Seems like I ain't the only one where this game or novel hits home a bit. Overall I like it considering the premise. Although my personal reaction in the same situation would be more accepting of the changes.
I have made a review on this game but it was like 4 words so I might as well make a big one.
Glad I was horny one night! I love this game, I check back whenever I can remember to see if it has a update because I love the writing which no other adult game can seem to do right. This game is all over the place in a good way and shows the development in storytelling and writing skills. I think comparing the mom route to the Keisuke is unfair. I know the Keisuke route is getting change but I think the character development is done way better in the mom route. It puts the whole sex aspect to the side because of the route (which I am assuming) focusing more on Zach and him being her and realising they are trans. With no fear of really needing to play the sex game, the writing can get really personal with no sex part coming in (not to say that they are not implemented well, I think some feel decently natural) and the reveal that his mom was expecting a girl was amazing.
I have not really spoke about the Britney route so I might as well. She is a well written character and her traits don't feel like they have been lost. I mean, she is a Texan lesbian with a love of theatre and stuff. With the building set, she is easy to build off and feels like a good relationship for Zach. I could also be wrong but I think this is the route that said one of my favourite things I've heard in writing, the whole people being their own oceans, this only second to the reveal in the mom route. I like the connection that our two characters have I think it's natural but restrictive on letting Zach figure out that he is maybe a bit bisexual. My head is a bit dated on this route for how long ago I did it and that is was my first route but I still remember it well.
Now last but not least is Keisuke which first of all, I like the idea. A childhood friend finds out their friend is now a chick and gives it to her on the first day is a funny thing to think about. I like Keisuke for his day 1, I don't love how long it is but the beginning of it is amazing, they way he is shown off as some guy who wants another girl on his bed is a good way to show a character who in some way diverts the expectations. His backstory is somewhat sad and takes the fact away from the idea that Zach is 100% just going to let is slide on how his childhood friend fucked him on day one of being a girl (Britney is no different but something about it feels slightly different). I think that in the way this game is shown, if your looking for SEX then this is the route. But I will assume that is part will probably get a bit smoother in the transition.
I love the writing in this game and the ideas and concepts shown in a game that was originally made to be a sex game is incredible. I don't know if this was noticeable but dam, I love the mom route so much. This may be bias because I'm trans or because it's shorter and so there is less chance of bad writing (which the mom route has non and most really old parts do). I understand mental health can really fuck with projects and your passions and hobbies, I would know. There is no rush to make something. If you think that you need to get a update out to get a update out then your stupid. The passion for the game is what makes it great. Your writing is amazing and I would hate for it to suffer because you feel the need to work on a game that takes so long that your health is affected. 10/10 game, Zoey is a transition goal. :3
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I want to be a girl
Absolutely fantastic writing and characters. One of the few visual novels I can come back to again and again, absolutely adore this game.
I will be happily awaiting updates c:
dev, I think you nailed it with the outfits system, I just can't get enough of it, keep the good work !
I just find this game cuz of horniness, now im waiting for an update to this (Take ur time dev). 10/10 highly recommend (satisfied boner)
Thanks, this game broke me...
10/10...
yeah, that happens a bit too much sadly
Seems like I ain't the only one where this game or novel hits home a bit. Overall I like it considering the premise. Although my personal reaction in the same situation would be more accepting of the changes.
I was not expecting a analytical critique of Legend of the Galactic Heroes in my gender bender porn game. 10/10 I'm joining the patreon.
man, i need to play more of this game, i love the genderbender ordeal happening.
I have made a review on this game but it was like 4 words so I might as well make a big one.
Glad I was horny one night! I love this game, I check back whenever I can remember to see if it has a update because I love the writing which no other adult game can seem to do right. This game is all over the place in a good way and shows the development in storytelling and writing skills. I think comparing the mom route to the Keisuke is unfair. I know the Keisuke route is getting change but I think the character development is done way better in the mom route. It puts the whole sex aspect to the side because of the route (which I am assuming) focusing more on Zach and him being her and realising they are trans. With no fear of really needing to play the sex game, the writing can get really personal with no sex part coming in (not to say that they are not implemented well, I think some feel decently natural) and the reveal that his mom was expecting a girl was amazing.
I have not really spoke about the Britney route so I might as well. She is a well written character and her traits don't feel like they have been lost. I mean, she is a Texan lesbian with a love of theatre and stuff. With the building set, she is easy to build off and feels like a good relationship for Zach. I could also be wrong but I think this is the route that said one of my favourite things I've heard in writing, the whole people being their own oceans, this only second to the reveal in the mom route. I like the connection that our two characters have I think it's natural but restrictive on letting Zach figure out that he is maybe a bit bisexual. My head is a bit dated on this route for how long ago I did it and that is was my first route but I still remember it well.
Now last but not least is Keisuke which first of all, I like the idea. A childhood friend finds out their friend is now a chick and gives it to her on the first day is a funny thing to think about. I like Keisuke for his day 1, I don't love how long it is but the beginning of it is amazing, they way he is shown off as some guy who wants another girl on his bed is a good way to show a character who in some way diverts the expectations. His backstory is somewhat sad and takes the fact away from the idea that Zach is 100% just going to let is slide on how his childhood friend fucked him on day one of being a girl (Britney is no different but something about it feels slightly different). I think that in the way this game is shown, if your looking for SEX then this is the route. But I will assume that is part will probably get a bit smoother in the transition.
I love the writing in this game and the ideas and concepts shown in a game that was originally made to be a sex game is incredible. I don't know if this was noticeable but dam, I love the mom route so much. This may be bias because I'm trans or because it's shorter and so there is less chance of bad writing (which the mom route has non and most really old parts do). I understand mental health can really fuck with projects and your passions and hobbies, I would know. There is no rush to make something. If you think that you need to get a update out to get a update out then your stupid. The passion for the game is what makes it great. Your writing is amazing and I would hate for it to suffer because you feel the need to work on a game that takes so long that your health is affected. 10/10 game, Zoey is a transition goal. :3