Living In Viellci [V0.2]

gib casino or i starve millie with cheap food

Incredible！this is almost another Imouto！Life in my dream.

Look forward to your game!

android ver keeps crashing every couple minutes making the game unplayable

How to get that bath scene

I happened to see your game over at Kimochi.  I'm not sure if I can show you the link due to it being a pirate site. Though, pirate sites have their use for advertising games.

i swear im blind 

i cant figure out how to leave that clothing store

guess i was blind

You know what?

I realllllly really love this game:D

even there aren't many NSFW contents now,but I just addicted Myself into thiswonderful game.

and for My beloved game.I have some suggestions for you My Dear:P

1.in the prologue.there is a QTE act.butttt, I can't do ANYTHING to react this!!!!AND I just die and die and die(I'mAndroid BTW)SO I just skip the prologue,and I don't know the previous stories between MC and millie:(

2.the clothes are too expensive!I have to workreallyhard to earn the money(almost 1k per day in happy mood)

3.This game is really ADDICTING.when I playing it,I just forget the time:( even I have class in the morning. hahahah I m just kidding:)))

Actually I don't have questions anymore. the only thing is the content are so limited.I really wanna see the update:P

BTW THX for your developing,I love the gamejust like I love you(hahaah just kidding(^3^))

Is there any chance of having the ability to change the name of the MC?

WOOOOOOOO

The god is back! WOOOOOOOOOO

When we getting another update love this game

What fetishes/tags?

Can anybody tell me the stroy of prologue

I'm on android how do i dodge the knife in the beginning?

Do you need help on improving on grammar? I'm an english major and I can gladly help improve the english to make the story feel more cohesive. Either way, I really like this game! Can't wait for the update

I put together a bunch of texts that I feel are more correct than what is in the game.  "A" texts are what is already present, while "B" is the proposed alternatives.  "C" is notes on my reasoning, wherever I feel appropriate.

The version played is v0.2.

#1A:  Raymond - "My father called me yesterday and he need an urgent request."

#1B:  Raymond - "My father called me yesterday, he had an urgent request."

#1C:  The addition of an "," helps the sentence flow more naturally.  

In the context of this sentence "he need an urgent request" doesn't make sense in English.  This is because it implies that the father is creating a situation, rather than wanting one to be resolved.

#2A:  Raymond - "A cheap weaponry...it mays sound impossible, but..."

#2B:  Raymond - "Cheap weapons.  It may sound impossible, but..."

#2C:  While "weaponry" is technically correct, it doesn't naturally fit in this context.  The "..." was replaced by a "." because the overuse of an "..." can feel weird, and a single period here makes Raymond sound more experienced in his field.   "Mays" is definately wrong, with the only correct usage in English being as a name - typically a last one.   EG, "Billy Mays".

#3A: Raymond - "Yeah, also gather some information about the crystals in the city."

#3B: Raymond - "Yeah, also while gathering information about crystals in the city."

#3C:  The sentence doesn't flow quite right.  While technically correct, the context with prior text boxes makes it feel unnatural.

#4A: Raymond - "I'll send you the blueprints when I arrive in the city"

#4B: Raymond - "I'll send you the blueprints when I arrive in the city."

#5A: Raymond - So I, as his son and as a weapon tinkerer, travel from Cosnela to Viellci Dc."

#5B: Raymond - So I, as his son and weapon tinkerer, traveled from Cosnela to Viellci Dc."

#5C:  By removing the "as a", the sentence feels less repetitive.  That part is actually fine, but I felt that I should mention the alternative wording.   "traveled" is more natural for this sentence, due to being past tense.  "travel" implies present or future tense.

#6A: Raymond - "Father had his hopes on me, having to accomplish it all in a month."

#6B: Raymond - "Father pinned his hopes on me, to accomplish it all in a month."

#6C:  "had his hopes on me" is not a wording used in English.  Thus, I replaced it with something that conveys a similar idea but recognized in English.  "having to accomplish it all in a month" is technically correct, but the context makes it less natural than the rewritten version.

#7A: Raymond - "For if were to fail, my father's hand would be forced, having to manufacture weapons of inferior quality."

