This was such a cute story i loved it, and even though i dont consider myself Trans i felt those feelings lots of times feeling that i dont fit somewhere had trouble finding my self so yeah i understand how trans people feel and id support any people who would tell me they are trans its a beautiful thing to finally find yourself in our world !❤️ Hope i can read another of your story one day or even who knows the rest of this one 😊
Even i have to say i know this is a simplified way to explain transgenderism still was a good way you did it !
I want to protect them at all cost, though I will say so far the writing is giving "kids book explaining the concept of trans people" at times. This has potential to be great story though will eagerly await updates.
I absolutely get that! I was inspired by another game on here, Re:Dreamer, and I always see people in the comments saying how the game made them realize stuff about themselves, and I wanted to try and see if I could make something with a similar effect. I wanted the game, at least in the beginning, to be more friendly to people who might not be very in touch with the trans community. Later on especially it'll be more centered around the characters and how they interact with themselves, eachother, and the world around them!
I think my bigger problem was that their journey doesn't feel real, when they explain it to the player it feels like unnatural exposition and none of it is specific to their experience. I absolutely love the direction you want to take it, just advice from a writer: focus on telling the character's story, then you can find moments where it tells your themes or message more naturally. Think about what being trans means to the character instead of anyone.
Thats understandable, it's kinda hard to fit character introductions, hard emotional scenes, and a sex scene in a less than 10 minutes demo while getting my message across naturally. It doesn't help that, while I've always been told I'm a good writer, this is really for first try at story telling. Regardless, once I have more story to work with, I absolutely plan on fleshing out the characters and sprinkling my message throughout
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This was such a cute story i loved it, and even though i dont consider myself Trans i felt those feelings lots of times feeling that i dont fit somewhere had trouble finding my self so yeah i understand how trans people feel and id support any people who would tell me they are trans its a beautiful thing to finally find yourself in our world !❤️ Hope i can read another of your story one day or even who knows the rest of this one 😊
Even i have to say i know this is a simplified way to explain transgenderism still was a good way you did it !
I want to protect them at all cost, though I will say so far the writing is giving "kids book explaining the concept of trans people" at times. This has potential to be great story though will eagerly await updates.
I absolutely get that! I was inspired by another game on here, Re:Dreamer, and I always see people in the comments saying how the game made them realize stuff about themselves, and I wanted to try and see if I could make something with a similar effect. I wanted the game, at least in the beginning, to be more friendly to people who might not be very in touch with the trans community. Later on especially it'll be more centered around the characters and how they interact with themselves, eachother, and the world around them!
I think my bigger problem was that their journey doesn't feel real, when they explain it to the player it feels like unnatural exposition and none of it is specific to their experience. I absolutely love the direction you want to take it, just advice from a writer: focus on telling the character's story, then you can find moments where it tells your themes or message more naturally. Think about what being trans means to the character instead of anyone.
Thats understandable, it's kinda hard to fit character introductions, hard emotional scenes, and a sex scene in a less than 10 minutes demo while getting my message across naturally. It doesn't help that, while I've always been told I'm a good writer, this is really for first try at story telling. Regardless, once I have more story to work with, I absolutely plan on fleshing out the characters and sprinkling my message throughout