imo the writing on this is too simplistic n lacking depth for me to be invested. i get yu want to avoid purple prose, but this dialogue reads like one ov those stock image myon books yu read in middle school
the lesbophobia isn't helping, either. (theres a part that stereotypes lesbians as man-haters. i get that ozaki studios aren't/isn't a lesbophobe, n that it was probably juz bad wording n characterization but we gotta watch out for bigotry in game developers namsayin?)
ye dw. btw i don't think yu hate lesbians or lgbt people in gen. i just think that when writing lgbt people that just happen to be bad people, we shouldn't be quick to use stereotypes n stuf.
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does this game have voice acting?
only the credits seem to be voice-acted.
if the full game is voice-acted, it dosen't play at all, except the credits.
can you make your other games accessible?
sadly no.
is this a romance vn? does it have any accessibility for blind?
all buttons/options and everything else is properly labeled right?
dw about blind access. you literally only press space in this game, and every person has a different voice.
imo the writing on this is too simplistic n lacking depth for me to be invested. i get yu want to avoid purple prose, but this dialogue reads like one ov those stock image myon books yu read in middle school
the lesbophobia isn't helping, either. (theres a part that stereotypes lesbians as man-haters. i get that ozaki studios aren't/isn't a lesbophobe, n that it was probably juz bad wording n characterization but we gotta watch out for bigotry in game developers namsayin?)
I will add a few more lines into the game in an update soon. sorry if you had a bad experience!
ye dw. btw i don't think yu hate lesbians or lgbt people in gen. i just think that when writing lgbt people that just happen to be bad people, we shouldn't be quick to use stereotypes n stuf.
I added a line that might make it a little less homophobic.
This was very interesting I enjoyed it despite my joking around this was a well done little story keep up the great work!
Thank you very much for the feedback and the video!
Thank you for making a great visual novel!