The story was amazing. My only gripe is that there wasn't much need for this to be a game instead of an animation. To be fair, I've never really played many visual novel games before, but I essentially enjoyed this for its story, not for the ability to walk around the rooms and inspect things. I'm also not crazy about the times when the camera zooms in on the pixel art, which just makes it look too coarse and blocky. Conceptually, pixel art is sized and designed to achieve a certain style at particular range/resolution, so when zooming, it makes sense to use different pixel art to capture more detail. However, I was emotionally invested from beginning to end, so congrats on making an awesome jam submission.