#7B: Raymond - "If I were to fail, my father would be forced to manufacture weapons of inferior quality.

#7C:  "For if were to fail" is incorrect.  It doesn't convey as much information as it could, and trying to speak it as-is would be awkward.  When in doubt about text, speak it out loud and see if rolls off the tongue naturally.  "My father's hand would be forced"  Is technically correct and a wording often used in English.  The issue is that what comes afterwards didn't flow naturally.  I recommend using this wording elsewhere in the game, as it is a good one.

#8A: Raymond - "I would be exiled from the city for shattering his hopes but most importantly, wasting his time.

#8B: Raymond - "I would be exiled from the city for shattering his hopes, but more importantly, wasting his time.

#8C:  Without the extra comma, the sentence is hard to say in real life and more difficult to read.  "most importantly" while technically and contextually correct, is not often used in English.  "more importantly" is a much more common way of conveying the idea.  Both wordings are valid!

#9A: Raymond - "It was my father recommendation and it was his old apartment."

#9B: Raymond - "It was my father's recommendation and it was his old apartment."

#10A: Raymond - "After an exhausting day of weapon designing."

#10B: Raymond - "After an exhausting day of weapon designing, I've decided to use an alternative core for the weapon."

10C:  Technically correct, but didn't feel quite right.  By integrating both sentences together, the sudden stop from "weapon designing." is removed.  

11A:  Raymond - "A few days ago, we found some unique ones.  We took it, and researched it until now."

11B:  Raymond - "A few days ago, we found some unique ones.  We took them, and researched until now."

11B:  Raymond - "A few days ago, we found some unique ones.  We took one, and researched it until now."

11C:  By using "it", you imply a single crystal, while "ones" is plural.  I put together two revised texts, one for a plurality of crystals - and the other singular.  I think the plural text is better, but I don't know the full story.

12:  Raymond - "As I was walking home, having a discussion about the crystals with my friend."

12:  Raymond - "As I was walking home, having a discussion about the crystals with my friend..."

12C:  The sentence is correct, it just feels awkward because the period is a hard-stop.  By having the trailing "...", it is implied something grabbed Raymond's attention.

13A:  Girl - "All I know is ... I've been in a street ever since."

13B:  Girl - "All I know...I've always lived on the street."

13C:  The formatting of " ... " is a bit odd, so I altered it slightly.  The latter half of the sentence is confusing, in a way that I believe to be unintentional.

14A:  Girl - "Why bother ask those questions."

14B:  Girl - "Why bother, asking those questions?"

14B:  Girl - "Why bother asking those questions."

14C:  The original form felt awkward.  I recommend the revision with the "?", but the version with "." may be suitable if she is making a statement.

15A: Raymond - "They kidnap almost every outcast in every dome city."

15B: Raymond - "They kidnap outcasts in all dome cities."

15C:  Using "every" twice feels very repetitive and makes the sentence harder to parse.

16A: Tutorial - "Day represents the amount of day you've spent with Millie."

16B: Tutorial - "Day represents the amount of time you've spent with Millie."

16B: Tutorial - "Day represents the number of days you've spent with Millie."

16C:  Using "day" twice doesn't feel good.  In addition to this, the latter "day" lacks plurality.  When more than one day is spent with someone, "days" is more appropriate.

Aside from text, I have a bit of confusion regarding the SFW mode:  is it "on" or "off"?   Having text that says "SFW mode is ON/OFF", with the appropriate word being hi-lighted would make the toggle more understandable.

A great game which has a unique style and alot of potential. Cant wait for the new update.

The game design is very unique. I love it! Hope for new updates!

Good shit

This game is awesome keep it up (⁠⌐⁠■⁠-⁠■⁠)👌

I really liked the game. I look forward to continuing.

I didn't realize that I could click and drag on the map screen at first.

I see a lot of Imouto! Monochrome in it, that is what drew my interest in it. This is the sort of game I can see Sankaku Complex doing an article on, in a positive way of course.

You might want to look into alternatives for donations, Patreon is infamous for getting games censored.

I can see Discord having issue with sexual content of Millie, there is Revolt as an alternative to it. Other social media platform alternatives.

