Batch payments are restricted for adult games and this makes game devs need to take single payments from purchasers. This is for all platforms except Steam and G.O.G....from my research kids were buying games underage and some dumb law is now being cooked/forced. Need to research further, but doesn't seem legal.
That was a straight up R*** scene. What option do you need to press to unlock it? Then also offer it, might as well put up a scene for those who don't wanna see it. Good animation and menu with flair. But that last scene was to much bruh. Didn't fit the MCs character....it makes no sense
Keyclap, я правильно понимаю, что после январского обновления пока ничего больше нет? Просто я вижу, что люди в комментариях обсуждают то, чего я совсем не помню. Поэтому я подумал, может быть я просто чего-то не знаю? Очень понравилась ваша игра и работа над ней. Проверяю обновления на этом сайте с января, но так и не нашел ничего нового.
Последняя версия 0.1.3 временно убрана с этого сайта из-за некоторых недоработок. Но я бы очень настоял на том, чтобы вы подождали до следующей версии - 0.1.4.
This is one of the smoothest renpy game by far. The story is great and the renders look amazing including the animation so keep up with good work.
Bug list and suggestions with spoilers for 0.1.3
Bugs are mostly related by replaying the game (new game, after you finished)
inventory is not empty
party music is still playing and the hall and kittchen button party animation is still active
day 2 is the most bugged with basically having the party lighting in the morning, hall is decorated, Lucy is sleeping on the couch and there is even second Mariya in the kitchen (yes you can be stuck later on because of that if you talk to them)
Other bugs
phone music still plays even when the part of the story is music
playing the game in english can sometimes display russian (suzzy hug while spinning the bottle)
I might have missed some, not sure
Suggestions
the birthday hug, when Mariya receives a book should be timed option
have a small sparkle on items that can be clicked that unlocks gallery images, and i really mean subtle one that you can see if you are looking for it since it took me quite a while to figure out half of them
gestures for moving/zooming on the images (not a priority, but would feel way better on mobile)
I really hope that the android experience will stay as smooth as this when the game gets bigger, since many developers have problems with the 2/4gb apk limit and joiplay is just not the right solution
A hidden gem! I loved the characters, they felt like real people with genuine emotions. The renders were beautiful, and the animations were some of the best I've ever seen in any VN game.
Edit: Can we name our saves? I didn't found any option for that.
I'm a fan of this AVN and really enjoyed the previous version. This version (I guess he's pulled it to make some changes) had a scene at the end which is questionable and made me feel uneasy as it seemed it was non-consensual which I can't condone. I hope he re-works that part because I really like this story and all of the characters. I'll reserve judgement until I play the next update.
Вот не знаю насчет несогласия.. Мне показалось она сама его спровоцировала и ни разу не слышал от нее слова нет и подобного сопротивления.. В целом конечно единственная сцена неоднозначна и сделана скорее для обкатки визуализации и эффектов. Верю автор возможно поправит кое какие моменты и по сюжету будет все ванильно, правдоподобно и приторно. Вопрос вызывает только одно: автор заявляет, что категорически не будет ntr, следовательно дальнейший сюжет будет развиваться только на отношениях с ней. Надо видимо сделать еще одну сохраненку, если захочется развить отношение с кем-то другим. Разве нет?
I agree that there was no explicit 'no' or 'dont' ... but it appeared to me that she was in no state of mind (excessively intoxicated) to rationally consent. That was my only issue. Aside from that, I thoroughly enjoyed this update.
Возможно, но если пересмотреть все события вечера, то это не первый опыт с алкоголем.. И ведет себя обычно так, как-будто есть в ней небольшая доля мазохизма.. Даже показалось, что она не любит слабаков и все ее поведение как провокация определить характер. Другими словами я не думаю, что она была явно против произошедшего. В нас всех есть свои извращенные стороны, попробуйте пройти обновление еще раз и убедиться, замечая мелочи в поведении. Интересно, что же будет дальше.. Но все-таки отсутствие ntr все еще вызывает вопросы, потому как есть возможность проявлять интерес к одной сестре, даже пытаться поцеловать, а «присунуть» другой..
just finished 1.3 and i loved it! been following this game for a while and finally decided to try it and im glad i did. im really excited to see the next update, thank you for making this :)
What do you mean by anti-cheat? The game still can be decompiled and the code can be viewed, even though it's hard to do safe because the code is a little complex.
