Sorry to hear you are discontinuing this game but i will say i loved playing it and wished you could finish it but i either way thank you for all that you have done. I wish you the best and ever if you feel lime you are able to finish this then do it don't let outside forces block your passion my friend
you're a god for having the option to pay from itch. my region does not allow patreon payment, so i have not been successful in trying to get games available there. thank you.
So...what's in the exclusive edition? It talks about skipping the intermission and nothing much else. And based on that, it sounds like it had less content than the public version (which, I don't think is the case but no other info is available in the page so...).
EDIT: Just got to the intermission. I do agree that skipping that could be a nice-to-have though not necessarily to spend money over unless you just want to support the dev (which I think what you're aiming for. Anyway, I just might buy the game once it has more content but it's going pretty well at the current state.
So I played the first chapter, and I must say it felt really... off? Spoilers I guess, but I didn't like how everything just goes immediately into "please impregnate my wife". The characters have known each other for years, but there wasn't enough time for the player to get to know them before the dinner scene. I guess I just expected more dialogue and events before that.
Secondly, Jona later brings up something like "well that's what they did back in the old days", but how come subjects like surrogates and sperm donation weren't brought up at all? I am 100% for Netori, but if you're going for a serious thriller where you're talking about heavy stuff like the inability to have children, I feel like more realistic things like that should've been brought up.
If the game had a light, fun, and sexy atmosphere like a lot of other adult novels, I wouldn't care. But in the type of game I think you're going for? I'm not sure how to put it into words, but I would really consider "how would this happen in most real-life situations?" and "how do I want this to happen?", and weave together those two things moving forward; makes everything more believable and easy to swallow that way.
I'm not trying to tell you how to make your game, just wanted to give you some honest feedback.
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I'm sorry but the game looks amazing it's just that the thought of someone else having sex with my partner even without romance is pretty fucked
Sorry to hear you are discontinuing this game but i will say i loved playing it and wished you could finish it but i either way thank you for all that you have done. I wish you the best and ever if you feel lime you are able to finish this then do it don't let outside forces block your passion my friend
you're a god for having the option to pay from itch. my region does not allow patreon payment, so i have not been successful in trying to get games available there. thank you.
I knew some would prefer to pay through itch, but I didn't realize Patreon doesn't allow payments for some regions.
Either way, I'm glad itch worked out for you.
Thank you for your support Odentoga.
yeah, it's how it is here in my region, heavily censoring any foreign subscription based stuffs!
anyway thanks again for having it here in itch! great game by the way, cant wait for the next update!
The mc's genitalia seem too small in contrast to the physique of the women.
Especially for a netori game.
So...what's in the exclusive edition? It talks about skipping the intermission and nothing much else. And based on that, it sounds like it had less content than the public version (which, I don't think is the case but no other info is available in the page so...).
EDIT: Just got to the intermission. I do agree that skipping that could be a nice-to-have though not necessarily to spend money over unless you just want to support the dev (which I think what you're aiming for. Anyway, I just might buy the game once it has more content but it's going pretty well at the current state.
It's an additional patch that turns the Public Version into the Patreon Version pretty much (I was going to call it the Patreon Edition beforehand).
And it's for those who want to support the game, but would prefer to pay from itch.
For now, yes.
It pretty much skips the intermission periods, and continues on with the story without any interruptions.
I intend to expand upon the Exclusive Edition, with extra content in the future (where I'll likely then raise the price).
And thank you, MentalMan.
Have a good one.
is there insect
Insect?
I assume you're referring to incest?
So I played the first chapter, and I must say it felt really... off? Spoilers I guess, but I didn't like how everything just goes immediately into "please impregnate my wife". The characters have known each other for years, but there wasn't enough time for the player to get to know them before the dinner scene. I guess I just expected more dialogue and events before that.
Secondly, Jona later brings up something like "well that's what they did back in the old days", but how come subjects like surrogates and sperm donation weren't brought up at all? I am 100% for Netori, but if you're going for a serious thriller where you're talking about heavy stuff like the inability to have children, I feel like more realistic things like that should've been brought up.
If the game had a light, fun, and sexy atmosphere like a lot of other adult novels, I wouldn't care. But in the type of game I think you're going for? I'm not sure how to put it into words, but I would really consider "how would this happen in most real-life situations?" and "how do I want this to happen?", and weave together those two things moving forward; makes everything more believable and easy to swallow that way.
I'm not trying to tell you how to make your game, just wanted to give you some honest feedback.
These are fair criticisms.
Especially the surrogate point.
Which someone had also brought up on the Discord server.
There's a cannon reason for why they didn't go for that approach, however I didn't show this in the game.
I might change this in a future update, if I can.
But yes, I understand your points.
And I'll keep them in mind.
Thank you for playing my game, and giving your thoughts on it.
When will the next version be released?
Apologies for my late response nastrox.
I plan to post a dev-log soon, talking about the future of this project.
Not even a fan of Pregnancy but I'm always down for some Netori.
Glad to have you on board Baxlo 🤝
This is male mc right? Also, are you adding it for andriod?
Yes, and I have plans for an android port listed as the first goal for my Patreon page.
yay, more netori.
The more netori, the better I always say 😏
Hope you've enjoyed it.