What a turn! Love the cheery tone, reminds me a lot of Terry Pratchett. Minor things could be fixed with a bit another proof reading pass, but I loved the dialogue and the names (Biggun, Larjun). Great job!
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Mud & Blood - OPR Writing Jam #10 Story's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Concepts & Originality | #14 | 3.966 | 3.966 |
Overall | #14 | 3.770 | 3.770 |
Flow & Clarity | #15 | 3.759 | 3.759 |
Adherence to Theme | #19 | 3.586 | 3.586 |
Ranked from 29 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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