I can't edit saves so you clearly put some anti-cheat in the game, neither can I use urm....
In any case after playing the last update it seems to me like you lied about this game not having ntr, sharing in the future, the last update ends with some dude coming home with the mom.... and Mariya talking with him half naked.... I know what kind of devs put this shit in their story and all those devs make cuck games... so will just ignore this from now on, seems pretty clear what kind of content will be soon in the game.
And just to be clear, anyone else (not the mc) fucking 1 of the lis (love interest) is cuck shit ntr.
Umh... I still don't understand about what anti-cheat you're talking about. You can always enable a developer mode and use console to change stats you want like: player.money, suzy.love, mariya.friend
And what's the benefit of me lying to my supporters? There will be no NTR.
Then explain that blonde guy sleeping in the house of the mc after coming home with the mom? you are basically teasing it in the last update cliffhanger.
And the anti-cheating you must know what it is because you added the code yourself, if someone edits the save the game doesn't allow the player to continue with that save.
I can't be sure, but you've probably faced with the new security system in Ren'Py that prevents players from loading potentially harmful save files: https://github.com/renpy/renpy/issues/4879
The game seemed like a romantic story, vanilla, humor and good character development but .... WTF was that rape scene!!. It doesn't fit with the MC's personality, what the hell!.
Every good story has an ending and this one was fast. R.I.P.
Honestly, I didn't want to make it “rape” intentionally. The whole idea was about making the scene super interactive, so I could practice animating, liquid simulating and so on. And it just went nowhere...
Please, don't make hasty conclusions. I'll keep working on the game.
Hello there! I really enjoyed playing the game, and the storyline is quite engaging. However, I do agree with some of the comments from other players regarding a particular sensitive scene. I'm not sure if this has to do with cultural differences, but that scene felt very uncomfortable for me and potentially for others as well.
The female character in that scene didn't appear to be in a mental state where she could give genuine consent for any sexual interaction. It seemed more like the main character was taking advantage of her while she was under the influence, which felt out of character for the story.
I noticed you mentioned that this scene is being reworked, and I hope it's being approached with care and sensitivity, as it could be triggering for some players. Despite this concern, I want to emphasize that I love the game overall. The artwork and gameplay are fantastic, and I've become an instant fan. Great job!
ну подписчики получат первыми смотря какими уровнями доната.. Это тоже неплохо.. и оперативную информацию получают подписчики более высокого уровня. подождать стоит, но хотелось бы хотя бы информацию сжато, что по релизу в посте для подписчиков от второго уровня, первый уровень и неподписчики не могут посмотреть что в информации по релизу.. Игра будет однозначно, но в течение 3 недель. Автор пока собирает донаты, и это правильно, можете пойти и поддержать, чем выше уровень подписки, тем раньше сможете заценить игру.
Please help and fix. I changed the Animation engine but it didn't loop around, I got to a blank option. I have tried to uninstall and re-install it but I think the settings are saved somewhere else. I can't find them, I have been sitting here for a long time looking through my computer and removing stuff from AppData but nothing works.
не торопите, товарищи.)) рендерить тоже дело не быстрое. Пусть автор сделает все необходимое для комфортной игры.. Вы же, при включении компьютера, не торопите его быстрее грузиться: он же все равно проведет все необходимые тесты, загрузки и включится ровно тогда, когда будет готов.. Хотя понять нетерпение могу, сам тут каждый день торчу ;-) ..
Надеюсь прода будет) меня это игра поразила, всё идеально, игра вправду очень хорошая получилась, кто бы там эту игру не делал без сомнения гений своего дела, не бросай игру только пожалуйста) я бы даже донат отправил, только не знаю как это сделать...
