cute
God, I jumped into this with mild expectations but wow. I'm in love with the story, the characters, the songs and writing...
Mylo's situation is an all too familiar one, but seeing him slowly feel all the affection that he has wanted for the past 8 months is so satisfying. Reading as he got into that car made me want to pull my hair out, but I was hooked, then the text the morning after... Wow. Cannot say I wasn't disappointed in Mylo for falling for it again, also cannot say I wasn't disappointed the chapter ended there. Cannot wait for May 5th! I'm really excited to see what you have cooked up as the story continues!
Chapter 4 was great, the music was awesome!
Hard to put into words, but your writing feels real and raw. Conveys the emotion well and the characters are very charming. Love your work and always am excited to see what you make next.
It hurts to see Mylo like this. I've been through something similar and it was really bad for me... This guy simply doesn't deserve Mylo. I hope Mylo sees this and stops giving himself to him ;-;
He could be alone for a while and focus on his own things, or that other guy could stop messing around with Mylo and actually get serious about dating him... TwT
Omg I read a bit from your first vn you posted and realized who Baxter, Callum and Marcus are. This is perfect 🫨 excited to continue the first vn!!
I LOVE THIS!!, cant wait to see more of it! (baxter is so wholesome, big green flag)