This was so much fun! I genuinely sat and played this game for like thirty minutes, even after the music stopped! I'm so excited to see where this game goes and thank you so much for sharing! Only negative is please make the font on the clipboard thicker/bolder because it was difficult to read.
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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Graphics | #2 | 4.375 | 4.375 |
| Audio | #4 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
| Gameplay | #8 | 3.500 | 3.500 |
| Overall | #9 | 3.521 | 3.521 |
| Fun Factor | #14 | 3.125 | 3.125 |
| Special Feature Implementation | #18 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
| Theme Implementation | #27 | 3.125 | 3.125 |
Ranked from 8 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Use mirrors and see the smoke while cremating people
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63 days ago(+1)
Thank you for your feedback. We will consider fixing the font readability issue in the next update
63 days ago(+1)
Thanks a lot! Really glad you liked it and caught the Papers, Please vibe—we definitely took some inspiration from there. Stay tuned for more, and appreciate the follow!
63 days ago(+1)
Thanks so much for the kind words and the detailed feedback! We're really glad you enjoyed the graphics, SFX, and the overall concept. About the endgame, you're right—currently, it has an open-ended design because we ran short on time, but we're definitely planning to include a scoring system or a clear goal in the next update. Stay tuned, and thanks again for playing and for your encouraging support!
I like the board on the left (idk if it was there before), in the beginning I wasn't able to tell that it's there since there's no tutorial in-game that tells me what each thing does, so some things aren't clear to me, but I still cant tell when the game finishes, I feel like it takes too long to finish the "first day" maybe keep day 1 as a few bodies only, then slowly make it more bodies to inspect per day.
I also liked that you added a new type of patient, which is women lol (idk if it was there before). It adds more variety to the game visually, but gameplay wise there's no difference between each patient. I feel like you can expand upon the game more by giving the player more tools to work with (slowly introducing them each few days to these tools so they're not overwhelmed). I also think the movement is a bit too slow, I found the most boring part being walking around, while the animations of the doctor and the other guy cool, they take too long. (maybe have them run instead of walk).
That's the feedback I had to give, hope this helps! :D
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