So I stumbled upon this and want to say I was not prepared for the levels of emotion and attachment I would have for these two. The writing and world building was fantastic and allows the reader to easily get immersed. The ending was surprising and heart tugging. Thank you so much for this beautiful story, I could not be happier to have experienced this story.
I just got a review from someone who thought that their rating would be visible to other people. I wanted to share it in the comments because I thought it was sweet. For the person who made this rating, if you want me to remove it, just please request so in the comments.
Hey guys, I stopped allowing ratings for this game. The reason for this is that there won't be any major updates to this VN anytime soon and so traffic for the game has been pretty slow recently. If you want to add a rating to this VN, just DM me on Twitter at @ChellayTiger and I'll temporarily open ratings again.
I can't believe it. I wished Hardy would fake his death and meet Jaydy when is about to visit the grave. I DID WISH that to happen, and they will meet again and live happily ever after, even for the rest of his (Hardy) life, he is old though, death will come anyway. But, it didn't happen T_T
I was VERILY impressed at water fountain scene, when the couple danced. It reminded me about a song of MLTR - I Wanna Dance, @ChellayTiger, please do listen to the song, wait for the bridge and play the scene, please do. It is SUPER DUPER HYPER ROMANTIC (sorry, I can't help myself with capslock).
While most prefer happy ending story, I do appreciate this kind of ending. It's almost realistic. I think this VN tries to give me lesson of life: It reminds me personally that life is uncertain, death is certain, IMO many tends to forget nor ignore the facts. And losing someone you dearly love is inevitable, and one must accept the fact, and go on, or live in the past, a choice must be made. Once again, it is appreciated. Thank you for the work, salute.
beautiful story! towards the end I thought that eventually something was born with the Persian, William the son of Hardy but it was not so, I must say that already from the first launch I had sensed a little the end and I must say that although sad... it is very real and you gave honor to all those people who have lived such a story, Bravo! Many compliments. for being your first VN really nice job. you’ve elegantly shown the beauty of being a senior man, which is very rare in these VNs that are only for young people in general... Keep it up! Keep doing VN and express all your creativity because I want to see it :D
Thanks for all the kind words, Arufuredo. I'm glad I managed to show the stories of those who don't get their voices heard often. I'll keep at it and hopefully make even better VNs!
It's been a long time since we've talked to each other.
I leave you a big hug full of tenderness my beautiful young friend.
LOVES
Small detail so that you don't freakout...:
(this name that I have now here on iTchio is my real name, previously I used the names of my "companions" who I have in real life, we have lived together for many years, then we almost do all together even virtually, you will surely recognize their names - Johnathaniel, Ricardo and Angel...)
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "game/script.rpy", line 10129, in script
show hardyexpression sorrow with Dissolve
Exception: Expected transition to be a displayable, not a <curry <class 'renpy.display.transition.Dissolve'> () {'new_widget': <Fixed at 8d18750>, 'old_widget': <Fixed at 8d18690>}>
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "game/script.rpy", line 10129, in script
show hardyexpression sorrow with Dissolve
File "renpy/ast.py", line 1443, in execute
renpy.exports.with_statement(trans, paired)
File "renpy/exports.py", line 1682, in with_statement
return renpy.game.interface.do_with(trans, paired, clear=clear)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 2752, in do_with
clear=clear)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3315, in interact
repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3677, in interact_core
raise Exception("Expected transition to be a displayable, not a %r" % trans)
Exception: Expected transition to be a displayable, not a <curry <class 'renpy.display.transition.Dissolve'> () {'new_widget': <Fixed at 8d18750>, 'old_widget': <Fixed at 8d18690>}>
Windows-10-10.0.19041
Ren'Py 7.4.9.2142
All in Love and War 1.0
Mon May 2 13:26:42 2022
Thank you for the kind words. I do kindly ask you to edit your comment to give a spoiler warning. Most people haven't read the ending yet so a warning would be nice.
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Man, this novel is so amazing, i was expecting nothing and receiving a big history. I'm already looking forward to new stories.
😭
Glad you liked it so much!
Wow this was my first vn and holy moly it was so good but ow. T_T
(5 Stars)
I'm glad you enjoyed it so much!
So I stumbled upon this and want to say I was not prepared for the levels of emotion and attachment I would have for these two. The writing and world building was fantastic and allows the reader to easily get immersed. The ending was surprising and heart tugging. Thank you so much for this beautiful story, I could not be happier to have experienced this story.
You're welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed the story as much as you did!
I just got a review from someone who thought that their rating would be visible to other people. I wanted to share it in the comments because I thought it was sweet. For the person who made this rating, if you want me to remove it, just please request so in the comments.
