Hey everyone!
Super new to this community. I've been a writer my whole life (been on Wattpad for 11 out of 28 of those years) but have been working on a story within Twine for the past 6 months that I finally got comfortable enough to share somewhere, since I just finished Part 1 of it. I would like feedback on the readability of it and if it keeps you engaged. I got inspired when I learned about hypertext fiction, and I wanted to present literature in a game-like way. I want to develop a Part 2 that is even more interactive with more winding paths and solutions. I am learning how to code this like a game, but it's a process to understand how to do what I want it to do with Twine & Harlowe. Feel free to comment below any thoughts, comments, concerns, etc.!