Это лучшая визуаль новелла в которую я играл) Интерфейс, графика, диалоги, наличие анимаций, много выборов, прикольные фишки, qr-коды те же, всё шикарно (да и тот же ввод разных форм своего имени, тоже не везде, тоже большой плюс, приятно видеть разнообразие имени вместо кучи местоимений типа ты тебя и т.д. и т.п.)
А наличие человеческого русского языка, а не кривой локализации, это отдельная тема для благодарности вообще
Короче очень классно) Спасибо) Надеюсь оно не остановится в развитии и будет долго радовать, правда приятная новелла, хочу надолго в неё засесть
Even without the adult aspects of the game thus far, there are few if any flaws. I agree with comments about the task issue regarding the gift. My biggest recommendation going forward is to make windowed viewing of the available, or if it is, make the interface easier to find.
Excellent work on the game! Natural characterization, superb visuals, and especially an excellent user interface! The social media and camera systems are very impressive, and it's clear that a ton of work and heart was put into this. I really like the UI transition when the player takes the Elevator, it's so good. And you've snuck in some good tutorials for various systems which no doubt will be used later in the game.
Some small points of feedback:
* Scanning a QR code is very difficult, primarily I think because the player needs to drag around two sliders rather than dragging a box on the image itself.
* I missed the entire social media section before visiting Sara at the coffee shop and felt bad that I didn't accept her friend request! I didn't even realize there was more to the social media system until she commented about it.
* I primarily didn't buy the girl cigarettes because I wasn't sure how much money I needed to save for the rest of my shopping. I also got confused when shopping, expecting that Ekaterina would send a shopping list and I was concerned I'd get the shopping wrong.
It's kind of difficult to tell what kind of game it is from just the itch.io page, though, and I could've easily missed it if I didn't choose to try it out. I'd recommend adding a screenshot for the social media system and the map, to demonstrate that you have more features than a visual novel. You might also consider describing how the game expects players to be a bit more observant, and won't always give everything to the player directly. (Such as when shopping for Mariya's birthday gift.) This could help draw more players in to your very impressive game.
Thank you! I'll try to implement a better QR code scanning in future releases. Oh, your feedback is actually super helpful. I'll definitely take note of this!
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我真的很喜欢这项工作。请尽快更新。你做得很好
Hi dev, can you please share the progress on OBD? I hope everything is going smoothly.
you should post on
https://lewdcorner.com/ and https://lewdzone.com
Will this game have pregnancy?
Из-за алиментов переживаешь?
Потому что это было бы весело.
because it would be fun.
it would be fun.
When does he give the drink to Lucy? I couldn't see.
You have to buy a liquor before the birthday party.
Any news on the coming update sir?
Is the game dead?
Why? No.
Because there was the last update in January?
OBD 0.1.3 was removed from here but you can download the game from https://linktr.ee/keyclap
When is the next major update？
After a couple months.
Do you by any chance know why there are quite a few games that happen to be removed from here? Is this a common thing from itch.io ?
Batch payments are restricted for adult games and this makes game devs need to take single payments from purchasers. This is for all platforms except Steam and G.O.G....from my research kids were buying games underage and some dumb law is now being cooked/forced. Need to research further, but doesn't seem legal.
https://itch.io/t/2809361/will-adult-games-be-forced-into-direct-payments-instea...
уважаемый, что насчет стима ? вы планируете выход на плащадку? купил бы обязательно
Да, но не в ближайем будущем. Контента пока что не достаточно ;)
И по братски, когда примерно выйдет 0.1.4
Через пару месяцев :3
Чел спасибо за игру. Твое творчество даже без 18+ просто огонь, the last of us всасывает по сравнению с одним лишь саундтреком и сценарием
how to get the R scene? curious after reading the comments
That was a straight up R*** scene. What option do you need to press to unlock it? Then also offer it, might as well put up a scene for those who don't wanna see it. Good animation and menu with flair. But that last scene was to much bruh. Didn't fit the MCs character....it makes no sense
Если не хотите смотреть, то как правильно понял, можете выбрать уйти и не испытывать дискомфорта. Сразу окажетесь у такси.
