The story itself is good enough, but there are some elements which make reading it confusing. Also, I don't really see how it ties into the theme of consequenses.
I'd say, try working on on the flow of the story and don't add cursive at random or inconsistently. I'm sure you'll be able to write a very good story next time!
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Overestimations's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Overall | #26 | 3.543 | 3.543 |
| Adherence to Theme | #26 | 3.481 | 3.481 |
| Flow & Clarity | #28 | 3.481 | 3.481 |
| Concepts & Originality | #35 | 3.667 | 3.667 |
Ranked from 27 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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