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While we're on it, what do you think about my new project; "Nusantara: Bermuda Triangle"? O.O Is the art and synopsis interesting?
Part of the reason I'm so hyped about it is because the art is gorgeous. You seemed to have improved in that field, and I'm really looking forward to the CGs. I think the summary is fine? It's not convoluted but it doesn't give away too many plot points either. But if I can assume that the italic text is the prologue, I think that that portion needs more work. I understand that there will be art to go along with it, but the words along can apply to half a million works and to me, isn't half as interesting as LotWO's prologue. But as you haven't finished developing BT's plot, it's safe to assume that it'll just develop on it's own in time. What I really like about it, though, is the protagonist. She's so different from most otome games' protagonists in how she clearly doesn't excel at everything, has a completely different appearance (short hair!? what a travesty!). That, and her quote speaks to what's left of my soul.
About the dream.
oh god that hurts my heart more;; While the sound effect didn't make me cringe, I did start because I wasn't expecting something like that to happen at all. And I think you did really well portraying things in the dream! This is the sort of thing that fandoms spend too much time agonizing over and creating theories before the creator takes pity on them and gives an explanation. The mysteriousness of the dream adds to the build of tension.
If I may ask, what is the other character death that made you cry? o.o
It's not animated yet, so if you watched Rokka no Yuusha and don't want to be spoiled, please ignore this. Pardon my language, but I fucking lost it when Hans Humpty died in the LN. But unlike when Rama died, those were mostly angry tears, not sad tears. Anyways, he got better. He died a little, but he got better.
also can you plsplspls tell me who the fourth love interest is-
Which bachelor you like the most? and why?
I don't know if I can even put into words how much I love Rama. I did not expect to get so attached to him as the sample images didn't paint him as a character that I would normally like. But the first meeting changed that. "Maybe trying to figure him out will be quite interesting in the future." My thoughts were practically the exact same as Tamura's. God, I love characters like that, who hide their true selves under a mask of endless cheer. And his backstory - 👌👀 good shit go౦ԁ sHit👌 thats ✔ some good👌👌shit right👌👌th👌ere. Ever since I learned about the Sati ceremony, never knew it was also used in Indonesia though, I've always wanted to meet a character with that incorporated in his/her backstory. Thank you so much for creating Rama.
What makes you consider to play this game?
I clicked on this game because of the art was up to my standards. I downloaded it because the summary and characters seemed interesting.
Overall, what do you think about this visual novel? and what element stands out the most? (art? story? character?)
I'd say it's one of the better otome games I've played. The plot is well written, with both serious and comedic moments. The combat scenes are not boring to read, and most of all, while there is a healthy sprinkling romance - it is an otome game after all - it never drowns out the other aspects of the story. While they can be sorted into standard groups, the characters all have distinctive characteristics and are developed to the point that you can tell who is speaking just by the dialogue.
Do you have any question or constructive critiques? I will read all the comments and reply to them like I do in Lemmasoft.
For someone who has only just recently learned a language, Tamura uses quite a lot of slang and complex words when speaking. And there are also a few modern terms that I didn't expect to find in an ancient setting that are used pretty often. Those two were the main things that bothered me, preventing me from being able to completely settle in the story. And as for questions, is that recurring dream about Rama when he when he went over to the Komodo's territory? It's the most resonable explaination I can think of, but it still doesn't seem right. Please enlighten me.
Last but not least, if I make another visual novel, will you consider buying it? via patreon or kickstarter that is (since I need to eat, electricity, and such things when I make VNs xD)
Oh, definitely. As long as it's $20 or less and I'm not strapped for money at the time, you can count me in.
tldr; you've got the basics of otome games/visual novels down, but be careful with the small things: they can make or break a creation.
also just know that i've only cried twice over a character's death and this is one of them. i hope you're happy
I had a free period today, so I managed to finish playing all of the good ends as well as the normal end of Legend of the Winged ones. It took me six hours to play the first route and about two hours each for the next two. Depending on how upset the bad ends make me feel, it can take up to an hour for me to finish them. I'll be answering the questions on the actual game's page after I finish the bad end run on the bus. If I don't die.
I've barely had time to play it since the end of the quarter is coming up (ㄒ^ㄒ). If that's the range, then it definitely won't take me more than twelve hours as I read really quickly. I'll tell you a more exact number when I finish. Good luck with making the game! I hope everything goes smoothly for you!
I'm fine with a price like that, as long as there's a suitable amount of gameplay which I would define as 15-20 hours or ~10 hours with a high replay value. I can't speak for others, though, as standards vary quite a bit.
I just started playing your other game and it was v good so I wanted to see if you made any others and- Ahhh I'm already so hyped for this. It looks so good. The plot, the characters, the art - everything. And to answer your question, I'm already unnecessarily biased towards Arya. The main reason is because he reminds me of myself, but I'd be lying if I said I wasn't a sucker for that color palette. Though I do think I'd get along with Kah'lil better.
Oh, if you don't mind me asking, about how much do you think it'll be priced?