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2 short text adventures- 'I THINK I'LL STOP OFF ON THE WAY' and 'New Town, New Me'

A topic by piratescarfy created 302 days ago Views: 83
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These games are two of my best and most recent Twines (check out my page for some of my older work if you liked these) I would love some feedback from other devs, as I don't really know any others at all.


A surreal horror about visiting a service station.

A comedy/exploration/horror about moving to a new town and starting over.

I would include images, but other than some pretty CSS on the second one, I don't think there's a lot to be gained from posting screenshots.

Specifically for 'New Town New Me', I got a comment from a tumblr user simply saying they 'didn't get it', even though none of my friends mentioned this problem. I've asked the user to explain in more detail, but I would also like to know if anyone else has a similar issue with the writing, so that I can alter the game accordingly. ♥

Thanks!

Sophie