Woah! That's a spike in views! I got a lot of downloads today. Does anyone know where this spike's coming from?
Can you please put a spoiler warning to your comment?
Hey guys, I stopped allowing ratings for this game. The reason for this is that there won't be any major updates to this VN anytime soon and so traffic for the game has been pretty slow recently. If you want to add a rating to this VN, just DM me on Twitter at @ChellayTiger and I'll temporarily open ratings again.
EDIT: Turned Ratings back on.
THIS COMMENT CONTAINS SPOILER, BE CAREFUL!
The ending is full of tears T_T x99.
I can't believe it. I wished Hardy would fake his death and meet Jaydy when is about to visit the grave. I DID WISH that to happen, and they will meet again and live happily ever after, even for the rest of his (Hardy) life, he is old though, death will come anyway. But, it didn't happen T_T
I was VERILY impressed at water fountain scene, when the couple danced. It reminded me about a song of MLTR - I Wanna Dance, @ChellayTiger, please do listen to the song, wait for the bridge and play the scene, please do. It is SUPER DUPER HYPER ROMANTIC (sorry, I can't help myself with capslock).
While most prefer happy ending story, I do appreciate this kind of ending. It's almost realistic. I think this VN tries to give me lesson of life: It reminds me personally that life is uncertain, death is certain, IMO many tends to forget nor ignore the facts. And losing someone you dearly love is inevitable, and one must accept the fact, and go on, or live in the past, a choice must be made. Once again, it is appreciated. Thank you for the work, salute.
Even if I find this visual-novel a bit embarrassingly suspicious... (don't worry, it's in a good way)
... - I fell completely in love with their story despite a little excess in the text.
It's a really great job nonetheless.
Take good care of yourself.
LOVES
beautiful story! towards the end I thought that eventually something was born with the Persian, William the son of Hardy but it was not so, I must say that already from the first launch I had sensed a little the end and I must say that although sad... it is very real and you gave honor to all those people who have lived such a story, Bravo! Many compliments. for being your first VN really nice job. you’ve elegantly shown the beauty of being a senior man, which is very rare in these VNs that are only for young people in general... Keep it up! Keep doing VN and express all your creativity because I want to see it :D
Thanks for all the kind words, Arufuredo. I'm glad I managed to show the stories of those who don't get their voices heard often. I'll keep at it and hopefully make even better VNs!
Hi beautiful angel! ;-)
How are you doing? - I hope all is well with you.
It's been a long time since we've talked to each other.
I leave you a big hug full of tenderness my beautiful young friend.
LOVES
Small detail so that you don't freakout...:
(this name that I have now here on iTchio is my real name, previously I used the names of my "companions" who I have in real life, we have lived together for many years, then we almost do all together even virtually, you will surely recognize their names - Johnathaniel, Ricardo and Angel...)
I loved the story, no matter if my heart hurts. It was really beautiful.
My heart hurts so bad Im gonna cry 😭 thank you for such a beautiful VN
My heart is broken this story is beautiful :(
Got this after Hardy broke the news
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred. While running game code: File "game/script.rpy", line 10129, in script show hardyexpression sorrow with Dissolve Exception: Expected transition to be a displayable, not a <curry <class 'renpy.display.transition.Dissolve'> () {'new_widget': <Fixed at 8d18750>, 'old_widget': <Fixed at 8d18690>}> -- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------ Full traceback: File "game/script.rpy", line 10129, in script show hardyexpression sorrow with Dissolve File "renpy/ast.py", line 1443, in execute renpy.exports.with_statement(trans, paired) File "renpy/exports.py", line 1682, in with_statement return renpy.game.interface.do_with(trans, paired, clear=clear) File "renpy/display/core.py", line 2752, in do_with clear=clear) File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3315, in interact repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, **kwargs) File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3677, in interact_core raise Exception("Expected transition to be a displayable, not a %r" % trans) Exception: Expected transition to be a displayable, not a <curry <class 'renpy.display.transition.Dissolve'> () {'new_widget': <Fixed at 8d18750>, 'old_widget': <Fixed at 8d18690>}> Windows-10-10.0.19041 Ren'Py 7.4.9.2142 All in Love and War 1.0 Mon May 2 13:26:42 2022
Also the conversation about Hardy wanting to spend time with Jayden sober happened twice
Oh tits. I'll try to fix this as soon as I can. thank you for telling me this!
New build fixes this!
Thank you for the kind words. I do kindly ask you to edit your comment to give a spoiler warning. Most people haven't read the ending yet so a warning would be nice.