I've played many visual novels before playing this one, and this one is definitely one of my favorites. Unfortunately, most of the good furry visual novels are usually made by a small team - or just one person - so they don't have that much support.
I've known about this visual novel for quite a while before actually playing it. The main reason was because most of the small visual novels have either been abandoned or just has a short story. But this one seems to be getting finished ( I hope )
Another thing is I was surprised by was the story of this one. Most of the stories in the more popular visual novels are mainly just some guy in college dealing with mental health and all that - Im not saying that's bad, just repetitive. So I liked this one for featuring more than that. The whole idea about wolves going extinct a long time ago and you and some other guy are the only ones left is a really scary idea.
Although, the game can use some touch-ups.
The art is really nice, it's a style I don't normally see. But, some of the character's sprites- especially Charles - have their shoulders a little to up; giving them an unnatural look. If you decide to consider this, then I drew a quick example of what I'm referring to:
When someone draws shoulders, they should normally be slanted. I'm pretty sure you can find a better tutorial somewhere else, but I wanted to inform you of this. I drew a red triangle on the right drawing to help show what I mean. The shoulders should be lower than the neck, otherwise it looks stiff and pretty uncomfortable. I suggest you look for a tutorial on YouTube or some other website if you wish for a better explanation.
The father of the hyena's sprite seems to have this little thing applied, so im not sure if you're aware of this already. But oh well...
The English translation in the earlier chapters could also use some work.
Besides that, this game was by far one of the best ones that I played - and I played a lot. Thank you for making this, and I will wait patiently for the next update. Thank you! ":3
Yeah the furry visual novel fandom is very niche, so only a few get some spotlight. But it's ok, small creator as me enjoy some supportive comments like that!
My art definitely need some rework indeed, I actually redraw Gaël, I wonder if I'll do Charles haha. Good shoulders advice btw!
For the English translation I'll do my best ><
Don't worry I'm not letting this project down! I'm halfway in my update, but with work and the incoming May Wolf 2024 Jam, it will take some extra time...
First time commenting and I must say, your game is the most unique I found here with more POVs than just the MC and the references and out of the box things you are just great. Love this work and excited to read the next chapter.
Et bien et bien la Communauté française toujours ici toujours à l'écoute et bien j'ai aimé j'ai recommencé le jeu pour être sûr d'avoir tous les recettes de plus j'ai bien aimé les deux nouveaux chapitres il y avait vraiment un sentiment de tristesse du dégoût et de la colère de plus j'ai bien aimé découvrir le secret et l'histoire de Martin et de ça cicatrice en tout cas je n'ai pas de suggestion à rajouter je ne peux rien dire je peux pas critiquer c'était juste parfait voilà j'espère que tu as aimé lire ce commentaire :)
Et frérot je me suis amusé sur ton VN vraiment l'histoire est très drôle du début jusqu'à la fin mais surtout (appeler un médecin pour la amis de Paul-Loup) il veut sortir avec son prof mais on est où xD
Ah oui en passant franchement mon ami avait raison j'étais un peu mitigé quand j'ai vu ce VN mais au final ça valait le coup donc je pense que il mérite 5 étoiles honnêtement surtout l'histoire même si je m'en fiche des passages NSFW c'est juste dommage qu'il y a pas de variantes françaises de ce genre mais en tout cas bien joué j'ai apprécié
One of the best vns I've ever read. The writing is good and the arts are very charismatic. The songs are also great, it fits well with the atmosphere. There's only one thing that bothered me while reading, but it didn't bother me that much. In the Android version, I don't know about the others, there seems to be a problem with the text box, it only contains three lines of dialogue and the rest is off screen. I don't know if it's because of my cell phone or what, but either way it doesn't interfere much with understanding the story.
Well, anyway, good work and thanks for your work and those involved.
Your comment is very heart warming ^w^ The composers made a god job indeed! And yeah the Android's text box is kinda wacky, I'll try to fix it next update!
Wanna let you know that the android version has some problem.
Mainly the text box, where the text is lower that usual. So in some long text it just crop down to the point of unreadable. Can you fix it or is there a way to fix it?
my head canon is after Charles he stacks the rocks, he lifts into a pile making sure they don't tumble on the ground like a fun activity to do when he's bored
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I've played many visual novels before playing this one, and this one is definitely one of my favorites. Unfortunately, most of the good furry visual novels are usually made by a small team - or just one person - so they don't have that much support.
I've known about this visual novel for quite a while before actually playing it. The main reason was because most of the small visual novels have either been abandoned or just has a short story. But this one seems to be getting finished ( I hope )
Another thing is I was surprised by was the story of this one. Most of the stories in the more popular visual novels are mainly just some guy in college dealing with mental health and all that - Im not saying that's bad, just repetitive. So I liked this one for featuring more than that. The whole idea about wolves going extinct a long time ago and you and some other guy are the only ones left is a really scary idea.
Although, the game can use some touch-ups.
The art is really nice, it's a style I don't normally see. But, some of the character's sprites- especially Charles - have their shoulders a little to up; giving them an unnatural look. If you decide to consider this, then I drew a quick example of what I'm referring to:
When someone draws shoulders, they should normally be slanted. I'm pretty sure you can find a better tutorial somewhere else, but I wanted to inform you of this. I drew a red triangle on the right drawing to help show what I mean. The shoulders should be lower than the neck, otherwise it looks stiff and pretty uncomfortable. I suggest you look for a tutorial on YouTube or some other website if you wish for a better explanation.