Keyclap, я правильно понимаю, что после январского обновления пока ничего больше нет? Просто я вижу, что люди в комментариях обсуждают то, чего я совсем не помню. Поэтому я подумал, может быть я просто чего-то не знаю? Очень понравилась ваша игра и работа над ней. Проверяю обновления на этом сайте с января, но так и не нашел ничего нового.
Рад, что вам понравилось! 😊
Последняя версия 0.1.3 временно убрана с этого сайта из-за некоторых недоработок. Но я бы очень настоял на том, чтобы вы подождали до следующей версии - 0.1.4.
I’m stuck at Happy Birthday, Sis! Now go home.
Oh, end of this build. I miss the text
This is one of the smoothest renpy game by far. The story is great and the renders look amazing including the animation so keep up with good work.
Bug list and suggestions with spoilers for 0.1.3
Bugs are mostly related by replaying the game (new game, after you finished)
Other bugs
I might have missed some, not sure
Suggestions
I really hope that the android experience will stay as smooth as this when the game gets bigger, since many developers have problems with the 2/4gb apk limit and joiplay is just not the right solution
Thank you! Seems like that all the bugs you mentioned come from the android port. I'll report this issue to the Ren'Py developer.
Could you tell me what phone do you have and what Android version is used?
Sure, I’m using samsung galaxy s21 (exynos version) with android 13.
A hidden gem! I loved the characters, they felt like real people with genuine emotions. The renders were beautiful, and the animations were some of the best I've ever seen in any VN game.
Edit: Can we name our saves? I didn't found any option for that.
Yep. Open your saves, click the “Edit” button on the upper right, and on the left side you'll be able to enable save names.
something has changed 🤯
I'm a fan of this AVN and really enjoyed the previous version. This version (I guess he's pulled it to make some changes) had a scene at the end which is questionable and made me feel uneasy as it seemed it was non-consensual which I can't condone. I hope he re-works that part because I really like this story and all of the characters. I'll reserve judgement until I play the next update.
Overall, good work.
Вот не знаю насчет несогласия.. Мне показалось она сама его спровоцировала и ни разу не слышал от нее слова нет и подобного сопротивления.. В целом конечно единственная сцена неоднозначна и сделана скорее для обкатки визуализации и эффектов. Верю автор возможно поправит кое какие моменты и по сюжету будет все ванильно, правдоподобно и приторно. Вопрос вызывает только одно: автор заявляет, что категорически не будет ntr, следовательно дальнейший сюжет будет развиваться только на отношениях с ней. Надо видимо сделать еще одну сохраненку, если захочется развить отношение с кем-то другим. Разве нет?
I agree that there was no explicit 'no' or 'dont' ... but it appeared to me that she was in no state of mind (excessively intoxicated) to rationally consent. That was my only issue. Aside from that, I thoroughly enjoyed this update.
Возможно, но если пересмотреть все события вечера, то это не первый опыт с алкоголем.. И ведет себя обычно так, как-будто есть в ней небольшая доля мазохизма.. Даже показалось, что она не любит слабаков и все ее поведение как провокация определить характер. Другими словами я не думаю, что она была явно против произошедшего. В нас всех есть свои извращенные стороны, попробуйте пройти обновление еще раз и убедиться, замечая мелочи в поведении. Интересно, что же будет дальше.. Но все-таки отсутствие ntr все еще вызывает вопросы, потому как есть возможность проявлять интерес к одной сестре, даже пытаться поцеловать, а «присунуть» другой..
I totally agree with you
just finished 1.3 and i loved it! been following this game for a while and finally decided to try it and im glad i did. im really excited to see the next update, thank you for making this :)
hey @Keyclap when you click the Release OBD 0.1.3 download your sent to this page and you cant download 0.1.3 but only 0.1.2
OBD 0.1.3 is removed until it's reworked. I'm sorry for that...