Alternatives:
SubscribeStar  (Very popular for games that were kicked off Patreon)
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what is millies lust percent for?

no sex yet¿

Finally new update!

Hey NC131 i have a problem

The game crashes the moment I pass a dialog

I have the ver 0.2-apk

I really like the new improvements and I will only say that there's probably need to be a more explicit description of the "harasment" menu, because I did found out that there are different dialogues when your trust and interest is like double the requirment, especially for the first kiss. I hope in the future updates those could be count similiar to Iris' trust.

Anyway, I must say, the story is actually really interesting! I just love the setting, it's not that much futuristic and I love MC and Iris' place in this world, it feels unique. For some reason I also really liked the park location, maybe its just the perspective, but it feels somewhat massive and tall. In my head, the green can make a beautiful contrast for this sort of setting!

Also, I feel like it was already noticed, but the clothes are kinda broken. Some of them you could buy and then lose just as you walk into your house, and other were using Millie's standart clothes for the movie cutscene (maybe it's just not fully implemented). And for some reason my map was just split up horizontally. It worked tho

Looking forward to see this game flourish!

seem like this was inspired by another game called "imouto monochrome" which is one the better eroge games, i hope your game does even better than it

how do i increase interest?

Just downloaded this, and I'm absolutely loving it. Is there a set date for when the next update will happen, because I can't wait to keep playing!

Also does anyone know any similar games like this? Preferably also on itch.io?

glad to see the update!congratulations:)

How much trust and interest do you need for the expansion of the shower together option?

希望能有中文!

I managed to get Millie's lust level pretty high, but that doesn't seem to change anything and I still can't figure out what that's for exactly, maybe I'm missing something. I assume the purpose of it still hasn't been implemented and it will be revealed in a next update?

OH HELL YEAH FINALLY AN UPDATE! I took solid 3 hours off full review to set things straight. So il mostly just put personal likes and dislikes on this game, as i said in my first comment here this comment wont be about hate, but rather instead to speak out off my mind so with that out off the way lets get started with positive things.

1. The grind has been handled PERFECTLY, unlike in version 0.1 grind here doesnt feel as much hard nor exhausting which considering the fact that it was one off my main complaints im happy that it got fixed with side jobs, talents and overall lowering the prices off certain items.
2. The dynamic cutscenes when story is progressing is actually a VERY nice touch counting in the fact that its an novel game any type off Dynamic cutscene makes the game much more enjoyable to read.
3. I cant help but recognize that Millie (which a little spoiler alert for people that havent played the game yet its the small girl our mc takes home), went through a little re-design while something like this seems small its a welcoming change, but i wont mind if we see the old 0.1 version either as i said its a small change that wont really affect it in the long run, but il still count it as a positive.
4. And last but not least the minigame for the job where you connect the signs together is also well implemented hope i see more off these in the future (it would be even better if us players are allowed to choose the minigame, while if we still go random we get like a decent 15% bonus).

Ok now that we have putted positive things out off the way lets talk about negatives which there arent a lot, but still there are some.

1. While it does make sense the sign "harasment", should not be that much roughly called, it would be better if it was called an "sexual action" or smth like that because idk if im the snowflake here but if i see "harasment" i go instantly save and then try it to see if something actually hapens (spoiler for people that dont play, but are curious it does not)
2. Now idk if this will be implemented in the future updates, but in the current version interaction outside off 2 characters (which are Millie and Iris) does not exist, now i know that those 2 and mc are probably the most important ones in this story but it would still be nice if we have some side characters to interact with as well or even better have some more lore important characters (spoiler alert: like for example Millie's sister, mc's father something like that)
3. And one off the BIGGEST flaws off this update is: WE STILL CANT PRANK THEM JOHN!

Well this was my you can say "deeper" reviews about this game since in the last version i just left a quick comment and that's it, but that one didn't do enough justice so i patiently waited for this update, still even tho i pointed out some flaws in this game i still LOVE IT! Hope i get to see more from you NC131!

Love that there's a real clock at the bottom of the screen. Really liked that. 

I just found this game today and absolutely loved it. I hope one day I am in a position to support you and your game but for now I am broke sorry ;-;