Like the story and style a lot, but this is way to short (time wise) for the money in my opinion.
(addition) The story doesn't feel rounded and fully developed. The moment you get invested, it ends and leaves you with a feeling that it just has started and more should follow. I don't mind to support Indie developers and do know that not everything will be as good as I want, but this is to short for the money I paid, as stated before.