Thank you for the review! Also thanks for pointing out the spelling mistakes, I've corrected them now. And also for the feedback about the music. I'll try to put some background songs in the near future.
Maria Hodor
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Hello. I've participated previosly at this ink jam (lot's of fun).
I am game design student and I have an assignment in which I have to collect feedback on the project that I've made. I need to update the project based on the feedback that I'll receive. As this is an ink game, I am mainly looking for feedback on narrative design, but any type is very much welcomed!
As a refresher, my project is called "You Think You Can Escape Me?" and it's a short interactive story about odd-timed coincidences and romance.
Tagline: "You start your day in the worst possible way: suddenly remembering your ex ".
Link to the game: https://maria-hodor.itch.io/you-think-you-can-escape-me
Feel free to write the feedback here or to write to me directly (you can find my instagram or my email in my linktree).
Hope you have fun!!!




