Drop mo email mo, I might need it in sometime hehe :'D
Thanks for the offer!
I just finished the demo and here are my thoughts:
Backgrounds: I guess it was okay. It's just that the backgrounds is too strong prolly adjust the luminance of the photo? Though I think it is the style of the backgrounds, it was fairly okay for mi. It just that I find it too hard to look at, prolly my preference in VN's.
Sounds/Music: I guess the music is what I like best in this demo. The sound effects are on point and they give a good feel to each scenario.
Art/Sprites: I guess they were okay considering this is indie. I can appreciate it. I think the proportion of the sprites are good. You prolly draw people better than me.
GUI: It's quite an old school type of interface. It reminds me of those flash games back 2012. Though since this is already 2017, I 'm really bothered with the lack of "auto-play" button, never mind the "skip", or the "backread", I am more concerned with the auto since most of the times, I just prefer reading the game thoroughly than bother clicking all through out. I guess that's my only complaint.
Story: I am wondering what is the story is all about. Is it about the cafe? Or the city? Or the characters? The demo just introduce the characters, but not the mc. Not their purpose or what the mc's motive or something. The synopsis told me about the White Ash, and that the people are magical and that they are science-oriented something. It somehow confuses me. Though I have no problems with the dialogue so far, it is pretty neat for an indie. If not for the minor typos, lack of punctuation, and the words are going out of the text box (prolly you could fix that later as you release the full version). The story is still vague for me, I was hoping to understand the thought of the overall game with the first chapter but it didn't showcase the idea. Prolly that is what the demo lacks. Probably, this is just a suggestion though, you should've add that "impeding fate awaits them" teaser in this demo to excite the players for the cliffhanger rather than asking them if they want an "Easter Egg"... which is supposed to be a surprise but nvm.
Finally, I was surprised with the sandwiched author's note. :'))))) It would have been better if you put it in the beginning or at the end rather than in the middle. Or prolly you are part of the game idk and that is part of the story.
The overall demo is okay. I am looking forward to the full version of the game and improvements of the actual release in the future. Good luck.
Required makuha ung bad end sa game na ito kahit tama ung piliin mo na choices. Just go back to your previous choices and pick the best option. Pag nakuha mo na once ung isang bad ending, dapat pwede ka nang umusad sa story after.
Sorry for the confusion and thanks for playing!
Aw hello! I haven't downed the English version for this one temporarily because I am fixing it. And I'm sorry ReWound 101's translation is taking longer than expected.
Aw nice! Thank you so much for checking it out :')
I am trying to write a more serious storyline for my next game. Medyo nakakapanibago since medyo ang writing slant ko is somewhat light-hearted kasi ayoko ma-stress. Ayoko din ma-stress ung naglalaro haha! Usually na-stress din ako sa ibang nilalaro ko. Otome Games should be fluffy since it's for Otomes :'>
Hahaha! May tinatapos din akong mga otome game pero di ko matapos kasi may in-encode din ako at the same time x'D
Medyo lutang na ako haha!
Aww thanks! Na-touch mi!
I was thinking din kasi papano ko mae-encourage ang mga players to play every ending for maximum experience sa game. Usually kasi pag mga bad ending, ini-skip lalo na if available ang walkthrough. Gawain ko din yun tbh sa mga nilalaro mi x'D
Medyo nalilito na din ako sa storyline kasi masyadong read-y siya and may pumapasok ng characters out of nowhere. Medyo di ko na naseseryoso basahin OvO); Though medyo mainstream siya so probably wait ka pa ng 2-4 years bago matapos kasi once a month lang update haha!
And sure! Take Care :'D
Yey. Thank you! I think lahat ng story ko medyo cliche. Tho I already mentioned abt it sa taas x'D
But I'm happy that the cliche still works. Ket feeling ko medyo pakorni na ako ng pakorni.
If you have time try mo ReWound 101 //self advertisement. Medyo mas mahaba siya compare dito haha!
'Di na ako nagti-TV din, work kasi eh x'D
It was intentional though but of course, I reconsider na baka may madismaya kasi (SPOILER) by default need mo makuha ung BE's. But still pinush ko OvO); And sorry if nalungkot ka abt it ;w;)/ 'Di kasi ako mahilig sa bad ending, yung previous players ng game ko told me to write bad endings so this happened. I tried.
May manners naman si Adriel... minsan haha!
Aw. May season 2, na nood na x'D Tho di ko din pinanood anime, nagbasa lang ako haha
Thank you for finishing the game! I appreciate it a lot! Hehe
Ay nung nilaro namin mga around 1 hour lang haha siguro di ko napansin kasi ako ung gumawa x'D
Di ko napansin ung similarity ni Adriel kay 7 haha, I was thinking na since creature of science sya may pagka-Hanji Zoe sya hihi
Sure thank you!! :'D
I can't say when's the exact time of release of the English translation but don't worry, I won't be dropping it. It's just that there are some words we find difficult to translate in English so it took a little more time that I expected. I hope I can release it soon as possible but I also have projects with my other friends I am doing as of now.
I'm sorry for keeping you waiting. But I'll do my best!
Thank you for your review! Binasa ko siya lahat of course and I'm touched! I'm really you liked it, I'm really happy na nakuha mo ung mga bagay na gusto ko i-convey sa story.
And yes, I'm planning to make another game in Philippine Setting! Please look forward to it! Thank you, thank you very much and have a nice day hehe! :">
I'm sorry for the delayed response. I was really busy with some stuff in the actual world. I'll try my best to release the game as soon as possible :)
Oh I'll adjust that in the newer version if I have the time to fix the game! Thanks for trying the demo :)
Thanks for downloading the game!
My username in lemmesoft is zhaie. That's the only account I'm using in the forums. In other forums, I use zhaiechan or zhaieyuemn, just the same.
I do comment in Uncle Mugen's post but I think I was not that person asking for a Filipino VN. Sorry ^^;;
Hello! Thanks for completing the game! :'D
And yeah, I was told that it was kinda like Love Rerun! :"> I read it as soon as I knew it. Is that manga dropped? ;w;
Oh it's okay. I'll try to fix it as soon as possible! Again, thank you for playing the game and giving a review! I appreciated it a lot hehe
Oh someone already told me about this. I'm really sorry about this I'll go fix that right away x'D
And for some reason since both of them have R and N in their names, I had them mixed up and I didn't noticed it. I'll go look on to that as well.
Welp. Since I'm using Filipino as my medium it would feel like it's some wattpad story. I just thought that perhaps since there are Japanese Otome Games and they use Nihongo as their main language to their games, why not use ours in what I'm making.
And thank you. I will fix those right away. ;w;)/
Hi! Yes, Karen! All of my games are set in the Philippines! x'D
It's prolly because I have only shared this with my friends, and also, posted it in lemmesoft forums. I didn't really made an effort to made it known x'D
And thanks for the offer! I will take note of that!
Thank you very much! I hope you have a good time playing :">
PS. Your DP is my OTP x'D
Hello! Thanks for your feedback.
I am currently working on the English version. I am trying to complete it in this month. I'm doing my best to add a little dictionary for those who might be confused in the terms I used in this game. You see, even my friends, who lived in the Philippines are not good in Tagalog or Filipino so I think I also have to work on that as well.
Again, thank you very much and I'll do my best in the translation :)