I like the start and it's really good (I dislike our sister very much :O) :D the only problem I have is that I'm in a loop (maybe?) when Mister Everett stops us and talks about his nephew/niece/nibling and when I click continue it loops me back to the same scene lol
I'm looking forward to read more and I hope MC will have more luck soon xD
Yay! Thank you for informing me. I expected this loop to appear unfortunately, Something to do when naming the next scene. Fret not as I am currently reworking it! I unfortunately deleted my initial draft though, but that is alright as hopefully when I update, I will have fixed it, so the loop won't happen and have character customization finished! Thank you again for taking the time to read my IF draft and for commenting!!!
