Lol , that's funny. By the way, Eternium is a pretty decent game too, if you're into the Diablo genre and want to play on a phone.
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Hey, Caribdis. I just wanted to tell you how much I appreciate all the little detail in your game. I played this other game that seemed to be trying to do something similar to this one, but it was so bad that it wasn't even worth playing (or worth remembering the name of for that matter.) Everything about it was so choppy. During scenes was choppy; in between scenes was choppy. Everything that anyone said or did just felt like something was missing. It was super fast paced, but only because it was rushed and needed more writing.
Your game never does that. The pacing is perfect. Nothing feels excessive and nothing feels like it's missing anything. I don't really know how to describe it well, but I'm guessing you know what I mean since you're as skilled of a writer as you are. (Maybe you even know a name for it, idk.) But every time someone talks, it's like he or she both says the exact right number of words and conveys the exact right amount of information. You write the exact right number of filler words in between key words and filler sentences in between key information, and the exact right amount of inaction in between the action. And every sentence flows naturally into the next and feels right when you read it. It's all just so perfect. You have a gift and I love that you're using it to entertain us all.