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Smoke Break - OPR Writing Jam #10's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Flow & Clarity | #1 | 4.310 | 4.310 |
Adherence to Theme | #1 | 4.310 | 4.310 |
Overall | #2 | 4.080 | 4.080 |
Concepts & Originality | #37 | 3.621 | 3.621 |
Ranked from 29 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Comments
Ooo, short and sweet and you absolutely nailed the ending. Really well done!
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She Always Gets HersReally enjoyed this one. It was a perfect encapsulation of the theme.
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Steel and BloodThis one got me. I knew where it was going but could do nothing to stop the chills it gave me. Loved it!
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Gabriella's SacrificeI absolutely love the imagery of the story. I could really picture myself in that cold dungy bunker. That ending though. The sheer amount of emotion it showed without even saying a word. beautiful.
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Failure to EradicateClearest story I've read so far and you nailed the theme and grimdark tone.
Nice work!
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Caladan's Reckoning
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