I'm honestly surprised by the quality of this visual novel, especially with the fact that this was created in such a short time.
The voice actors for Harlowe and the Devil Girl did a wonderful job. I was honestly amazed at how well they were able to portray the characters' emotions and personality through their voice acting. The writing so far is very well done as well; although the mention of dinosaur erotica threw me off guard. I still found it pretty funny though. The writing is descriptive, but not to the point of being pretentious or unnecessary; and I'm glad it includes how the character feels and thinks rather than go by dialogue alone. Lastly, the soundtrack is quite charming and hauntingly beautiful. The composer's songs are melancholic and gloomy, which pretty much sets up the mood for the game - dark and dreary. I'm not too sure how long this will be, but I'm looking forward to reading more of it.
Good job everyone!