A bit harsh but hey, you was being honest, and I can respect that. You kept to a respectable tone. But yeah, A YanSimFates where you made choices along the way does sound fun, but I wanted it to reflect Fire Emblem Fates where at one point, you choose a side. Having choices along the way would have really been pointless. But... I have been in the fanbase of YanSim and it is just as toxic. XD
Corrin wouldn't help Ayano kill someone, he would tame the Yandere Girl and make it so then she gets with him proper without illegal actions. Now what you suggested with Corrin being tricked by Ayano's outer personality does sound good idea, however, in Corrin Revelations, it is revealed as to why Hoshido and Nohr knew about Ayano in the first place. Do give that route a go. Hopefully it ties up some loose ends that was left open for the demo. The Cupids are more devious than at first glance.
BIG ROUND HEADS!! XD Well, my art style is a hybrid of Anime and Cartoons. Plus many people have pointed out that they are chibi like so... I just carried on with that. Besides... If you are checking out the HFAS VNs... The art is outdated... No necks!! XD Just thought I'd warn you that they are kinda outdated so... If they're bad... I know I have improved since then.
I know it was constructive. I'm just shook. XD But sorry, I'm not carrying on with YanSimFates development because I need to move on to my bigger VN project. The biggest one I have ever devise. All the issues you have with YanSimFates are fixed in Armatelum Showdown (I think...?), plus like I said, I struggled with writing the story, even know I had a plan. I don't thin Yandere Sim is the type of game universe I could write for. I'm more of a comedic, light-hearted but dark writer. Kinda like the Kirby series. I just don't think my writing style get's along with YanSim's universe that well. My favourite character in this VN is Robin. I know why... Because Robin is the type of character I am the best at writing. Robin really is like a Hyperforce All-Stars character. But hey, I'm not gonna get disheartened because one guy didn't like the game. I know I won't please everyone. It's just odd that the only review I get is the negative one. It's like I say: My life is a sitcom. Since Armatelum Showdown is my own universe, I think my writing for that will be much better as, since I made it, I will be able to get the tone right.
This was the only damn review I got. X'D My life!! Don't be sorry about writing long comments. Sometimes it can't be helped. But hey, you did say you write stories. This game is open to the public so if you want to make your own Yandere Simulator Fates, building off the proof of concept I have established, then why not go full steam ahead?