Sounds good, thank you!
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For a non Rika related note, I wanted to ask if it's strictly necessary to have all the text referring to Maxine's body type as a negative thing in the beginning of the game? It seems inconsequential to the game as a whole and only serves to drive home, intentionally or not, that the main reason Kayla forgets she exists is because she's not attracted to Maxine's body type. This could be alienating to players who aren't skinny themselves, who should be given the chance to find this game just as much a positive escape as anyone else. This especially stands out because Kayla makes no other comments about anyone else's appearance except for being attracted to their bodies. Since Kayla is into Evie, and this part doesn't really add anything, seems like it might be better to just take the stuff about Maxine's figure out. That's my feedback, thanks for your time!
Great, thank you so much!
This is a more minor note, but I would also caution against referring to her as an "exotic fruit" in the sex scene as it would be very easy to take this the wrong way and referring to non white people as exotic can be othering and uncomfortable.
I appreciate it, thank you!
Because Asian is general, implies no difference between the many different peoples from Asia, and implies that we are all the same . It's like saying Latin or Caucasian instead of bothering to find out what country someone's from. Also, saying it all the time implies that there's nothing else noteworthy about her and is reductive at best and fetishistic at worst. Like saying a white guy does things whitely all the time instead of letting him do things because he's himself .
I understand it might be a creative choice because Kayla's not exactly supposed to be worldly, but I just wanted to mention, that as a Japanese american man myself, it kind of makes me uncomfortable that Kayla keeps refering to Rika as "Asian".
Hi! I've just started playing, and I wanted to let you know I think you should add trigger warnings for parental abuse and suicidal thoughts to the game info page, as well as warnings for anything else that touches on that subject. I was able to take it in stride tonight, but I know people, myself included, who on worse nights would have adversely affected by those scenes without a warning. Anyway, thanks for your time!