I really don't want to sound rude, but any chance of a proofreading/rescript on the text? I imagine English isn't your first language, which is perfectly fine - no judgement here. However, I've just made it passed the intro and photoshoot and.... I can't continue. It's literally giving me a headache. So just wanted to ask, so it will be easier for me to play in the future if the grammar and English get fixed. Your English in your replies to comments seems great, so what happened there, if you don't mind me asking? It seems like it will be a great game once I can understand it. The artwork looks fabulous. Thanks in advance.
P.S. I also commented a few weeks ago about being willing to help in this aspect. I just played it for the first time today, though.
I just bought the game here but I was wondering why there isn't an option to "follow" you on your Patreon page. I really want to follow you so that when I am able to afford it I can become a subscriber.
Hey, loving the story so far! I want to subscribe on Patreon and saw that you weren't allowing patrons any more and that the game is on hold indefinitely. I would love to be able to show my support for the game and your creativity.
Thank you for your kind words! Yes, I did say that development of the game is currently on hold, but that's not entirely true. I've actually been working on many new renders in the past few days and trying to do as much as I can with the time I have. I stopped the charge on Patreon because the development is slower than expected and I didn't want to take money from loyal supporters every month without showing any content.
I'm glad you loved the story and I'm honored that you want to support me. But by being here and showing interest, you're already providing a kind of support that I greatly appreciate and am grateful for.
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If dead was not an absolute, I would say, dead, deader, deadest, and all would apply...
it seems to be a dead project, too bad
appears that way i really was looking forward to the next parts
I really don't want to sound rude, but any chance of a proofreading/rescript on the text? I imagine English isn't your first language, which is perfectly fine - no judgement here. However, I've just made it passed the intro and photoshoot and.... I can't continue. It's literally giving me a headache. So just wanted to ask, so it will be easier for me to play in the future if the grammar and English get fixed. Your English in your replies to comments seems great, so what happened there, if you don't mind me asking? It seems like it will be a great game once I can understand it. The artwork looks fabulous. Thanks in advance.
P.S. I also commented a few weeks ago about being willing to help in this aspect. I just played it for the first time today, though.
I just bought the game here but I was wondering why there isn't an option to "follow" you on your Patreon page. I really want to follow you so that when I am able to afford it I can become a subscriber.
same i really enjoyed it so far, i really hope to see more :)
Hey, loving the story so far! I want to subscribe on Patreon and saw that you weren't allowing patrons any more and that the game is on hold indefinitely. I would love to be able to show my support for the game and your creativity.
Thank you for your kind words! Yes, I did say that development of the game is currently on hold, but that's not entirely true. I've actually been working on many new renders in the past few days and trying to do as much as I can with the time I have. I stopped the charge on Patreon because the development is slower than expected and I didn't want to take money from loyal supporters every month without showing any content.
I'm glad you loved the story and I'm honored that you want to support me. But by being here and showing interest, you're already providing a kind of support that I greatly appreciate and am grateful for.
Loved the story and characters throughout this, amazing work.
English translation is pretty rough, lots of errors, but most of the game is understandable.
I have no experience with RenPy but I code as a hobby. If you want someone to touch up the English version for free I'd be happy to. Hit me up.
Glad you liked the game despite the wrong translation and such. Thanks for your nice words!
About the proofreading: is there a way I can talk to you in private? Deviantart, patreon, Twitter, discord or F95Zone? Anything works for me.
Don't know if he's coming back, but I'll help. I'm a bit of a grammar Nazi. Same name on Discord if you'd like a private chat.
buen juego aunque no se mucho ingles, solo unsa duda, el juego aun no esta completo o se debe pagar para jugarlo completo