???Y isn't it letting me download 1.3!
remove the stupid crap anti cheat system, one of the good things about renpy is being able to alter shit...
What do you mean by anti-cheat? The game still can be decompiled and the code can be viewed, even though it's hard to do safe because the code is a little complex.
I can't edit saves so you clearly put some anti-cheat in the game, neither can I use urm....
In any case after playing the last update it seems to me like you lied about this game not having ntr, sharing in the future, the last update ends with some dude coming home with the mom.... and Mariya talking with him half naked....
I know what kind of devs put this shit in their story and all those devs make cuck games... so will just ignore this from now on, seems pretty clear what kind of content will be soon in the game.
And just to be clear, anyone else (not the mc) fucking 1 of the lis (love interest) is cuck shit ntr.
Umh... I still don't understand about what anti-cheat you're talking about. You can always enable a developer mode and use console to change stats you want like: player.money, suzy.love, mariya.friend
And what's the benefit of me lying to my supporters? There will be no NTR.
Then explain that blonde guy sleeping in the house of the mc after coming home with the mom?
you are basically teasing it in the last update cliffhanger.
And the anti-cheating you must know what it is because you added the code yourself, if someone edits the save the game doesn't allow the player to continue with that save.
It's only your guess that he was sleeping there. I officially stated that there'll be no NTR, so it's only up to you to trust me or not.
Just think about it. What's the benefit of adding some sort of «anti-cheat» to the game? Spend extra time to make people like you angry?
I can't be sure, but you've probably faced with the new security system in Ren'Py that prevents players from loading potentially harmful save files: https://github.com/renpy/renpy/issues/4879
The game seemed like a romantic story, vanilla, humor and good character development but .... WTF was that rape scene!!. It doesn't fit with the MC's personality, what the hell!.
Every good story has an ending and this one was fast. R.I.P.
I'm sorry for disappointing you.
Honestly, I didn't want to make it “rape” intentionally. The whole idea was about making the scene super interactive, so I could practice animating, liquid simulating and so on. And it just went nowhere...
Please, don't make hasty conclusions. I'll keep working on the game.
No one questions your artwork, it's amazing
So will the rape scene stay or will it be reworked into something else ?
It will be reworked.
Hello there! I really enjoyed playing the game, and the storyline is quite engaging. However, I do agree with some of the comments from other players regarding a particular sensitive scene. I'm not sure if this has to do with cultural differences, but that scene felt very uncomfortable for me and potentially for others as well.
The female character in that scene didn't appear to be in a mental state where she could give genuine consent for any sexual interaction. It seemed more like the main character was taking advantage of her while she was under the influence, which felt out of character for the story.
I noticed you mentioned that this scene is being reworked, and I hope it's being approached with care and sensitivity, as it could be triggering for some players. Despite this concern, I want to emphasize that I love the game overall. The artwork and gameplay are fantastic, and I've become an instant fan. Great job!
Just left a comment, that makes sense for experimental reasons. But gawd dammmmmm that scene came out of left field
the old saves is not work ?
Well... yes, actually. Sowwy...
у кого подписка на boosty есть? процитируйте хоть что там написано..
шо патч уже вышел там
ну подписчики получат первыми смотря какими уровнями доната.. Это тоже неплохо.. и оперативную информацию получают подписчики более высокого уровня. подождать стоит, но хотелось бы хотя бы информацию сжато, что по релизу в посте для подписчиков от второго уровня, первый уровень и неподписчики не могут посмотреть что в информации по релизу.. Игра будет однозначно, но в течение 3 недель. Автор пока собирает донаты, и это правильно, можете пойти и поддержать, чем выше уровень подписки, тем раньше сможете заценить игру.
уже) и подписчик и задонатил, проект очень хорошо выглядит
The update scheduled for the 20th today is out now on his patreon I just got the discord announcement about 15-20 minutes ago
Does this mean that an update is pending here as well? Has anyone seen the update itself on patreon?
