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Hello, Omega Fallon. I have played your game.

I have an opinion on your game.

I thought it was very poor in writing, and in terms of bug-testing.

Your game had a touch of lag, and it was very full of graphic errors that were very easy to spot during my play-time of your game.

The writing felt just a little stale, as if it was only one character speaking throughout the whole game. If it were not for the name tags, I would not have been able to tell the difference between each character.

I believe that a demo should be very close to the final product of the game, meaning that it should not be full of bugs and other various errors.

The art was quite nice looking, but there were several times where the correct character sprite would not show, or where a character was floating above Scarlet's sprite. Several sprites were not shown and the error message was very clear in the upper left hand corner. One time, the message flew across the screen! Gave me a little fright. This can be very easily spotted and fixed if you had bug-tested.

I think if you touch these errors up, this can be a promising game.

Thank you for reading :),
- Kevin Grundy