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A jam submission

Mud & Blood - OPR Writing Jam #10 StoryView project page

Mud & Blood
Submitted by CornReece — 1 hour, 45 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Concepts & Originality#143.9663.966
Overall#143.7703.770
Flow & Clarity#153.7593.759
Adherence to Theme#193.5863.586

Ranked from 29 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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What a turn! Love the cheery tone, reminds me a lot of Terry Pratchett. Minor things could be fixed with a bit another proof reading pass, but I loved the dialogue and the names (Biggun, Larjun).  Great job!

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What a turn! Love the cheery tone, reminds me a lot of Terry Pratchett. Minor things could be fixed with a bit another proof reading pass, but I loved the dialogue and the names (Biggun, Larjun).  Great job!

Submitted(+1)

not many people write about ogres much less make them the protagonist. I really enjoyed the vibe of the story. you really got the feel of ogres down.

Submitted(+1)

Exceptionally creative, with tremendous character. Awesome job! I'm not usually a fan of ogres, but I think I'm beginning to appreciate the Gut Gang. :D

Submitted(+2)

This was great. The humor especially, Biggun having a relative named Larjun is perfect. Great work!

Submitted(+2)

Really good story. Though now I'm wondering if the hogodile they ate might've been an orc that didn't take off the costume fast enough lol

Submitted(+1)

This was rather enjoyable to read, gave me Hitchhikers guide vibes and personally I think that fits amazingly well with what's being told here. 

Submitted(+1)

Cute story.   Having it told as a narration provided some good opportunities for humour, but I'm left wanting to know who it is narrating it!

Submitted(+1)

One of the more humorous stories so far.

Submitted(+2)

I know it wouldn’t be smart to steal one from the orcs, as the Guy Gang Ogres found out… but now I want to try a hogodile.