Excellent writing and great characters! You have a masterful way of writing, you instantly get the feel for all your characters and they are all so interesting! I really cant wait to play more.
Maybe the dialog options could be more involved, just having one right option and one wrong option (a bit obvious) seemed not that involved. But I was more interested in learning about the people in the town to care that much lol.
Do you have a Discord server or somewhere I can follow you're progress?