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Mistakes? Typos? Sticky

A topic by sonnet009games created Jan 03, 2018 Views: 703 Replies: 7
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Post them here and I'll make the corrections for the next build.

I think it might of been on purpose , but if not than it is a rather minimal mistake. Near the end where they are reading Bahadur's emancipation document out loud it describes  him and says "...Black hair and of yellow eye" and I think it was suppose to be pluralized and say "eyes" . I apologize if I'm wrong, and other than that the writing and the story itself has been flawless.

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The market has long since closed for the day, and there doesn't seem to be any patrols.

Should be "don't"

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That sentence is fine because making it "there don't seem to be" is not right. "Doesn't" being there is perfectly fine

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No, it's not.  The subject is patrols (plural) so it's don't not doesn't (if the subject were patrol (singular) then doesn't would be correct).

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I believe I found an error, when Royo is taking MC to her room she states "This is you, Lady MC." I think you should be yours? I could be wrong...

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Right after MC and Bahadur decided to stay in Anisa's house: "Is is just you, MC? Where's Bahadur?" - must be "it" i think


In the prison, when three damaged guards threaten Bahadur with a truth serum: "Bahadur bends his head to apologise once more" - must be "z"

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the spelling of apologise alters depending on your use of the British spelling or the United States spelling of the word