The father of the hyena's sprite seems to have this little thing applied, so im not sure if you're aware of this already. But oh well...
The English translation in the earlier chapters could also use some work.
Besides that, this game was by far one of the best ones that I played - and I played a lot. Thank you for making this, and I will wait patiently for the next update. Thank you! ":3
Wow thanks a lot Maksim!
Yeah the furry visual novel fandom is very niche, so only a few get some spotlight. But it's ok, small creator as me enjoy some supportive comments like that!
My art definitely need some rework indeed, I actually redraw Gaël, I wonder if I'll do Charles haha. Good shoulders advice btw!
For the English translation I'll do my best ><
Don't worry I'm not letting this project down! I'm halfway in my update, but with work and the incoming May Wolf 2024 Jam, it will take some extra time...
Thanks again for tour comment 😇
First time commenting and I must say, your game is the most unique I found here with more POVs than just the MC and the references and out of the box things you are just great. Love this work and excited to read the next chapter.
I'm honored by your comment! Thank you, I'll keep working hard on it :3
Just finished reading the new Chapters, love the new turn the story is taking.
And me who was scared it was getting too dark lol, glad you like it 🤗
Hey,on the android version the text overflow bwyond the screen down there
Damn for me and for other users it worked well! I tried already to change some stuff but it seems there are still somme issues.
I'm afraid you'll need to try on another device until I found a solution 😅
On what device are you using btw? It might help me.
haha no worries, it happens!
I'm was using a galaxy tab s6 lite
Hope it helps :>
A tablet! Ooh that's might be that, I will roam around Renpy documentation and see what I can do, thx~
Et bien et bien la Communauté française toujours ici toujours à l'écoute et bien j'ai aimé j'ai recommencé le jeu pour être sûr d'avoir tous les recettes de plus j'ai bien aimé les deux nouveaux chapitres il y avait vraiment un sentiment de tristesse du dégoût et de la colère de plus j'ai bien aimé découvrir le secret et l'histoire de Martin et de ça cicatrice en tout cas je n'ai pas de suggestion à rajouter je ne peux rien dire je peux pas critiquer c'était juste parfait voilà j'espère que tu as aimé lire ce commentaire :)
C'était toujours un plaisir de lire des commentaires aussi positif que les tiens ^^
Je suis content de savoir t'as passé du temps à tout rejouer pour avoir toutes les recettes, bravo!
Ça fait plaisir que t'as aimé les deux derniers chapitres, merci 😇
De rien ça m'a fait plaisir aussi comme ça j'ai recommencé le jeu du coup j'ai recommencé l'histoire pour me remettre dans le bain❤️❤️❤️
Et aussi
Et frérot je me suis amusé sur ton VN vraiment l'histoire est très drôle du début jusqu'à la fin mais surtout (appeler un médecin pour la amis de Paul-Loup) il veut sortir avec son prof mais on est où xD
Ah oui en passant franchement mon ami avait raison j'étais un peu mitigé quand j'ai vu ce VN mais au final ça valait le coup donc je pense que il mérite 5 étoiles honnêtement surtout l'histoire même si je m'en fiche des passages NSFW c'est juste dommage qu'il y a pas de variantes françaises de ce genre mais en tout cas bien joué j'ai apprécié
Oui Martin est un peu horny sur les bords haha.
Ravi que t'es aimé mon vn 🥰
D'autres furry visual novel français il y en a mais pas des masses, un gars sympa a fait cette collection si ça peut t'aider:
https://itch.io/c/3169476/fvn-en-franais-fvns-in-french
hehe et bien merci bcp j'ai hate de voir la suite bg :))
Love the vn when the next release
Aah dunno, I need to finish some stuff in the chapter, then check all script and translation...
Might take a little while 🫠
Don't want to make false hope, but I'll try to post it before the end of the year ><
Thanks for your question btw!
One of the best vns I've ever read. The writing is good and the arts are very charismatic. The songs are also great, it fits well with the atmosphere. There's only one thing that bothered me while reading, but it didn't bother me that much. In the Android version, I don't know about the others, there seems to be a problem with the text box, it only contains three lines of dialogue and the rest is off screen. I don't know if it's because of my cell phone or what, but either way it doesn't interfere much with understanding the story.
Well, anyway, good work and thanks for your work and those involved.
Your comment is very heart warming ^w^
The composers made a god job indeed!
And yeah the Android's text box is kinda wacky, I'll try to fix it next update!
👍(☆▽☆)👍
Wonderful VN, the story and art has me wanting so much more, can't wait for the next chapters ^ ^
Happy to know you enjoyed it!
Speaking of next chapters, I'm almost done writing, just need a couple of drawings and the translation and the 4th update will be out 😇
Nice!! Im very excited for this :D
Vraiment pas mal du tout et merci pour la VF ^^
De rien 🤗
Ça me fait plaisir que t'as aimé mon vn!
juste une question y a une suite
Bien sûr ! J'y travaille en ce moment mdr
ok :)
Wanna let you know that the android version has some problem.
Mainly the text box, where the text is lower that usual. So in some long text it just crop down to the point of unreadable. Can you fix it or is there a way to fix it?
Thanks for reporting it! Yeah it must be annoying 😅
When I got time I should cut long text in two, or decrease the font size... I'll see 🤗
Your welcome, and I'll say it here.
The VN has potential, keep up the good work :)
Thanks pal 😋
my head canon is after Charles he stacks the rocks, he lifts into a pile making sure they don't tumble on the ground like a fun activity to do when he's bored
Aww that's a cute idea 🤩
And it also keeps his body in shape ~