The game will be uploaded here in 2-3 weeks he said in discord
This right there release date June 20,will be update is planned on
where is this information from?
keyclap, что случилось? куда пропал? ни сном ни духом 2 с лишним месяца от тебя
да. хотя бы расклад чтоли дал по прогрессу и народ бы успокоился. Лично я без особых претензий. Но непонятно, может что случилось..
Вот все и волнуются
Обновите игру
Please help and fix. I changed the Animation engine but it didn't loop around, I got to a blank option. I have tried to uninstall and re-install it but I think the settings are saved somewhere else. I can't find them, I have been sitting here for a long time looking through my computer and removing stuff from AppData but nothing works.
All that time wasted, I got a popup later in-game asking me to choose.
Бро, помер что ли? Давно ответов нет...
any info for next update or the progres ?
Уже конец мая а обновления нет когда оно будет
не торопите, товарищи.)) рендерить тоже дело не быстрое. Пусть автор сделает все необходимое для комфортной игры.. Вы же, при включении компьютера, не торопите его быстрее грузиться: он же все равно проведет все необходимые тесты, загрузки и включится ровно тогда, когда будет готов.. Хотя понять нетерпение могу, сам тут каждый день торчу ;-) ..
Надеюсь прода будет) меня это игра поразила, всё идеально, игра вправду очень хорошая получилась, кто бы там эту игру не делал без сомнения гений своего дела, не бросай игру только пожалуйста) я бы даже донат отправил, только не знаю как это сделать...
Когда обновление 1.3 с новыми анимациями и фишками
Это лучшая визуаль новелла в которую я играл) Интерфейс, графика, диалоги, наличие анимаций, много выборов, прикольные фишки, qr-коды те же, всё шикарно (да и тот же ввод разных форм своего имени, тоже не везде, тоже большой плюс, приятно видеть разнообразие имени вместо кучи местоимений типа ты тебя и т.д. и т.п.)
А наличие человеческого русского языка, а не кривой локализации, это отдельная тема для благодарности вообще
Короче очень классно) Спасибо) Надеюсь оно не остановится в развитии и будет долго радовать, правда приятная новелла, хочу надолго в неё засесть
Братишка, как ты там? Как игра?
will this game remain free? i've played others that once they reached an update point became paywalled
Even without the adult aspects of the game thus far, there are few if any flaws. I agree with comments about the task issue regarding the gift. My biggest recommendation going forward is to make windowed viewing of the available, or if it is, make the interface easier to find.
Pls update 🥹🥹🥹
Excellent work on the game! Natural characterization, superb visuals, and especially an excellent user interface! The social media and camera systems are very impressive, and it's clear that a ton of work and heart was put into this. I really like the UI transition when the player takes the Elevator, it's so good. And you've snuck in some good tutorials for various systems which no doubt will be used later in the game.
Some small points of feedback:
* Scanning a QR code is very difficult, primarily I think because the player needs to drag around two sliders rather than dragging a box on the image itself.
* I missed the entire social media section before visiting Sara at the coffee shop and felt bad that I didn't accept her friend request! I didn't even realize there was more to the social media system until she commented about it.
* I primarily didn't buy the girl cigarettes because I wasn't sure how much money I needed to save for the rest of my shopping. I also got confused when shopping, expecting that Ekaterina would send a shopping list and I was concerned I'd get the shopping wrong.
It's kind of difficult to tell what kind of game it is from just the itch.io page, though, and I could've easily missed it if I didn't choose to try it out. I'd recommend adding a screenshot for the social media system and the map, to demonstrate that you have more features than a visual novel. You might also consider describing how the game expects players to be a bit more observant, and won't always give everything to the player directly. (Such as when shopping for Mariya's birthday gift.) This could help draw more players in to your very impressive game.
Thank you! I'll try to implement a better QR code scanning in future releases.
Oh, your feedback is actually super helpful. I'll definitely take note of this!