1. Zawar is so amazing from the description. Something about having a huge variable amount of potential, but then tossing it to the side to simply not have to deal with the world as it exists.. its just -chef's kiss- XD
2. I adore having information available in conversation, but I also appreciate a glossary if the topic requires it. Not having the information on unusual or modern scenarios makes me feel more distant because I'm not sure if my experiences are shared with the characters.
3. No one is the murderer- every one is a beautiful angel and happy endings for all, but especially Zawar and Pratik (for now!) :3
I'm so excited to read more about the story and the characters!! Keep going!