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Florian and Julian have my heart while E is breaking my soul-

I kinda love Vinh and Arthur although he is who I suspect as a killer the most lmao

I kill everyone and everything that they love

It's so simple but impactful

I haven't read through this yet but seeing that Evelyn is from Minnesota sent an arrow of cold shock into my heart. Born and raised Minnesotan and no one ever mentions us! Idk I found it funny-

BAXTERRRRR ♡♡♡♡

Guhhhh, I love this so much. I am determined to melt Galahad's heart, get close to Arthur, and shun Morgana- my three life goals

This story is gonna hurt me isn't it? T-T

I should just be the ruler at this point my MC is literally doing everything lol

Can shoot the idiot man-child, 10/10 would recommend

I hate how I can't refuse, and it just resets, I don't really get why it was even put as an option in the first place. But overall not bad.

I am so hella excited

I'm a little bit empty inside now that I've finally finished this...

Goddamn~ Guinevere has got it going on, Arthur and Morgana. Arthur is about to be snatched-

But seriously I'm really excited for this twist to the tale.

Happy new year, hope everyone has a great year. I'm excited for my boy Baxter and will mostly patiently await his arrival!

Toz has my heart

Holy fuck

How to be a Heartbreaker by Marina and the Diamonds?

Either way I need more of Sekh-

Wait a minute here- we can kill Rohan?

I can already simp-

Xelef is out here breaking my heart and I'm not okay with it, he's literally breaking me rn I sob

[spoilers???]

Seriously I was not ready for him to leave-

If someone would be a dear and tell me if this is avoidable, or how to get off of instability plz I'd appreciate it

I keep reading Castelon as "Castleton" and it is hilarious

From what I've seen on their Tumblr it isn't dead, last thing they were doing was looking for beta testers although this was a while ago.

When meeting Ash I forgot I inputted my name already so when it said my name, I was endlessly surprised

Now I don't know how well I'll be able to help long run, but here is some stuff to help with the current two items. And I don't the specifics of this and am a noob in coding as well, but here is some helpful stuff.

Music:

  - Twine media (adamhammond.com)

  - Document1 (klcameron.com)

Customized Menus:

  - http://www.twinery.org/questions/1987/how-to-change-the-sugarcube-menu-buttons

General:

  - A Total Beginner’s Guide to Twine 2.1 – Adam Hammond

Not me wanting to romance Gavin and naming my dog after alcohol

This beautiful creation has my brain and heart, along with Kian and Rylan.

Me and my horrendous fear of crowns: O-o

Jester being hot:  : )

Ngl I changed the name "loser" to "FallenAngel" so when he called me "angel" I died a little inside

For what you have so far, pretty good. Very engaging and for the most part it's a good read - obviously the grammar/coding stuff needs a little work, but I like it a lot. I liked it so much, when I got the puppy, I named it Frog for that extra agony.

It's beautiful wtf-

I really liked this; writing is good although there are numerous grammatical errors. I recommend getting a proofreader/editor, or just double/triple checking your writing. But seriously it's pretty good.

Let me tell you I was about to throw my mouse when I reached the end. I didn't want it to end. Quick note on spelling/grammar, numerous times the word "settling" was used instead of "setting."

gUH- you get me super immersed and then end it right there-

But side note, noticed this near the end of chapter two.

Mmm, look at thoes skillz

This game is good. Too good.

Damn, most realistic game I've ever played

Personally I don't understand why she wanted them gone, but that's just coming from someone who'd kill to have some. Very good, got me feeling emotions.

I think I just befriended an entire cult on the first try, 10/10 would do again ^^