Hey y'all, given that it's my first time ever using itch.io, or writing an interactive novel, I'd love some feedback on my latest project, Still, They Do Not Stop.

You can find it here: https://andrei-petrut.itch.io/still-they-do-not-stop

Obviously, any feedback and critique on the game elements and narrative itself would be super useful, but I'd love to hear about how I can improve the actual itch.io game page, and so on.