The game shows potential. The art is kinda cute, the story is very lightweight and more wholesome/comedy focused which is a breath of fresh air, and each character feels unique and charming. I can definitely see myself enjoying a full playthrough once it's finished.
That being said, it needs a lot of development to really shine, as it's on the shorter side on the moment. The progression is very linear and there is little interactivity, although the groundwork for increasing it has been laid so I'm holding my hopes up. It could also do with a heavy revision on grammar and typos, I was constantly finding little mistakes or spaces for improvement. Speaking of writing, Lilith sounds way too cheerful in some parts, specially in the introduction, which contrasts with her appearance: the use of exclamations and chuckles don't make much sense when her sprite never smiles and just looks tired all the time, I think her dialogue should reflect this better, maybe end more sentences with "..." and adding a yawn or two (as her sprite actually does), as well as removing several exclamation marks to make her speak in a more calm manner.
Something else I noticed was a severe lack of music. 90% of my time I spent it in silence, and my volume was not the issue. There is a lack of ambience, with only ocassional quirky tones in very specific comedic moments. This could be either a bug preventing the tracks to be played, or a straight lack of said tracks altogether, but either way it's something that should be noted and fixed.
Another thing I found a little annoying (but this might be just on my end) is the resolution doesn't work well with the mobile version. Most borders are cropped and some character names get cut, showing only the latter half of it. Quests' text gets jumbled around and is hard to read sometimes as well. I wouldn't say my phone's screen is precisely small, but it seemed as if the game was only optimized for bigger resolutions.
All in all, I think this game deserves some time to be polished, as well as enough attention to be on people's radar. It is clearly on early stages of development but current state would make for a fine Demo, should it in the future be locked behind a paywall.