A good start, I will definitely wait for more. I enjoy the story so far and am interested in where things are going. The events have a good amount of variety and the UI is easy to use. I liked the various characters, they seemed to have their own specific personalities, motivations, and secrets(?). I certainly had questions about what was going on, but hopefully you will expand the story in a satisfy way. The effectiveness of your translation fluctuates, though that is understandable at this stage. I usually understood what you meant, but there were times when I gave up and had to move on without figuring out exactly what you intended.
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