Hey Pigpud,
I streamed my playthrough of your game (the video has chapters). Check it out:
This game looks amazing! Really fantastic pixel art that, even devoid of colour is brimming with personality. The story is interesting and quite unique however the pacing felt a little strange to me. Though it did really build my expectations for what is to come in the rest of the game. I know you had a tutorial character at the start but you also started the game with a prompt on screen of how to control the box sucking thing. So I know you would be capable of adding more of that during gameplay to teach the player as they go. I got stuck fighting the big rat as I didn't know how else to "attack" the enemy other than jumping on it. If there is a button to attack, an on-screen prompt would be great or some other hint as to how to take the big baddy down. I did enjoy my time with the game and it is really well made.
