Unfortunately there is no planned route for Rei. =(
But he will be making an appearance in the game =)
And thanks for the feedback, I'll consider the cooking and farming icons. I was thinking of making some berries, apples and melon shaped fruit soon, but I'm still working on the fantasy theme at the moment. So the next icons pack will include some weapons as well.
I like this!!! It's very well done. The story flows very well and it's easy to read panel to panel.
That one panel where the two character's thoughts overlap on page 175 is very well done, I thought it was a nice formatting technique.
The artwork is also very cute.
Thank you for making this =D I hope to read more.
Oh okay, thanks for clarifying that! Yeah the 'sex' and the 'exit' buttons are the only ones lit up, but they still don't seem to do anything. Haha. But I'm looking forward to seeing when you finish the game =D
Unfortunately the game wouldn't work for me =(
It opens up just fine however nothing happens when I click on the icons. Tried using the mouse first then tried the keyboard, but still no avail. The artwork and music were both really good though, it's just unfortunate I couldn't play it.
Thank you! I have to look at several references to get poses and proportions to a standard I am happy with. Do you create much art? If you do, would you like to share, I wouldn't mind seeing some.
I'll be releasing another Sprite Pack later this month before I decide if I want to try making a Patreon or not.
Thanks for the feedback!
Yeah I moved the text to the side to accommodate when there's a side image of the prince, but you're right it does look weird. I'm looking into different textbox designs and coding to make it more visually pleasing. If I find one I really like I'll probably release an updated version with more art in the future. =)
Good job with this!!!
It's very well written but what I liked most about this game was the consent. I liked how it gives choices and asks the reader what they are comfortable with doing. Well done, can't wait for parts two and three!
Hi, I would appreciate if you took the time to review my game. It's only a demo so far but I'm working on finishing the game soon.
I need more feedback so I can fix up any typos or problems with the sprites and artwork. If you're interested the link is here:
Thanks in advance. =)
The one with dark hair is Jun, the one with blonde hair is Kam.
Oh, and thanks for pointing out their names, I've added links to their download pages now so you can read all their info and the sprite specs on there too.
I finally finished the game, I really enjoyed it! The artwork is absolutely beautiful and I like how you have two different styles for the real world and the dream world. Fun story, lots of choices which seem to have influence on many things so I was using up a lot of the save slots, haha. Overall, brilliant game!!
Really enjoying this game, I like spot the difference and the music goes really well with it. There are some really challenging ones and some easy ones as well to help build up hints.
The artwork is beautiful. Do you mind if I ask who the artists are and who did the editing?
I've started making some Free to Use visual novel sprites, just because I wanted to practice making sprites.
So far I have only made two but I'm actually enjoying creating them. The smallest of details can lead to another sprite in the pack. Anyway, I just wanted to share these and see if I could get some feedback on them, specifically about their ANATOMY. Anatomy is not my strong point, but it is something I am always trying to work on, so if anyone has any constructive criticism or feedback I like to hear them out.
Hey Yo and Hello everyone!
I'm a character artist with a bit of free time on my hands. I'm looking for short projects to work on, mostly looking for Visual Novel projects. Not accepting unpaid jobs at the moment, so please either be prepared to offer upfront payments or 50% upfront and 50% after completion via Paypal using USD or AUD currency.
I can make chibi art, sprite art, and CG event art. Files are saved as .png unless otherwise specified.
Please have a story already in mind to pitch to me, I only join projects if I have an actually interest in what the game is going to be about. I'm very interested in LGBTI+ stories, as well as anything fantasy related.
Here is a quick price guide for upfront payments:
Flat Colour Single chibi $5
Full Colour Single chibi $10
extra expressions on chibi +$2
Thigh High Sprite with Three Expressions $20
Thigh High Sprite with Three Expressions and Extra Outfit $30
Full Body Sprite with Three Expressions $30
Full Body Sprite with Three Expressions and Extra Outfit $45
extra expressions on sprites +$2
<thigh-up sprite="" +="" 3="" expressions="" 1="" extra="" outfit<="" strong="">CG - 1 character + simple pose + simple background $30
CG - 2 character + simple pose + simple background $40
extra expressions on CG +$3
dynamic poses +$5 to $10</thigh-up>
Feel free to negotiate prices if your project is on a budget.
You can contact me by replying to this post or via email: firstname.lastname@example.org
Please put in your subject heading 'Artist Commission - [project name] - itch.io' so that I know it's not junk mail.
Art samples below.
I played this ages ago but only just rediscovered your itch.io profile. I really enjoyed this game, it made me laugh and giggle. And the artwork is absolutely amazing, it's very cute and simple but helps tell the story perfectly. Great work on this!!
Just a quick update on the game's progress.
I've finished writing two more endings for the game, but had to go back and recode some of it to make sure the paths went to the correct routes. There's still at least 7 endings to go. So I'll say the script is at about 92% done and the coding is only about 50% done.
Another character's sprite is complete, just have to do a few expression variations and two other characters. Overall it's about 76% done.
Background art and music is still on hold at 60%.
I'll try and making another video teaser soon and upload it by the end of the month.
For those that have played the Free! Arabian Nights Demo thus far and have provided me with feedback, a BIG thank you! Feedback from players is always welcomed and appreciated.
I'm still working on the coding, story, and art for the game, but it is definitely coming together nicely.
The script itself is about 90% done, with just some of the endings needing to be typed out! Woohoo! This is currently priority number 1 on the jobs list, with aims of finishing the script by the end of September.
Character art is 70% done, with just three more characters needing to be completed.
The background art and music is being paid for and commissioned out of pocket so until funds are replenished they will be on hold at 60% completion.
I'll be posting again next month with another update then. Hopefully we see some good progress!