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A jam submission

OPR Writing Jam #10 - Lab RatsView project page

An entry for the tenth writing jam organized by OPR.
Submitted by Grizlibier — 20 hours, 20 minutes before the deadline
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OPR Writing Jam #10 - Lab Rats's itch.io page

Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Adherence to Theme#24.3004.300
Overall#113.8333.833
Flow & Clarity#193.6673.667
Concepts & Originality#433.5333.533

Ranked from 30 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted

Amazing story, was hooked through the whole thing! Can't wait to see what you come up with next! 

Developer(+1)

Thank you very much! I'm currently in the middle of writing a short series on a self-made universe, so in case you want to read the first few chapters, you can find those on my pixiv:
https://www.pixiv.net/novel/series/11737697
I posted only 3 chapters there, but the 4th and the 5th ones are almost done, so I'll probably post them in a week or two.

Submitted

A very strong submission, and one of the highlights of the jam for me! I think you did a great job integrating the theme into the whole story, and the ending was very punchy without feeling rushed or unearned.

Developer

Thank you! Originally it was a bit longer, but I saw that there was a limit of 1000 words and had to trim it. Glad that it didn't feel rushed because of the trimming.

Submitted

love a good origin story!

Developer(+1)

Did my best, hahaha