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Holy shit. Okey, I usually never comment under anything, but I hope Ryuo reads this. I'm not a big fan of Adastra or Fbtw, because their World and their Character doesn't feel believable with how they just accept things. 

But you managed to write this Story in a way that feels relatable and logical. I really really love the Story building, the World it happens in and the Characters all feel unique. I love how you hide little Mysteries and overall play with the Situation and overall feeling of it.

I'm mostly just rambling and not really able to find the right Words Probably, butyou really did an outstandingly Amazing job, and I wanted to tell you that!

Sure, there are some Situations that feel a bit sudden from the mood Change, but thats Natural and Human. Something that most of the other big VNs didn't manage to Capture.

I really hope you read this, and if you do. Thank you a lot for Writing this VN, I'm looking forward what else you'll do with it!

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I think I found a bug? xD Or is Haruki supposed to  flash you now?

Probably the first time I ever write a comment. 
I really really like Haruki's direction, more then Jun's even tbh.
My only "issue" is that his expressions mostly don't fit the Situation, but since this is still in development I won't judge that at all.
Just wanted to say that I really love how this VN turns out and I've been following it since a decent amount of time honestly.
Keep up the good work! ^^

Holy shit, I gotta say, I love this one.
My main issue with most of the other VNs where you kinda "stranded in another World" kind of theme, is that they always feel like a Stockholm Simulator xD
Thats why I liked Blackgate so much before it's fall.
This one actually feels really "Realistic" and logical.

Please keep up the good work! You are doing wonderfully.
It's already way better Story wise then Some of the others like Adastra and FBTW imo

I really really love this. It's exactly what I want as a FVN

I agree tbh ^^" his face looks kinda out of place. Like his face got smaller but the head stayed the same size