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The Bittersweet Highschool romance

Short visual novel game with romance elements. · By KacperSZ

Critiques

A topic by KacperSZ created Oct 20, 2023 Views: 76 Replies: 2
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Developer (1 edit)

I know this isn't the most polished game and could be better, however, I had limited time to work on it. But even so, I would love to hear how I could improve future games in the visual novel genre! 

Hey, I enjoyed what you wrote. I liked the concept and thought the characters were likeable.  I ended up choosing Callie's route and thought the ending scene was sweet. Gameplay wise, if you plan to work on a game that is similar to this one, I recommend adding in some sort of point system between the characters and have an ending go from there. Maybe even have the girls compete with each other to some extent? Also having the player make dialogue choices could be more engaging, the picked choice could add more or take away points.  If you need any character sprites for your next project let me know and I could help you! I make characters using Koikatsu, if you have any concepts or ideas, I could try helping you with them. 

Developer

Hey! Thanks for playing and commenting! Right now I'm caught up on doing my 3rd-year university projects, however this year summer I may have plans to make another similar style visual novel and would be delighted to have some help! Thanks for the feedback, I will look into how to program point systems, as long as it's not extremely challenging I could do it, I'm not very experienced in programming. Again thanks for playing and for the feedback!