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Anyway, it's a neat concept. I liked the poems but since the game relies heavily on reading them, I would've made the texts easier to read. I had to look at the floor to read them without squinting. I think making the text white with a black outline would fix the problem. I've also played a lot of jam games where you're a tiny character jumping on huge maps and such and all of them were such a NIGHTMARE to parkour around, I'm super glad it isn't the case here.