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I love it. Really nice keys. The uprooted tree is wonderful. That this might become a player base is also cute. You should do more!

would love to run this using Tunnelers or some other modern system 

Love the gimmick. Nice.

Glad I was a good influence! Dybbuk's is great! 

Love it. That map is great and really evocative (esp. the way it looks like it's crushed it's own throat).

Exceptionally stylish. Love the front/back cover. The writing is excellent.

Hohoho. This is Real Good. Love the diagrams. Love the Denoument. Love the Zimri. And most of all I adore the Dream Police. They are such good NPCs for improv. 

How on earth is this only four pages?! Exceptionally realised (layout, diagrams and the pointcrawl lift a lot of weight). Love how straightforward the blurb is ("X did this. Why?").

A situation that is pleasantly situated. Love the Baak, which is set up and explained well (love Rohan's placement). The picture of the well is helpful, would have liked one of the Baak. 

Delightfully strange. I love it: layout, ideas, phrasing, all great. The skewed table with default font Really Works!?! Love the photocopy effect. Adore that the statblock comes at the end. This is one of the best things in the jam.

Love how this sets about what could be an uninspired Little Bandit Cave Crawl. Love the d4s. Weird in such a cool way. Please keep making things.

This is captivatingly alien. I love it. And the tone of voice is great too. 

Much more realised than many similar things. Love the systematisation and the tables. The cover is Exceptional.

I love this. A great powderkeg. The very first thing you read, before you have any clue of the situation, is what happens if the PCs aren't there: That Is Really Cool.

I like this. A nice thinkpiece. It does something that many worse things don't do: give many examples. If you only give three examples of something I'm probably gonna assume you can't think of any more than those.

What a first sentence. Fun situation

Quite dense, but all important. Really really cool. Love that it's Grey Mouser!

Like this. 

I really like this. Super clever.

Eminently usable. Love it.

Sick.

Neat.

Spectral Croupier.... Exceptional.

Exceptional.

Honestly lovely.

A bit dense. Vis-design off the charts!

A cool powderkeg!

Exceptional! 

Beautiful scenario that could go either way. Looks like it would run great.

Love the Plate of Bahai.

Sick.

I can't decide what's better: the layout or the concepts. And by layout I don't just mean pretty pictures. This is exceptional. Have a look at it.

That's great! I was just looking to see if those zines were anywhere digitally yesterday! I'm writing a scenario for Vyrm so it's going to be super helpful. Hope the decision goes well.

This owns, super excited to see the full version.

Great! Super exciting - hope the future updates go well. These town maps are super helpful.

Glad you enjoyed! HD is Hit Dice: generally speaking, something as Hit Points equal to Hit Dice times four or five. Best.

Real well done! Eminently useable. Nice restrained layout that prioritises referencing. Fun situations to engage with, and 'players' to play against each other. A good sized dungeon that doesn't stretch on.

Possibly the only thing (and this is minor) is to swap the 'intro' and the NPC descriptions around. I don't know who Alaxoon and Eleg-maph are until the following spread.

Extremely excited to see more. You got this! Remember: Real Artists Ship.

Haha thanks! Get excited for the next two: the ancient forest of Ladywood, and the ruined citadel of Edgbastion....... It's very silly......

A great scenario and hook that is actually delivered upon, as so rarely this type of idea is. You can't sight-read this with no prep (partly due to the premise), but it's still eminently useable. Wonderful art. Excited to see more.

Very good. Inspired scenario. Great hook. Certainly useable. I honestly think the coloured pages subtract: bit of a pain to print, and also make it more difficult to actually read.