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Just played a bit of it gotta say love the art and the gameplay mechanics although it kind of seems like you have to get that  loan since your gonna sink all your money into hp pots.

 I do have some critic on the character design for the male slime. To be fair its more of a personal preference but to preface my suggestion, the female version is good looking, no doubt about it, but I'd like to see that same standard on the male ver, you can make an androgenous version of the female slime (like remove the boobs), say it's the male slime and call it a week (because i know it'll take a whole lot of time to implement such a change). I know you are probably a solo dev so its unlikely you'll implement this so if you do or don't is fine by me. Also for the male bandit I say he's fine the way you implemented him.

Overall I like your game and its art. Good luck on your game and I'm sure it won't be long till people hear of it. 

First off nice art can't wait to play 

+ Will NTR/Sharing & futa content be optional? 

can't hurt to try it out!

I hope the prison will be easy to obtain naturally once its added cuz idk 

I don't like killing the girls since it reminds too much of that "fetish" whenever I see the *dead* status

either that or an implementation of some sort of non lethal take down that while weak, removes the dungeon invader so that you could possibly obtain her later on. 

also regarding the lore panel on the invader idk how to feel about it. like I'm gonna know more about the thing im about to kill. odd

edit- game still fun tho! and i'm happy to see it gain attention and receive updates

tl:dr - I don't like killing the pretty ladies :'(

nice

This is a very interesting game with a engaging story and main character with some good looking models to boot, so honestly keep up the good work.

That being said, the shadows are very intense -this sometimes leads to the main characters eyes having a too much shadow, small gripe but i thought I should bring it up- and some rooms feels claustrophobic -such as the headmasters office- perhaps its the camera angle or the room itself idk . I supposed lowering the intensity of the vignette could help do away with that claustrophobic feeling but I'll leave that choice to you.   All in all, it's a rough game (but that's where diamonds are found) with an interesting story.

Now I am no game maker so if you cannot make these changes I understand but at least try to consider it for any future renders for this awesome game you're making.

*edit: added an example for the shadow critic

a more developed kissing scene

Hello there, this is a very cool game with good dungeon building elements and the stuff that is to come is pretty exciting, but I would like know if there is a entity that can represent the player since having a disembodied voice going to convince/interact with the captured adventurer so that they could fight for them is a bit jarring (would be cool if it was a femboy).

But that is my only question/ suggestion and again very cool game would play it even if it never had any nsfw elements!

It's nice to see a game where a tomboy is main girl . But fr this is a exciting game you're making and the story is very entertaining.